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A former slave aboard Captain Snow's submarine. She managed to escape and washed ashore Ruin Island, where the Burillas adopted her. She works as a waitress in their inn, until she meets Blitz and gets thrown into the quest to keep the [[TheBigBad Raven]] from being revived.

She becomes the unofficial leader in [[GottaCatchThemAll the search for the heirs]], having a vaguely defined connection to Dragonfly and all the charisma necessary to keep the team together. Internally however she's prone to self-loathing, feeling responsible for many of the terrible things that she's seen throughout her life, notably supposedly abandoning her only friend Uru aboard Snow's sub.

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A former slave aboard Captain Snow's submarine. She submarine, she managed to escape and washed ashore on the Ruin Island, where the Burillas adopted her. She At the beginning of the story, Credenza works as a waitress in their inn, until she meets Blitz and gets thrown stumbles into the quest to keep the [[TheBigBad Raven]] from being revived.

She becomes the unofficial leader in [[GottaCatchThemAll the search for the heirs]], having a vaguely defined connection to Dragonfly and all the charisma necessary to keep the team together. Internally however Internally, however, she's prone to self-loathing, feeling responsible for many of the terrible things that she's seen throughout her life, notably supposedly abandoning her only friend Uru aboard on Snow's sub.sub. [[spoiler: As we learn later, this was actually a HeroicSacrifice on his part, and he survived]].



* AnimalMotifs: [[spoiler:Her soul has dragonfly wings.]]
* ActionSurvivor: Not a fighter as such, but quick on her feet, lucky and well-liked (so people help her).

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%% too subtle? * AnimalMotifs: [[spoiler:Her soul has dragonfly wings.]]
* ActionSurvivor: Not No experience as a fighter as such, whatsoever, but quick on her feet, lucky and well-liked (so people help her).



* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Compassionate and unwilling to let evil stand, Credenza has brought many a wounded wild animal home, which Paolin isn't happy about. Then again, since her introduction to the story is dragging a castaway (Blitz) to safety, this is why we have a happy ending. Credenza's determined helpfulness earns her Blitz's UndyingLoyalty and Raven's (albeit initially begrudging) respect. It's also why [[spoiler:Dragonfly entrusts her with both Tin Can Turtle's soul and the plot]]

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* AllLovingHero: Not to the stupid levels, but she genuinely believes in her fellow man. Except captain Snow.
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Compassionate and unwilling to let evil stand, Credenza has brought many a wounded wild animal home, which Paolin isn't happy about. Then again, since her Her [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduction to the story story]] is dragging a castaway (Blitz) to safety, this is why we have a happy ending. safety. Credenza's determined helpfulness earns her Blitz's UndyingLoyalty and Raven's (albeit initially (initially begrudging) respect. It's also why [[spoiler:Dragonfly entrusts her with both Tin Can Turtle's soul and the plot]]



* CloudcuckoolandersMinder: To Blitz. She's generally the voice of reason in the team.
* DamselOutOfDistress: Frequently, she's very capable of holding her own.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler:Her childhood was spent as an abused slave on one of Snow's ships. Her home town was one of many Snow razed.]]

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* CloudcuckoolandersMinder: To Blitz. She's generally the voice of reason in the team.
[[RagtagBunchOfMisfits team composed of]] a brain-damaged {{Cloudcuckoolander}}, a grumpy spirit with NoSocialSkills, a FoolishSiblingResponsibleSibling pair of half-weresharks, and their assorted friends.
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* DamselOutOfDistress: Frequently, she's very capable of holding her own.
own. %%examples?
* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler:Her home town was one of many Snow razed. She spent a good portion of her childhood was spent as an abused slave on one of Snow's ships. Her home town was one of many Snow razed.ships and only managed to escape when Uru threw her overboard.]]



* TheHero: She sort of stumbles into saving the world quest by rescuing a random shipwrecked guy.
* HeroicBSOD: When she first learns of her [[spoiler:Dream Walking ability]], starting [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1087 here]].
* MagneticHero: As Snow notes, Credenza effortlessly gains the loyalty and friendship of others, which makes her very dangerous.
** Book 10 makes this abundantly clear once TheCavalry arrives.
* TheMcCoy: Not to the stupid levels, but she genuinely believes in her fellow man. Except captain Snow.

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* GirlNextDoor: While pretty much uninterested in clothes and romance, she's the emotionally mature advisor to Alice, caretaker to Blitz, does the housework on the sub and admits to Deliza that after travelling with guys for so long, it's nice to have some girl talk once in a while. Credenza is not afraid to get her hands dirty, will whack a bad guy with a stick if they're threatening her friends, and doesn't seem to think in "tomboy/girly" terms, at least not about herself.
* TheHero: She sort of stumbles into saving the world quest by rescuing a random shipwrecked guy.
* HeroicBSOD: When she first learns
guy. She finishes said quest by [[spoiler: winning a BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind while an impressive army of her [[spoiler:Dream Walking ability]], starting [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1087 here]].
friends and followers battles the bad guy army in the physical world]].
* MagneticHero: As Snow notes, Credenza effortlessly gains the loyalty and friendship of others, which makes her very dangerous.
** Book 10 makes this abundantly clear once TheCavalry arrives.
* TheMcCoy: Not to the stupid levels, but she genuinely believes in her fellow man. Except captain Snow.
others.



* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: If Credenza doesn't smile at least once in a day, [[http://thesilvertophat.deviantart.com/art/Arch-5-pg-135-101046364 something is wrong]].
** While interrogating Knull in book two, she goes nuts at the suggestion that Snow is alive. Unfortunately, Knull is telling the truth.



* ShutUpKiss: To calm Raven down after some particularly crazy shenanigans [[http://thesilvertophat.deviantart.com/art/Arch-5-pg-119-91619702 here]]
* StrongFamilyResemblance: She looks a lot like her parents. Some speculate that [[spoiler:Dragonfly and/or Olivia]] counts as well.

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* ShutUpKiss: To calm Raven down after some particularly crazy shenanigans [[http://thesilvertophat.deviantart.com/art/Arch-5-pg-119-91619702 here]]
SlaveBrand: [[spoiler: On her arm]], left over from when she was on Snow's ship.
* StrongFamilyResemblance: She looks a lot like her parents. Some speculate that [[spoiler:Dragonfly and/or Olivia]] counts as well. %%that will need rewording



* TrueCompanions: She has a knack for collecting friends.
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: The tomboy to Alice's girly.

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-->'''Raven:''' What makes that woman think she can order us around like that?\\
'''Blitz:''' The way we always do what she says.
* TragicKeepsake: Credenza's skull hair tie doesn't seem like something she's buy for herself, so it's a bit odd that she kind of panics when she loses it and is relieved after Blitz finds it. Then Credenza explains the hairtie was a gift from Uru, when they were both slaves on Snow's [[SubmarinePirates sub]] after the captain burned her home town and killed her parents, and explains how much she misses him.
* TrueCompanions: She has She's the center of a knack RagTagBunchOfMisfits who would gladly give their lives for collecting friends.
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: The tomboy
her - Credenza, in turn, is a loving TeamMom to Alice's girly.all her boys.



A young man with one eye and amnesia ([[DemonicPossession among other problems]]) who washed ashore Ruin Island. Initially untamed and untrusting, he eventually calmed down after Credenza befriended him and gave him a name. She quickly discovers that Blitz's amnesia is the result of a fudged possession attempt by an evil Raven spirit. [[spoiler: His former self stabbed his eye to stop the Raven from taking control of his body, resulting in his mind being split in two; childish wild Blitz, and cold calculating Raven. Blitz and Raven would eventually become separated, but the damage done to his mind remained.]]

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A young man with one eye and amnesia ([[DemonicPossession among other problems]]) who washed ashore Ruin Island. Initially untamed and untrusting, he eventually calmed down after Credenza befriended him and gave him a name. She quickly discovers that Blitz's amnesia is the result of a fudged possession attempt by an evil Raven spirit. [[spoiler: His former self stabbed his eye to stop the Raven from taking control of his body, resulting which resulted in his mind being getting split in two; childish wild Blitz, and cold calculating Raven. Blitz and Raven would eventually become separated, but the damage done to his mind remained.]]



* AMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Blitz's childish demeanor and mood-swinging tendencies apparently do not make for a pleasant mental landscape. [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=778 Vaniji Ralo finds out the hard way.]]
** Raven then Lampshades how dangerous Blitz's mind can be. And he would know, since he's the raven who broke said mind, or rather the raven who got broken by it. The breaking was mutual. And the shards are still there, Blitz just isn't conscious of them, which means his mind is a terrible thing to read.
* AmnesiacDissonance: Spelled out in chapter one - he used to be cold and distant during his time on Sin's sub, in stark contrast to the childish happy-go-lucky idiot Credenza finds. This is caused by the LossOfIdentity problem - Anthony, the original brooding loner, simply isn't there anymore.
* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: See his character quote? He says variations on that a lot. Credenza even has to make sure he doesn't accidentally steal anything he takes a fancy to.
* BewareTheNiceOnes / BewareTheSillyOnes: Make no mistake, you hurt one of Blitz's friends, and you will regret it. If you live long enough.
* CloudCuckooLander: In case the page quote wasn't enough to go off of. He is prone to drawing childish scribbles on windows after breathing on them, playing pretend, and getting lost in his pursuits of something shiny.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He is quite capable in a fight when things get desperate. At first he would trade places with [[SuperpoweredEvilSide Raven]] most of the time, but he doesn't need him for everything.

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* AlternateIdentityAmnesia: Blitz doesn't consciously remember being Anthony (his dreaming self and mind readers can access these memories), and, while he's aware of everything Raven does, he's not always able to stop him.
* AMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Blitz's childish demeanor and mood-swinging tendencies apparently do not make for a pleasant mental landscape. [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=778 Vaniji Ralo finds out the hard way.]]
landscape, or possibly it's all those jagged shards of Anthony's memories left over he doesn't know about. %%quote? ** Raven then Lampshades how dangerous Blitz's mind can be. And he would know, since he's the raven who broke said mind, or rather the raven who got broken by it. The breaking was mutual. And the shards are still there, Blitz just isn't conscious of them, which means his mind is a terrible thing to read.
it.
%% not really this trope, delete
* AmnesiacDissonance: Spelled out in chapter one - he used to be cold and distant during his time on Sin's sub, in stark contrast to the childish happy-go-lucky idiot Credenza finds. This is caused by the LossOfIdentity problem - Anthony, the original brooding loner, simply isn't there anymore.
* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: See his character quote? He says variations on that a lot. Credenza even has to make sure keep an eye on him so he doesn't accidentally steal anything he takes a fancy to.
* BewareTheNiceOnes / BewareTheSillyOnes: Make no mistake, you hurt one of Blitz's friends, and you will regret it. If you live long enough. \n [[spoiler: This brain-damaged young man is a {{Weredragon}}, incidentally. But even before he discovers that, he's a force to be reckoned with.]] Also, all the shards of his broken mind are still there, and they're ''[[AMindIsATerribleThingToRead sharp]]''. Vaniji finds that out the hard way.
* CloudCuckooLander: In case the page quote wasn't enough to go off of. He is Body of a grown man, mind of a five-year-old boy. He's prone to drawing childish scribbles on windows after breathing on them, playing pretend, and getting lost in his pursuits of something shiny.
shiny things.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He is quite Quite capable in a fight when things get desperate. At first he would trade places with [[SuperpoweredEvilSide Raven]] most when that sort of the time, thing was needed, but he can do very well on his own.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: His life as Anthony, especially towards the end. Anthony grew up in a rich and snobby family and fell in love with a girl they deemed beneath him. [[spoiler: He married her and moved out, but she DiedInChildbirth. Anthony [[DespairEventHorizon broke down completely]]. It took him a couple of years to get his act together, during which the [[ImpoverishedPatrician financial problems he already had got so dire]] he needed to get a job, right now, so he went to the sea. And then he got framed for a murder his captain commited, was marooned, tempted by a raven, but changed his mind in the middle of possession and ''stabbed the eye out'', effectively killing himself, creating the person later named Blitz and starting Raven's HumanityEnsues.]] Blitz
doesn't need him for everything.consciously remember any of that, but sometimes has {{Flashback Nightmare}}s he finds sad and confusing.



* HiddenDepths: Blitz may be a brain-damaged idiot, but his innocence lends itself well to looking after others, and his love for Credenza is more than blind loyalty. See {{Foreshadowing}} entry on the main page. He also tends to use quite sophisticated language, left over from Anthony. Of course, he follows it with BuffySpeak like:

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* HiddenDepths: Blitz may be a [[KindheartedSimpleton brain-damaged idiot, but his innocence lends itself well to looking after others, others]], and his love for Credenza is more than blind loyalty. See {{Foreshadowing}} entry on the main page.loyalty. He also tends to use quite sophisticated language, left over from Anthony. Of course, he follows it with BuffySpeak like:



* HeroicWillpower: He can actually resist Raven. It's not easy, but he can.
* LossOfIdentity: Zigzagged. Being possessed by a lurker raven would've ensured his original mind taking a backseat forever. This never happened, but the original owner of the body is still long gone. The original person, Anthony, was much, much more like ''Raven'' in personality. That is [[ByronicHero brooding and rather smart]].
* [[spoiler: TheLostLenore: Chesska, Anthony's wife who died after giving birth to their child. He broke down completely after that. It took him a couple of years to get his act together, upon which the financial problems he already had got so dire Anthony needed to go to the sea and earn money. And then he got framed for a murder his captain commited, was marooned, possessed by a raven, but changed his mind and ''stabbed the eye out'', effectively killing himself, creating the person later named Blitz and starting Raven's HumanityEnsues.]]
* ManChild: Body of a grown man, mind of a five-year-old-boy. Case in point: [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=679 Laundry Pants Man]].

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* HeroicWillpower: He can actually resist Raven. It's not easy, but he can.
can. There are also several instances in the story where it seems like he's dead... and he comes back (as BigDamnHeroes, no less) triumphantly.
* LossOfIdentity: Zigzagged. Being Normally, being possessed by a lurker raven would've ensured his the original mind taking a backseat forever. This never happened, backseat, but not being completely shattered. Except the original owner of the body is still long gone. The original person, body, Anthony, [[spoiler: changed his mind in the middle of possession when he understood what he was losing and he tugged back]], causing both him and the raven spirit to break. For all practical purposes, Anthony is gone. People who knew him tend to be confused by Blitz at first, but they're quick to notice how differently he acts, sees the world and holds himself. Incidentally, Anthony was much, much more like ''Raven'' in personality. That is personality, [[ByronicHero brooding brooding, self-assured and rather smart]].
smart]].
* [[spoiler: TheLostLenore: For Anthony, Chesska, Anthony's his wife who died after giving birth to their child. He broke down completely after that. It took him a couple of years to get his act together, upon which the financial problems he already had got so dire Anthony needed to go to the sea and earn money. And then he got framed for a murder his captain commited, was marooned, possessed by a raven, but changed his mind and ''stabbed the eye out'', effectively killing himself, creating the person later named Blitz and starting Raven's HumanityEnsues.DiedInChildbirth.]]
* ManChild: Body Blitz has a body of a grown man, and a mind of a five-year-old-boy. Case in point: [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=679 Laundry Pants Man]].Man. He can't read (according to WordOfGod, he learns later), doesn't always know how to [[BuffySpeak express himself clearly]], plays a lot and generally sees the world in a simplified, childish ways. Then again, it's not his fault.



* [[spoiler: OnlyMostlyDead]]: In chapter 10, but [[spoiler: saved by '''Snow''' giving up the mechanical arm thing to him]].
* [[spoiler: OurDragonsAreDifferent]]
* TalkativeLoon: He doesn't have much of a filter, courtesy of the brain damage.

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* [[spoiler: OnlyMostlyDead]]: In chapter book 10, but [[spoiler: saved by '''Snow''' giving up the mechanical arm thing to him]].
*
him]]. %%elaborate?
%% not character trope*
[[spoiler: OurDragonsAreDifferent]]
* ScarsAreForever Blitz's entire torso is covered in scars that date back to the very first page, when he washed up on the beach all cut up. They remain visible for the entire story.
* TalkativeLoon: He doesn't have much of a filter, courtesy of the brain damage.
damage. %%quote?
* [[spoiler: {{Weredragon}}]]



A Raven spirit, one of many. Originally his mission was to inhabit the minds of normal people and influence them into awakening the Great Raven trapped beneath the Archipelago. Unfortunately his last attempt didn't go so well, and he became one of two personalities inhabiting Blitz's body. Originally an enemy bent on killing Credenza, he joined her side after the other Ravens turned on him, seeing him as useless in his current state.

A perpetually confused individual, since his unique circumstances make him vulnerable to emotions and feelings outside of his programming as a spirit. Raven tends to exert his frustrations by being grumpy. He becomes very protective of Blitz in a brotherly way. [[spoiler: After eventually separating from Blitz, he would begin to develop his own physical body.]]

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A Raven spirit, one of many. Originally his mission was to inhabit possess the minds of normal people and influence use them into to the goal of awakening the Great Raven trapped beneath the Archipelago. Unfortunately Unfortunately, his last attempt didn't go so well, and he became one of two personalities inhabiting Blitz's body. Originally an enemy bent on killing Credenza, causing chaos, he [[MistreatmentInducedBetrayal joined her Credenza's side after the other Ravens turned on him, seeing him as useless in his current state.

state]].

A perpetually confused individual, since his unique circumstances make him vulnerable to emotions and feelings outside of his programming as a spirit. Raven tends to exert his frustrations by being grumpy. He Over the course of the story, he learns to love and becomes very protective of Blitz in a brotherly way, and of Credenza, in a romantic way. [[spoiler: After eventually separating from Blitz, he would begin to develop his own develops a physical body.]]body of his own.]]



* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: One of the first signs of his developing love for Credenza - he's willing to grind their expedition to the underworld to a complete halt just to make sure she's okay.

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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: One of the first signs of his developing emotionality and love for Credenza - he's willing to grind their expedition to the underworld to a complete halt just to make sure she's okay. okay.



* BlueOniRedOni: Despite his flares of temper, he is the voice of a slightly cynical reason to Credenza's [[TheMcCoy idealist]].
* [[spoiler:BroughtDownToBadass: Eventually, he gains a human body, but loses his raven magic, aside from his wings. He is still a reliable asset as a fighter.]]

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* BerserkButton: Do NOT hurt Credenza. And it's not wise to hurt Blitz, either.
%% ?
* BlueOniRedOni: Despite his flares of temper, he is the voice of a slightly cynical reason to Credenza's [[TheMcCoy idealist]].
* [[spoiler:BroughtDownToBadass: Eventually, he gains a human body, but loses his raven magic, aside from his the wings. He is He's still a reliable asset as a fighter.]]



* TheComicallySerious: On occasion. Mostly because he has no idea how humans work, really.

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* TheComicallySerious: On occasion. Mostly because Especially in the first couple of books, when he has no idea how humans work, really.really, like when he's wearing an adorably childish bib and complaining about Credenza not paying attention to him. Less comical after settling into his personhood, but still has his moments.



* TheCynic: Begins as one, a thoroughly miserable, snarky pessimist who hates humans. He [[TookALevelInIdealism gradually grows out of it]].



* TheCynic: Miserable and snarky pessimist. He gradually grows out of it.
* {{Deuteragonist}}: He undergoes the most CharacterDevelopment of the main characters, and it has the most impact on the plot. [[spoiler: During the final battle, he leads the attack on Snow's physical form during Credenza's BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind with Snow.]]

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* TheCynic: Miserable DeadpanSnarker: Always snarky, but less and snarky pessimist. He gradually grows out less bellingerently over the course of it.
the story.
-->'''Raven''' (after giving Clair a piggy-back ride): Ow. Who needs a spine when you have love?
* {{Deuteragonist}}: He undergoes the most CharacterDevelopment of the main characters, and it has the most impact on the plot. [[spoiler: During the final battle, he leads the attack on Snow's physical form during Credenza's while Credenza wages a BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind with Snow.]]



* FakeDefector: During the events of chapter nine, he willingly turns himself in to the Great Raven's army to ransom for Credenza. He gives a pretty convincing speech about [[spoiler:the futility of his attempts to be human]], and just when it seems like he's ready to give everyone else up so Credenza can live... he changes his mind at the last moment. [[spoiler:Cue dragonfire on the army.]]

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* FakeDefector: During the events of chapter book nine, he willingly turns himself in to the Great Raven's army to ransom for Credenza. He gives a pretty convincing speech about [[spoiler:the futility of his attempts to be human]], and just when it seems like he's ready to give everyone else up so Credenza can live... he changes his mind at the last moment. [[spoiler:Cue dragonfire on the army.]]]] %%more detail, quote



* GoodAngelBadAngel: He appears as a winged apparition over Blitz's shoulder when not in control, and Blitz would do likewise. [[spoiler: Stops doing this after they separated, clearly.]]
* TheHeartless: Originally, he was created with a broken heart, only capable of one emotion - hate. After the heart gets mended and he grows a soul, it still takes him a while to learn other emotions.
* HeelFaceTurn: When Snow and the other Ravens turn on him in chapter two, he vows vengeance out of spite. He eventually becomes attached to Credenza and the others and develops more selfless reasons for fighting against Snow.
* HomeSweetHome: [[http://thesilvertophat.deviantart.com/art/Arch-5-pg-119-91619702 Here]], stopped thanks to a ShutUpKiss from [[LoveInterest Credenza]].
* HumanityEnsues: Early on, his broken raven heart is fixed by Credenza, giving him a human soul. [[spoiler: Later, he gets a (mostly) human body to go with it.]]
* HumanityIsInfectious: Credenza mending his heart with the Soul Key and his extended time interacting with people instead of controlling them triggers a change in him. He starts behaving more like a person and begins to develop emotions. Its all but stated that his original host was the template for the new personality. [[spoiler:Cassie points out that the curls his fingers when's he's afraid just like Anthony used to.]]
* KnightInSourArmour: He has a tendency to moan and complain along the way, but ultimately he'll be doing good.
* TheLancer: Credenza's closest ally and a direct contrast to her.
** [[MistreatmentInducedBetrayal Help Face Turn]]: Credenza helping Blitz (and him by extension) is what sets off his transition. Plus, Snow trying to kill him for becoming independent sure didn't help.
** MookFaceTurn: Was just another raven spirit before his accident with Blitz and subsequent siding with Credenza. Adding to this, WordOfGod stated that Raven ranked ''really'' low compared to his fellow raven spirits - being nothing more than an intelligent mind-probe.
* [[spoiler:LotusEaterMachine: Towards the climax of the final encounter with Snow, everyone gets trapped in their own dreams. Raven's show him in a mundane but blissful domestic life together with Credenza. He's the only one unaware of this being a dream and indeed thinks their adventures were one.]]
* LuminescentBlush: Ends up having quite of few of these, courtesy of Credenza teasing him.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Once he develops the conscience to back it up, he is very remorseful for what he did to Blitz.
* NoSocialSkills: Being born a Spirit, essentially a living AI, it's to be expected. [[FishOutOfWater he is not familiar with humans emotions, way of thinking and many other human things]].
** Not that he likes it.
%% * IJustWantToHaveFriends: Becomes very wary of being left behind or forsaken because of his nature as a spawn of the Raven.

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* GoodAngelBadAngel: He appears as a winged apparition ghost-like wisp with MessyHair over Blitz's shoulder when not in control, and Blitz would do does likewise. [[spoiler: Stops doing this after Until they separated, clearly.get separated.]]
* TheHeartless: Originally, he was created with GrewBeyondTheirProgramming: Originally a broken heart, only capable of one emotion - hate. After MindProbe for {{brainwashing}} people into {{mook}}s, finishes the heart gets mended story as a proper person and he grows a soul, it still takes him a while hero, to learn other emotions.boot.
* HeelFaceTurn: When Snow and the other Ravens turn on him in chapter book two, he [[MistreatmentInducedBetrayal vows vengeance out of spite.spite]]. He eventually becomes attached to Credenza and the others and develops more selfless reasons for fighting against Snow.
** MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: Credenza helping Blitz (and him by extension), combined with Snow trying to kill him for becoming independent, is the last straw that makes him switch loyalties.
** MookFaceTurn: Was just another raven spirit before his accident with Blitz and subsequent siding with Credenza. Adding to this, WordOfGod stated that Raven ranked ''really'' low compared to his fellow raven spirits - being nothing more than an intelligent mind-probe.
%% not character trope, move
* HomeSweetHome: [[http://thesilvertophat.deviantart.com/art/Arch-5-pg-119-91619702 Here]], stopped thanks to a ShutUpKiss from [[LoveInterest Credenza]].
* HumanityEnsues: Early on, his broken raven heart is fixed by Credenza, giving him a human functional soul. [[spoiler: Later, he gets a (mostly) human body to go with it.]]
]] %%does he gain the other arm eventually? check
* HumanityIsInfectious: Credenza mending his heart with the Soul Key and his extended being forced to time interacting interact with people instead of controlling them triggers a change in him. He gradually starts behaving more like a person and begins to develop person, including emotions. Its all but stated that his original host was the template for the new personality. [[spoiler:Cassie points out that the curls his fingers when's he's afraid just like Anthony used to.]]
* KnightInSourArmour: He has a tendency to moan and complain along the way, but ultimately he'll be doing good.
* TheLancer: Credenza's closest ally and a direct contrast to her.
** [[MistreatmentInducedBetrayal Help Face Turn]]: Credenza helping Blitz (and him by extension) is what sets off his transition. Plus, Snow trying to kill him for becoming independent sure didn't help.
** MookFaceTurn: Was just another raven spirit before his accident with Blitz and subsequent siding with Credenza. Adding to this, WordOfGod stated that Raven ranked ''really'' low compared to his fellow raven spirits - being nothing more than an intelligent mind-probe.
* [[spoiler:LotusEaterMachine:
HumbleGoal: [[spoiler: Towards the climax of the final encounter with Snow, everyone gets [[LotusEaterMachine trapped in their own dreams. dreams]]. Raven's show him is being a humble engineer in a mundane but blissful domestic life together what's implied to be the {{precursor}} civilisation, with Credenza.Credenza as his wife. He's the only one unaware of this being a dream and indeed thinks their adventures were one.]]
* InsecureLoveInterest: When he realises he's in love with Credenza. Leaving tiny gifts for her all over the sub only causes him more angst. Later on, after [[spoiler: Uru is changed back and]] joins the group, Raven is torn between jealousy and [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy trying to remove himself from the picture]]. The other guy then takes him aside and calmly explains there was never anything romantic between him and Credenza. %% add that quote about her liking living things and him unable to give her those
* KnightInSourArmour: Grows into this. He keeps the tendency to complain and snark along the way, but ultimately he'll be doing good.
* TheLancer: Credenza's closest ally and a direct contrast to her. %%explain?
* LuminescentBlush: Ends up having quite of few of these, courtesy of After growing a body, when Credenza is teasing him.
him or just being herself.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Once he develops the conscience to back it up, he is a conscience, it's a pretty strong one. He's very remorseful for what he did to Blitz.
* NoSocialSkills: Being born created as a Spirit, essentially a living AI, it's [[ArtificialIntelligence spirit]], his original purpose was an auxilliary to be expected. [[FishOutOfWater he is not familiar with humans emotions, way the Great Raven. Since the Great Raven had been an antivirus on a spaceship, human emotions and ways of thinking and many other human things]].
** Not that he likes it.
were not the priority here.
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* PropheticFallacy: His gift from Dragonfly was a vague but unpleasant piece of advice: [[spoiler: you will have to choose between the one you love and the one who made you. You will choose the latter.]] And he doesn't [[SadisticChoice exactly]] [[HeroicBSOD like]] [[DeathSeeker it]].
** In the end, though, the choice turns out the opposite of sadistic: [[spoiler: it's how Raven is to break out of the LotusEaterMachine, by choosing the real Credenza (who made him the person he is) over the perfect illusion of her (to whom he's married in the dream).]]

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%% is this a character trope? move out * PropheticFallacy: His gift from Dragonfly was a vague but unpleasant piece of advice: [[spoiler: you will have to choose between the one you love and the one who made you. You will choose the latter.]] And he doesn't [[SadisticChoice exactly]] [[HeroicBSOD like]] [[DeathSeeker it]].
it]].** In the end, though, the choice turns out the opposite of sadistic: [[spoiler: it's how Raven is to break out of the LotusEaterMachine, by choosing the real Credenza (who made him the person he is) over the perfect illusion of her (to whom he's married in the dream).]]]]
* ReverseGrip: Raven's prefered method of holding a knife.



* SelfSacrificeScheme: He wants to avoid realizing [[spoiler: Dragonfly's]] [[PropheticFallacy not so clear]] but [[SadisticChoice clearly unpleasant]] prophecy this way. During chapter nine he becomes a borderline DeathSeeker. Credenza doesn't approve.

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* SelfSacrificeScheme: He wants to avoid realizing [[spoiler: Dragonfly's]] Dragonfly's [[PropheticFallacy not so clear]] but [[SadisticChoice clearly unpleasant]] prophecy this way. During chapter nine he becomes a borderline DeathSeeker. Credenza doesn't approve. approve.
* SharingABody: For a while, he's the sub-letter in Blitz's body, which he occasionally takes over. Later [[spoiler: they get separated by the after-effects Credenza's magic overload]].
* SourSupporter: For quite some time, while he's still not understanding these human ideas like loyalty or saving the world and only working with the group to bring down those who wronged him.



* WhatIsThisFeeling: Having never felt emotion for most of his existence, he isn't sure how to handle them. Doubly so when he falls in love.
* WingedHumanoid: Appears as a winged apparition when not possessing Blitz. [[spoiler: Once he gains his own body, he keeps his wings, but one is magical, the other physical.]]

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* WhatIsThisFeeling: Having never felt emotion for most of his existence, he isn't sure it takes him quite some frantic figuring out to learn how to handle them. Doubly so when he falls in love.
* WingedHumanoid: Appears as a winged apparition when not possessing Blitz. [[spoiler: Once he gains his own body, he keeps his wings, body it has one physical wing and one magical wing. He can fly short distances, but one is magical, the other physical.]]
rarely does.]]

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* AnAxeToGrind: During the abordage of Paollo's sub, because it amused the author.
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%% * Broken Bird

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** TakingYouWithMe: ...dragging Han down with her.



%% * LoveMakes YouEvil: Or possibly just [[spoiler: LoveMakesYouC razy]].

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%% * LoveMakes YouEvil: LoveMakesYouEvil: Or possibly just [[spoiler: LoveMakesYouC razy]].



* [[spoiler:SorryThatImDying: Apologizes to Knull immediately before her suicide.]]

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* [[spoiler:SorryThatImDying: Apologizes SorryThatImDying: [[spoiler:Apologizes to Knull immediately before her suicide.]]



* UsedToBeASweetKid: [[spoiler: In her backstory as a young nun. She was a kind girl, a philosopher, a poet and considered the most likely to become Tabitha's successor. Then she was seduced (by the shapeshifter Han) and had her heart broken, upon which she tried to commit suicide - and the ravens came with a DealWithTheDevil. So she gave up her emotions and became one of the bad guys.]]

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* TakingYouWithMe: Drags Han off the cliff with her.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: [[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In her backstory as a young nun. She was a kind girl, a philosopher, a poet and considered the most likely to become Tabitha's successor. Then she was seduced (by the shapeshifter Han) and had her heart broken, upon which she tried to commit suicide - and the ravens came with a DealWithTheDevil. So she gave up her emotions and became one of the bad guys.]]

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* BerserkButton: Do NOT hurt Credenza. And it's not wise to hurt Blitz, either.



* BerserkButton: Do NOT harm his girlfriend, do NOT threaten to do so, and avoid hurting the ones he cares about in general.



* AntiVillain: Arguably.

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%% * AntiVillain: Anti Villain: Arguably.



* BrokenBird
* BerserkButton: [[spoiler: First, she doesn't take well to the Listing of Names refusing to join her side. And second, when she finally finds out the truth behind Corveaux...]]
* TheDragon: Well, the closest thing Snow allows.
* [[spoiler:DrivenToSuicide: Plunges off a cliff.]]
** [[spoiler:TakingYouWithMe: ...dragging Han down with her.]]

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%% Doesn't explain what the reaction is.
* BerserkButton: Berserk Button: [[spoiler: First, she doesn't take well to the Listing of Names refusing to join her side. And second, when she finally finds out the truth behind Corveaux...]]
%% * TheDragon: The Dragon: Well, the closest thing Snow allows.
* [[spoiler:DrivenToSuicide: DrivenToSuicide: Plunges off a cliff.]]
cliff.
** [[spoiler:TakingYouWithMe: ...TakingYouWithMe: ...dragging Han down with her.]]



* [[spoiler:FaceHeelTurn: The former Reader of the Listing of Names.]]
* [[spoiler:GoMadFromTheRevelation: Learning Han and Corveau are the same person... does not do good things for her [[AxeCrazy sanity]].]]
* [[spoiler:LoveMakesYouEvil]]: Or possibly just [[spoiler: LoveMakesYouCrazy]].
* [[spoiler:OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Goes ''[[BerserkButton ballistic]]'' when she learns of Han's role in her backstory.]]

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* [[spoiler:FaceHeelTurn: FaceHeelTurn: The former Reader of the Listing of Names.]]
Names.
* [[spoiler:GoMadFromTheRevelation: GoMadFromTheRevelation: Learning Han and Corveau are the same person... does not do good things for her [[AxeCrazy sanity]].]]
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LoveMakesYouC razy]].
* [[spoiler:OOCIsSeriousBusiness: OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Goes ''[[BerserkButton ballistic]]'' ''ballistic'' when she learns of Han's role in her backstory.]]



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* BenevolentAI

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* NotSoImaginaryFriend

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%% * NotSoImaginaryFriend



* [[spoiler: RobotBuddy: After the ship is destroyed, he gets a small robot body.]]
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* PluckyGirl: The optimist between GrumpyBear Raven and nervous, insecure Tuff. She stumbles into adventures and pulls herself back out with a little help of her friends.

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* PluckyGirl: The optimist between GrumpyBear SourSupporter Raven and nervous, insecure Tuff. She stumbles into adventures and pulls herself back out with a little help of her friends.



* GrumpyBear: Cynical, grumpy, on occasion TheComicallySerious (like when he's wearing an adorably childish bib and complaining about Credenza not paying attention to him).

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* FriendToAllLivingThings: Takes care of a large flock of different kinds of birds, along with a jabberwock named Charlie [[spoiler:who's actually Uru under a BalefulPolymorph]].

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* FriendToAllLivingThings: Takes care of a large flock of different kinds of birds, along with a jabberwock named Charlie [[spoiler:who's actually Uru under a BalefulPolymorph]].ForcedTransformation]].



* BalefulPolymorph: [[spoiler:As Charlie, Kor's pet]]. Happened to him because [[PlayingWithSyringes Snow wanted to experiment with transformatory magic]].


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* ForcedTransformation: [[spoiler:As Charlie, Kor's pet]]. Happened to him because [[PlayingWithSyringes Snow wanted to experiment with transformatory magic]].
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* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler:Made by Dragonfly, as a part of the mechanism to trap the Raven. UpToEleven after hijacking parts of Benjamin's ship.]]

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* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler:Made by Dragonfly, as a part of the mechanism to trap the Raven. UpToEleven Exaggerated after hijacking parts of Benjamin's ship.]]
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* LifeWillKillYou: He originally died of brain tumor. Then again, he didn't ''stay'' dead...

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-->''...a beggar boy with a loud mouth and no friends who was promised the world in exchange for his soul.''

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-->''...-->'''Snow''': ...a beggar boy with a loud mouth and no friends who was promised the world in exchange for his soul.''



** UnwantedHarem: They are also AxCrazy, one of them [[EyeScream like to gouge out people's eyes]], and they all [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking refuse to speak English]]. He even advises Snow to make certain to never get stuck in the same situation.

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** UnwantedHarem: They are also AxCrazy, one of them [[EyeScream like likes to gouge out people's eyes]], and they all [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking refuse to speak English]]. He even advises Snow to make certain to never get stuck in the same situation.situation.
--> Word of advice: If you ever happen to challenge a seagull chieftain to mortal combat, double check to see if 'eerily delighted widows' are part of your winnings!



-->''Haask, vi katap'n plaut su froos! Can't I leave you alone for five minutes without you devouring someone important?''

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-->''Haask, -->Haask, vi katap'n plaut su froos! Can't I leave you alone for five minutes without you devouring someone important?''important?



-->''That's it! I'm as loyal a servant as anyone could ask for! But there is a time to say: 'That's [[spoiler:a giant monster]]. Retreat and try again later.'''

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-->''That's -->That's it! I'm as loyal a servant as anyone could ask for! But there is a time to say: 'That's That's [[spoiler:a giant monster]]. Retreat and try again later.'''

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* [[spoiler: TheSpeechless: In the epilogue, because of a throat injury sustained in the final battle. He uses Archipelagian sign language ([[TranslationConvention rendered as ASL]]) to speak with Credenza and Tusura.]]



* PlayingPictionary: Listy is a book, hence, mute, but communicates by shapeshifting.


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* AmplifierArtifact: Paollo gives her the Soul Key necklace in their first shared vision (back in book 2) and she wears it for the rest of the story (see her portrait).

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* AmplifierArtifact: Paollo gives her the Soul Key necklace in their first shared vision (back in book 2) and she wears it for the rest of the story (see her portrait). It also detects evil magic. And fixes broken hearts, without the wielder even having to do anything.



* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: Credenza is a genuine AllLovingHero who tries to find the good in everyone. Everyone except captain Snow.



* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: If Credenza doesn't smile at least once in a day, [[http://thesilvertophat.deviantart.com/art/Arch-5-pg-135-101046364 something is wrong]]].

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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: If Credenza doesn't smile at least once in a day, [[http://thesilvertophat.deviantart.com/art/Arch-5-pg-135-101046364 something is wrong]]].wrong]].
** While interrogating Knull in book two, she goes nuts at the suggestion that Snow is alive. Unfortunately, Knull is telling the truth.



* FlipPersonality: For the first couple of books, while his SharingABody with Raven isn't amicable. Credenza can tell by the shift in demeanour, but sometimes Raven makes the body's tatoos glow magically.



* HiddenDepths: Blitz may be a brain-damaged idiot, but his innocence lends itself well to looking after others, and his love for Credenza is more than blind loyalty. See {{Foreshadowing}} entry on the main page.

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* HiddenDepths: Blitz may be a brain-damaged idiot, but his innocence lends itself well to looking after others, and his love for Credenza is more than blind loyalty. See {{Foreshadowing}} entry on the main page. He also tends to use quite sophisticated language, left over from Anthony. Of course, he follows it with BuffySpeak like:
-->You're gonna faith him to death!
* HeroicWillpower: He can actually resist Raven. It's not easy, but he can.



* CrushBlush: After Raven learns to love, he sometimes blushes when watching Credenza being Credenza.



* TheHeartless: Originally, he was created with a broken heart, only capable of one emotion - hate. After the heart gets mended and he grows a soul, it still takes him a while to learn other emotions.



* AnAxeToGrind: During the abordage of Paollo's sub, because it amused the author.



* BunnyEarsLawyer: For the last time, he ''makes armor'' for a living. But he's really quite good at it.

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* BunnyEarsLawyer: For the last time, he ''makes armor'' for a living. But he's really quite good at it. His job on the crew is AntiMagic, which he's also very good at.
* DealWithTheDevil: By WordOfGod:
--> Basically that in return for working for the Raven, Snow wouldn't kill him. Pretty simple.



* NervousWreck: Ever since dear uncle Adrian murdered his family, most like.

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* NervousWreck: Ever since dear uncle Adrian murdered his family, most like. This is why he (and only he) chants while doing his magic - it calms him down and helps him focus.




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*** Before that, he shapeshifts into [[spoiler: wounded Paollo to trick and stab Tatami]].



* CloudCuckooLander: His guards are used to him wandering off and getting lost.

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* CloudCuckooLander: His guards are used to him wandering off and getting lost. WordOfGod, however, says he's absent-minded and easily distracted because he's always halfway in the dream.



* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Gets lost, falls off things and bumbles in the waking world. TheOmniscient in the dream world.
-->(falling onto a bad guy's head): BY THE POWER OF MY ANTCESTORS I VANQUISH THEE!!!



* FaintingSeer: A variation - Paolo's out like a light when he's ''about'' to have a vision, since his power works in dreams. Afterwards he sometimes needs a bucket of cold water to snap out of it, and says a lot of [[WakingNonSequitur random things]].
-->[[ShoutOut I am the walrus!]]
* FantasyKeepsake: Gives Credenza the Soul Key in their first shared vision.
* GoshDangItToHeck: Doesn't really know any swears.
-->(to [[TheBigBad Snow]]): You son of a salesman!
* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Paollo's soul is one of the purest in the world.




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-->(frustrated by this fact): Darnit, what's the point of being omniscient when no one else is?
* PimpedOutCape: Part of his princely regalia, with little triangles on the fringe and flames going down the back.
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The shaman of Ruin Island, which makes him an important person, at least on the island.

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The shaman witchdoctor of Ruin Island, which makes him an important person, at least on the island.



* Irony: Is afraid of getting MySisterIsOffLimits from Korus and Paolin. Not only are all the Burilia siblings aware of his feelings, Paolin is okay with it, but not until Jan makes the first move.
* TheMedic: His job as the shaman.

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* Irony: FisherKing: It's AllThereInTheManual. Archipelago witchdoctors are magically tied to, and receive their powers, from some bit of geography - a mountain, a forest, or, like in Jan's case, an island. The place shapes them and they shape the place. More practical part of this is a witchdoctor's ability to locate anyone, as long as they're within the witchdoctor's domain (on page, Credenza gets him to find Blitz once, but he can find anybody).
* {{Irony}}:
Is afraid of getting MySisterIsOffLimits from Korus and Paolin. Not only are all the Burilia siblings aware of his feelings, Paolin is okay with it, but not until Jan makes the first move.
* TheMedic: His Part of his job as the shaman.
witchdoctor.



-->''Archipelago'' contains many strong female charactes. Enter Mona, to even things out a bit.\\

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-->''Archipelago'' contains many strong female charactes. Enter Mona, to even things out a bit.\\



!! [[spoiler:Benjamin]]

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!! [[spoiler:Benjamin]]Benjamin



* AFormYoureComfortableWith: The boy form he likes to take is tailored for Clair.

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* AFormYoureComfortableWith: AFormYouAreComfortableWith: The boy form he likes to take is tailored for Clair.
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* NinjaPirateZombieRobot: He checks three of the four boxes: a pirate, zombiefied and robotised by a DealWithTheDevil.
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* EvilIsHammy: He starts the story as a minor bad guy whose propensity for dramatic speeches is reversely proportional to his actual rank in the Raven Army. Grows out of this and becomes a DeadpanSnarker on the side of good.
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* AmplifierArtifact: Receives the Soul Key as her gift from Dragonfly and proceeds to wear it as a necklace for the rest of the story (see her portrait).

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* AmplifierArtifact: Receives Paollo gives her the Soul Key as her gift from Dragonfly and proceeds to wear it as a necklace in their first shared vision (back in book 2) and she wears it for the rest of the story (see her portrait).



* SupernaturalAid: Functions as the giver of it, since in the present day that's all he's really able to do. He gives Credenza [[AmplifierArtifact magic-amplifying necklace]], Raven a prophecy, and Luck brothers the scent of Riley's OneTrueLove and Tuff's full transforming ability.

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* SupernaturalAid: Functions as the giver of it, since in the present day that's all he's really able to do. He gives Credenza [[AmplifierArtifact magic-amplifying necklace]], some amplification of magic, Raven a prophecy, and Luck brothers the scent of Riley's OneTrueLove and Tuff's full transforming ability.
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A former slave aboard Captain Snow's submarine. She managed to escape and washed ashore Ruin Island, where the Burillas adopted her. She works as a waitress in their Inn, until she meets Blitz and gets thrown into the quest to keep the [[TheBigBad Raven]] from being revived.

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A former slave aboard Captain Snow's submarine. She managed to escape and washed ashore Ruin Island, where the Burillas adopted her. She works as a waitress in their Inn, inn, until she meets Blitz and gets thrown into the quest to keep the [[TheBigBad Raven]] from being revived.



* AmplifierArtifact: Receives one as her gift from Dragonfly.
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Her compassion commands that she ''must'' attend to a harmed creature, regardless of the situation. This is what lead to [[spoiler:Dragonfly entrusting her with Tin Can Turtle's soul]], as well as Blitz's loyalty and Raven's (albeit initially begrudging) respect.

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* AmplifierArtifact: Receives one the Soul Key as her gift from Dragonfly.
Dragonfly and proceeds to wear it as a necklace for the rest of the story (see her portrait).
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Her compassion commands that she ''must'' attend Compassionate and unwilling to let evil stand, Credenza has brought many a harmed creature, regardless of wounded wild animal home, which Paolin isn't happy about. Then again, since her introduction to the situation. This story is what lead dragging a castaway (Blitz) to [[spoiler:Dragonfly entrusting safety, this is why we have a happy ending. Credenza's determined helpfulness earns her with Tin Can Turtle's soul]], as well as Blitz's loyalty UndyingLoyalty and Raven's (albeit initially begrudging) respect.respect. It's also why [[spoiler:Dragonfly entrusts her with both Tin Can Turtle's soul and the plot]]



* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler:Her childhood was spent as an abused slave on one of Snow's ships.]]

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* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler:Her childhood was spent as an abused slave on one of Snow's ships. Her home town was one of many Snow razed.]]

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* AmplifierArtifact: Receives one as her gift from Dragonfly.



* SupernaturalAid: Functions as the giver of it, since in the present day that's all he's really able to do. He gives Credenza magical ability, Raven a prophecy, and Luck brothers the scent of Riley's OneTrueLove and Tuff's full transforming ability.

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* SupernaturalAid: Functions as the giver of it, since in the present day that's all he's really able to do. He gives Credenza magical ability, [[AmplifierArtifact magic-amplifying necklace]], Raven a prophecy, and Luck brothers the scent of Riley's OneTrueLove and Tuff's full transforming ability.

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* [[spoiler: DreamWalker: She discovers the power later in the story and it proves instrumental in the finale.]]



--> Please. I live with exactly sixty young, hormonal, adolescent girls. I can smell self-doubt.

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--> Please. -->Oh, please. I live with exactly sixty sixty-five young, hormonal, adolescent girls. I can smell ''smell'' self-doubt.



The [=AI=] of an old ship [[spoiler: buried underneath Anthony's castle.]] He befriends Clair, but never shows himself to the adults of the household.

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The Real name 10-JN - he's the [=AI=] of an old ship [[spoiler: buried underneath Anthony's castle.]] He befriends Clair, but never shows himself to the adults of the household.


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* AFormYoureComfortableWith: The boy form he likes to take is tailored for Clair.


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* [[spoiler: RobotBuddy: After the ship is destroyed, he gets a small robot body.]]

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A half were-shark from Quillotia. Despite growing up relatively sheltered from the world (and his home island's FantasticRacism towards Sharks), Tuff always had the stigma from his parents' MalignedMixedMarriage looming over him. His parent's disappearances finally spurred him to run away from home. [[spoioler: He also stole Mikel's sub. But Mikel forgives him during the story.]] He intended to go alone, but Riley followed him. The two lived a nomadic lifestyle for eight years before meeting Credenza and getting caught up in the search for the Heirs.

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A half were-shark from Quillotia. Despite growing up relatively sheltered from the world (and his home island's FantasticRacism towards Sharks), Tuff always had the stigma from his parents' MalignedMixedMarriage looming over him. His parent's disappearances finally spurred him to run away from home. [[spoioler: [[spoiler: He also stole Mikel's sub. But Mikel forgives him during the story.]] He intended to go alone, but Riley followed him. The two lived a nomadic lifestyle for eight years before meeting Credenza and getting caught up in the search for the Heirs.



* CannotSpitItOut: Was pretty smitten with Credenza during the first couple chapters, but never brought attention to it and it fizzled out. Once he starts falling for Cassie, the problem re-emerges.

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* CannotSpitItOut: Was EmotionallyTongueTied: He has no problem talking to girls about everyday subjects, but whenever he wants tell one he likes her, Tuff panics and blurts out something completely unrelated. He was pretty smitten with Credenza during the first couple of chapters, but this never brought attention to it and it fizzled out. went anywhere. Once he starts falling for Cassie, the problem re-emerges.re-emerges, to the point that in the epilogue they have a proper TwiceShy situation (she thinks he stopped liking her, because he avoids her). [[spoiler: He finally gets his courage at the reception and Cassie kisses him.]]


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All the great spirits are ArtificialIntelligence modules of the ship that crashed and became the Archipelago. There's six of them, but only Raven and Dragonfly get any pagetime.



* BigGood: He organized sealing of the Raven.

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* BenevolentAI
* BigGood: He organized sealing of the Raven.Great Raven and the means of defeating him for good.



* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal]]

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* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal]][[spoiler:ObiWanMoment]]




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* SupernaturalAid: Functions as the giver of it, since in the present day that's all he's really able to do. He gives Credenza magical ability, Raven a prophecy, and Luck brothers the scent of Riley's OneTrueLove and Tuff's full transforming ability.
-->'''Blitz''': What do you have in your bag for me, Mister Wizard?
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: He actually doesn't and, when asked whether getting a mortal body was WorthIt, all he says is:
-->'''Dragonfly''': [[spoiler: Olivia...]]



TheBigBad. According to WordOfGod, he thought [[TheEvilsOfFreeWill people just weren't responsible enough]], so he decided to take over the world.
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The [=AI=] of an old ship [[spoiler: buried underneath Anthony's castle.]] He befriends Clair, but never shows himself to the adults of the household.
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* ProjectedMan

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ProjectedMan: It gets easier once his machinery is repaired.
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* CoolOldGuy

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* CoolOldGuyCoolOldGuy: Complete with a mentor-y pipe.



* BigGood

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* HappilyMarried

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* HappilyMarriedPerfectlyArrangedMarriage: Even though neither of them expected it to be perfect.



* AloofBigBrother: Plays this role for Clair, though Spindle is more frustrated than aloof.

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* AloofBigBrother: Plays this role for Clair, though Spindle is more frustrated with life in general than aloof.



The legendary hero who, along with the six powerful people from all around the Archipelago defeated and sealed the Great Raven, wrote The Listing of Names and mysteriously vanished afterwards.



* SealedGoodInACan: He preserved himself in a tank that kept him alive.

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* SealedGoodInACan: He preserved himself in a tank that kept him alive.
alive. [[spoiler: He dies after leaving it to speak with our heroes.]]

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Member of Anthony's household - an elderly, kindly scientist.



* AbsentMindedProfessor: PlayedForDrama, as she's very clearly suffering from dimentia. It also makes her an easy target for [[ManipulativeBastard Snow]].

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* AbsentMindedProfessor: PlayedForDrama, as she's very clearly suffering from dimentia.dementia. It also makes her an easy target for [[ManipulativeBastard Snow]].



A young former slave and Chesska's best friend. Now a member of Anthony's household and Clair's primary caretaker.
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Teenager, which makes him mature and smart enough to see the numerous problems of Anthony's household, but unable to do anything about it. Understandably, he's very snarky.
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* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal]]



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Kor's close friend and a fortune teller. She can also control fabrics, which comes in handy a lot.
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Smug, sleazy shapeshifter. He spent some time [[spoiler: running a theatre on Paper Island and being Kor's boss]] while taking care of some sordid affairs for Snow, but once this jig is up, he has no other choice than to join the crew.

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Smug, sleazy shapeshifter. He spent some time [[spoiler: running a theatre on Paper Island and being Kor's boss]] while taking care of some sordid affairs for Snow, but once this jig is up, he has no other choice than shapeshifter who's pirating mostly to join the crew.RapePillageAndBurn.



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* WomenAreWiser: A good counterpoint to her husband's silliness.

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* OldRetainer



A manager of the Paper Island theatre and Kor's boss. He ruthlessly hypnotises people to do his bidding. On the side he takes care of some sordid affairs for Snow, but once this jig is up, he has no other choice than to join the crew. [[spoiler: Except he's KilledAndReplaced by Han.]]
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* HypnoticEyes

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* SmoothTalkingTalentAgent: A theatre manager. Kor is terrified by the very prospect when he needs to ask for a leave of absence, and there's a reason for that. [[spoiler: Not to mention Paollo's guards, {{brainwashed}} into stagehands.]]



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* {{Foil}}: Somewhat of one to Raven; by joining the Raven, [[FridgeBrilliance she lost what he gained by leaving]]. ** Also to Tuff. Both are intelligent, [[spoiler: romantic]] people, Readers of the Listing of Names, and she hates him for "stealing" the book from her.

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* {{Foil}}: Somewhat of one to Raven; by joining the Raven, [[FridgeBrilliance she lost what he gained by leaving]]. leaving]].
** Also to Tuff. Both are intelligent, [[spoiler: romantic]] people, Readers of the Listing of Names, and she hates him for "stealing" the book from her.



* TheStoic: To somewhat creepy levels. Whether she's mowing down innocents or making tea for Knull, this girl does not emote.



* BunnyEarsLawyer: For the last time, he ''makes armour'' for a living. But he's really quite good at it.

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* BunnyEarsLawyer: For the last time, he ''makes armour'' armor'' for a living. But he's really quite good at it.



TheBrute of Snow's crew.
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* ArchEnemy: To Tuff arguably, considering how many times they've clashed.

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* ArchEnemy: To Tuff arguably, considering how many times they've clashed.clashed.



* StalkerWithACrush: Towards Lucinda, as both himself, [[spoiler:later as Vaniji, and earlier as Corveau (the man who broke her heart, resulting in her HeelFaceTurn)]]. Lucinda [[DespairEventHorizon isn't particularly bothered]] when she finds out about the latter.

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* StalkerWithACrush: Towards Lucinda, as both himself, [[spoiler:later as Vaniji, and earlier as in every form we see him take, [[spoiler: including Corveau (the man who broke her heart, resulting in her HeelFaceTurn)]]. Lucinda [[DespairEventHorizon isn't particularly bothered]] when she finds out about the latter.



The general of Raven's [[ArmyOfThievesAndWhores armies]]. Technically, Snow's superior, but Snow doesn't seem to have gotten the memo.
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* ForeignLanguageTirade: From the moment he's introduced.

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* CloudCuckooLander: His guards are use to him wandering off and getting lost.

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* CloudCuckooLander: His guards are use used to him wandering off and getting lost.lost.
-->'''Exasperated guard''': In his hands lies the future of our country. God save us all.



* DreamWalker

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* DreamWalkerDreamWalker: His heir power. Eastern Continent people seem big on this.



* NiceGuy

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NiceGuy: If somewhat distracted most of the time.
* TheOmniscient: Only in the dream world, and since this would be a StoryBreakerPower otherwise, TalkingInYourDreams with him is difficult. He can only speak in a vague, prophet-like way.



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* BlessedWithSuck: Regaining his [[spoiler:sick, atrophied]] physical body. Even being cured of sickness by Uru's healing doesn't fully restore his deteriorated body.

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* BlessedWithSuck: Regaining his [[spoiler:sick, atrophied]] physical body. Even being cured of sickness by Uru's healing doesn't fully restore his deteriorated body.it.



* EyeBeams: His primary power, despite being quite blind.

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* EyeBeams: His primary power, despite being quite blind.power.



* LastOfHisKind: Not of his species, but of his bloodline. He's outlived all of his relatives and WordOfGod clarifies that he never had children, so unless there are other descendants of Little Tin Fish kicking around that he doesn't know about, he's the last- meaning he's also the last person who will ever possess his heir power. [[spoiler: Thankfully, both the Great Raven and Snow are defeated conclusively before he dies of old age, preventing this from becoming a problem.]]

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* LastOfHisKind: Not of his species, but of his bloodline. He's outlived all of his relatives and WordOfGod clarifies that he never had children, so unless there are other descendants of Little Tin Fish kicking around that he doesn't know about, he's the last- last - meaning he's also the last person who will ever possess his heir power. [[spoiler: Thankfully, both the Great Raven and Snow are defeated conclusively defeated before he dies of old age, preventing so this from becoming never becomes a problem.]]



* LifeWillKillYou: [[spoiler: By the time of the epilogue- one year after the final battle- he has died of old age.]]

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* LifeWillKillYou: [[spoiler: By the time of the epilogue- one epilogue - a year after the final battle- battle - he has died of old age.]]



Descendant of Grom Pintur, a Quillotian girl with latent SuperStrength.
* ActionGirl: Combines SuperStrength with NighInvulnerable, at least against blunt impacts.

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Descendant of Grom Pintur, a Quillotian girl with latent SuperStrength.
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* ActionGirl: Combines SuperStrength with NighInvulnerable, at least against blunt impacts.while downsized.



* RedStringOfFate: Dragonfly's gift to Riley (the scent of the woman he would eventually fall in love with), which led him straight to Alice.

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* RedStringOfFate: Dragonfly's gift to Riley (the scent of the woman he would eventually fall in love with), which with) led him straight to Alice.Alice. [[spoiler: They get married in the epilogue.]]



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* FantasticRacism: Kor's clan is looked down on by at least some people, for being fliers who are naturally talented runners.
* FriendToAllLivingThings: Takes care of a large flock of different kinds of birds, along with a jabberwock named Charlie [[spoiler:who's actually Uru under a BalefulPolymorph]]

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* FantasticRacism: Kor's clan is looked down on by at least some people, for being fliers who are and at the same time naturally talented runners.
* FriendToAllLivingThings: Takes care of a large flock of different kinds of birds, along with a jabberwock named Charlie [[spoiler:who's actually Uru under a BalefulPolymorph]]BalefulPolymorph]].



** HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Has the ability to channel souls, which first manifests itself when [[spoiler:he summons an army of bird souls to fight Captain Snow]].

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** HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Has the ability to channel souls, which It first manifests itself when [[spoiler:he summons an army of bird souls to fight Captain Snow]].



* CheerfulChild: she's only five and has been mostly unaffected by the tragedies that befell her parents thanks to the constant care of Cassie, her NotSoImaginaryFriend Benjamin and her other guardians.

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* CheerfulChild: she's She's only five and has been mostly unaffected by the tragedies that befell her parents thanks to the constant care of Cassie, her NotSoImaginaryFriend Benjamin and her other guardians.



* BalefulPolymorph: [[spoiler:Charlie]].

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* BalefulPolymorph: [[spoiler:Charlie]].[[spoiler:As Charlie, Kor's pet]]. Happened to him because [[PlayingWithSyringes Snow wanted to experiment with transformatory magic]].



* DramaticIrony: By changing him into a jabberwock, Snow unintentionally helped Uru avoid Raven's notice.

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* DramaticIrony: By [[spoiler: changing him into a jabberwock, jabberwock]], Snow unintentionally helped Uru avoid Raven's notice.



The eldest of the Burilla siblings, the owner of the family pub and all around ParentalSubstitute.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold

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Paolin's brother. He cooks in the inn and doesn't talk.
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The little sister in the family. She works as a maid and is (annoyingly) cheerful.
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The shaman of Ruin Island, which makes him an important person, at least on the island.
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* TheMedic

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* TheMedic
TheMedic: His job as the shaman.



* BitchInSheepsClothing

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* BitchInSheepsClothingBitchInSheepsClothing: [[spoiler: Actually a smuggler. And a murderer - he killed his girlfriend when she discovered Syn's illegal activities and wanted to tell on him, then framed Anthony for it and marooned him]].



Zatachi, Tatami, Gozazi, Tusura, Vamuro. Trained as protectors and companions to Prince Paollo, and currently traveling with the heroes.

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Zatachi, Tatami, Gozazi, Tusura, Vamuro. Trained as protectors and companions to Prince Paollo, Paollo [[spoiler: they try to rescue him when kidnapped and currently traveling with eventually get {{brainwashed}} by Vaniji. After the heroes.heroes rescue them, the guards join the quest, partly because it involves rescuing Paollo.]]
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Professional monster hunter, the Batman to Tin Can Turtle's Alfred, but this is not his story. [[spoiler: He's BackForTheFinale, though.]]
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* ActionGirl

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* ActionGirlActionGirl: Bit of a feminist, too, since she thinks Willum dislikes her ambitions for being a girl. He actually dislikes them because he doesn't think she knows what she's doing.



* TheBeastmaster

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* TheBeastmasterTheApprentice
* TheBeastmaster: Give him a little time and he can tame any creature. [[spoiler: Even shadowmandyrs, after they're freed of their queen's evil influence.]]
* [[spoiler: DemonicPossession: By the Shadowmandyr Queen, the main antagonist on the Coin Island. He gets unpossessed by our heroes.]]



A member of the city guard on Coin Island along with Walf.
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CoolOldLady in charge of the Hidden Island cloister. WordOfGod says she's had quite an interesting past beforehand.
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* CoolOldLady
--> Please. I live with exactly sixty young, hormonal, adolescent girls. I can smell self-doubt.
* DreamWalker



* APupilOfMineUntilHeTurnedToEvil: [[spoiler:Lucinda]]

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* APupilOfMineUntilHeTurnedToEvil: [[spoiler:Lucinda]]
[[spoiler:Lucinda, then known as Lucy, was her most promising student.]]



The nun our crew interacts with the most and an assistant to Tabitha.
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The book written by Dragonfly who then left in in the Hidden Island cloister for safekeeping. It lists the lineages of all the Heirs and is sentient.
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The [[spoiler: Luck brothers']] maternal cousin who just happens to be the king of Quillotia. Friendly, funny, reasonable guy.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: He's not of the sort to bear a grudge, but when our heroes arrive and meet him, he yells at [[spoiler: Tuff, who stole his sub to run from home.]] Not for stealing the sub - for vanishing without a trace and making Mikel worry. Then he instantly forgives.



** Completely forgoes the fact that Tuff and Riley stole an expensive submarine in favour of being saddened at them disappearing for eight years without a word.

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** [[spoiler: Completely forgoes the fact that Tuff and Riley stole an expensive submarine in favour of being saddened at them disappearing for eight years without a word.]]



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: While not panicking over Deliza having a baby, he's really people-smart and by all indications a good ruler.



* RequisiteRoyalRegalia: His garb is noticeably more elaborate than the already embellished Quillotian attire.

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* SelfMadeOrphan: Killed his whole family except for nephew Knull [[spoiler: wife Naomi and daughter Yula]].

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* SelfMadeOrphan: Killed his whole entire family except for nephew Knull [[spoiler: wife Naomi and daughter Yula]].



Snow's WhiteSheep nephew who really, really doesn't want to be there

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Snow's WhiteSheep nephew who really, really doesn't want to be therethere, but dear uncle Adrian razed his village, murdered his parents, kidnapped him and forced him to enter a DealWithTheDevil.



* BunnyEarsLawyer: Oh yes.

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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Oh yes.For the last time, he ''makes armour'' for a living. But he's really quite good at it.



* [[spoiler: HeelFaceTurn: turns against his uncle and the other Ravens in the end.]]
* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: At least compared to most of the rest of Snow's crew.

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* [[spoiler: HeelFaceTurn: After Lucinda dies, he finally has enough and turns against his uncle and the other Ravens in the end.]]
* HopelessSuitor: [[spoiler: He falls in love with the EmotionlessGirl Lucinda, who actually seems to like being around him, but is unable to reciprocate.]]
* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: At least compared to most He's a actually a sweet guy under a considerable amounts of the rest of Snow's crew.stress.



* [[spoiler: ReformedButRejected: in the epilogue, not helped by his own belief that he deserves rejection.]]

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* [[spoiler: ReformedButRejected: in In the epilogue, not helped by his own belief epilogue - Credenza is happy to have him, but he believes he doesn't deserve to be with the good guys. Although he gets a good job proposal from the Eastern Continent and it's implied that he deserves rejection.takes it.]]

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* AfraidOfHisOwnStrenght: His moral fears are tied to the berserker aspects of being a wereshark, but he's also AfraidToHoldTheBaby (Mikel's son).

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* AfraidOfHisOwnStrenght: AfraidOfTheirOwnStrength: His moral fears are tied to the berserker aspects of being a wereshark, but he's also AfraidToHoldTheBaby (Mikel's son).



Tuff's brother and also a half-wereshark from Quillotia. Impulsive, brash and extroverted, he hides some impressive issues.

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Tuff's brother and also a half-wereshark from Quillotia. Impulsive, brash and extroverted, he hides some impressive issues.issues underneath that fun demeanor.



** But this is more of a case of [[SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan single man seeks good woman]]

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** But this is more of a case of [[SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan single man seeks good woman]]woman]].



* RedOniBlueOni: Red to his brother's blue.

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* RedOniBlueOni: Red Extroverted, impulsive red to his brother's reasonable, melancholic blue.



* ShutUpKiss: His TrueLove gives him one.
* TheBigGuy

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* ArmyOfThievesAndWhores: Made up of anyone whose sworn themselves to the Raven, meaning members could range from starving homeless people, to members of the nobility and army.
* AndIMustScream: Soulsealing, what a raven does to a host who has [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness outlived there usefulness]]. They essentially put the unfortunate host into a coma.

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* ArmyOfThievesAndWhores: Made up of anyone whose sworn themselves to the Raven, meaning members could range people who had very little to lose - from starving homeless people, have-nots like Steller to members of the nobility and army.
broken-hearted nuns like Lucinda, to fallen nobles.
* AndIMustScream: Soulsealing, which what a raven does to a host who has [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness outlived there their usefulness]]. They essentially put The original host's soul just takes the unfortunate host into a coma.backseat - forever.




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*** [[spoiler:SuperStrength / SizeShifter: uses this while holding onto Alice's soul]]
*** [[spoiler:{{Teleportation}}: like his MookMaker power above, he gets this from Clair.]]
*** YourSoulIsMine: His other most frequently used ability.
* BigBad: Though he's technically DragonInChief to the Raven, Snow is the real villain, especially after we learn the Raven has no power in the real world.

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*** [[spoiler:SuperStrength / SizeShifter: uses this while While holding onto Alice's soul]]
*** [[spoiler:{{Teleportation}}: like his MookMaker power above, he gets this from Clair.
soul.]]
*** [[spoiler:{{Teleportation}}: Stolen from Clair.]]
*** YourSoulIsMine: His other most frequently used ability.
* BigBad: Though he's technically DragonInChief
ability. This is inherent to the Raven, Snow is the real villain, especially after we learn the Raven has no power in the real world.arm.



* TheDreaded: A name to conjure with. Everyone fears him, for good reason.

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* TheDreaded: A name Even before dying and coming back to conjure with. Everyone fears him, for good reason.life (or undeath, in any case), he's been a dreaded pirate.



* FauxAffablyEvil: He tries, but his OmnicidalManiac tendencies tend to get in the way.
* GracefulLoser: Snow tends to take defeats and setbacks in stride (being immortal probably helps). [[spoiler:He even laughs when he's finally killed for good, and his final act is to offer his mechanical arm to save Blitz.]]

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* FauxAffablyEvil: He tries, but his those OmnicidalManiac tendencies tend to get in the way.
* GracefulLoser: Snow tends to take defeats and setbacks in his stride (being immortal probably helps). [[spoiler:He even laughs when he's finally killed for good, and his final act is to offer his mechanical arm to save Blitz.]]



* TheHeavy
* LaughingMad: Pretty much constantly, but probably the biggest example is [[spoiler: [[http://www.archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=796 when he gets stabbed through the heart with a toy sword.]] ]]

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* TheHeavy
TheHeavy: For most of the story he's the main villain and the Great Raven just lurks in the background. Snow laso has a personal history with [[TheHero Credenza]] [[spoiler: and Uru]].
* LaughingMad: Pretty much constantly, Quite often, but probably the biggest example is [[spoiler: [[http://www.archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=796 when he gets stabbed through the heart with a toy sword.]] ]]



* PapaWolf: He's willing to do anything to protect his [[spoiler:wife and daughter]] even supposedly willing to backstab the Raven.

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* PapaWolf: He's willing to do anything to protect his [[spoiler:wife and daughter]] even supposedly willing (supposedly) to backstab the Raven.



** [[spoiler:He doesn't kill Knull despite the later's TheDogBitesBack attempt, even ordering some ravens to take care of him. And remember, this isn't like the past times he's spared Knull because his AntiMagic made him useful, Knull literally tried to kill him, and Snow still spared him!]]
** [[spoiler:There is no discernible reason why Snow would give Blitz Dragonfly's arm, especially because Snow was the whole reason Blitz was dying in the first place!]]

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** [[spoiler:He doesn't kill Knull despite the later's TheDogBitesBack attempt, even ordering some ravens to take care of him. And remember, this isn't like the past times he's spared Knull because his AntiMagic made him useful, Knull literally tried to kill him, and Snow still spared him!]]
him.]]
** [[spoiler:There is no discernible reason why Snow would give Blitz Dragonfly's arm, especially because when Snow was the whole reason cause of Blitz was dying in the first place!]]place.]]



* SharpDressedMan: Takes pride in his wardrobe. When [[spoiler:his leg is crushed and replaced with a robotic limb]], his biggest lament is that his boots don't fit properly.

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* SharpDressedMan: Takes pride in his wardrobe. When [[spoiler:his leg is crushed and replaced with a robotic limb]], his biggest lament complaint is that his boots don't fit properly.



A taciturn, mysterious young woman who serves as Snow's seond-in-command, presumably because, all things considered, she's the least crazy of his crew.
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* {{Foil}}: Somewhat of one to Raven; by joining the Raven, [[FridgeBrilliance she lost what he gained by leaving]].

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* {{Foil}}: Somewhat of one to Raven; by joining the Raven, [[FridgeBrilliance she lost what he gained by leaving]]. ** Also to Tuff. Both are intelligent, [[spoiler: romantic]] people, Readers of the Listing of Names, and she hates him for "stealing" the book from her.



* EvilCounterpart: To Tuff. Both are Readers of the Listing of Names, and she hates him for 'stealing' the book from her. Doesn't quite overlap into Rival territory though as they rarely engage in combat.




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* UsedToBeASweetKid: [[spoiler: In her backstory as a young nun. She was a kind girl, a philosopher, a poet and considered the most likely to become Tabitha's successor. Then she was seduced (by the shapeshifter Han) and had her heart broken, upon which she tried to commit suicide - and the ravens came with a DealWithTheDevil. So she gave up her emotions and became one of the bad guys.]]


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* TheHero

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* TheHeroTheHero: She sort of stumbles into saving the world quest by rescuing a random shipwrecked guy.



* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: If Credenza doesn't smile at least once in a day, [[http://thesilvertophat.deviantart.com/art/Arch-5-pg-135-101046364 something is wrong]]]



* OfficialCouple: Becomes one with Raven. The story ends with them dancing at the very beach where they first met.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: If Credenza doesn't smile at least once in a day, [[http://thesilvertophat.deviantart.com/art/Arch-5-pg-135-101046364 something is wrong]]].



* TeamMom: Especially towards Blitz.

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* TeamMom: Especially towards Blitz. But she's generally the one organizing and directing the group.




* AMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Blitz's childish demeanor and moodswing tendencies apparently do not make for a pleasant mental landscape. [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=778 Vaniji Ralo finds out the hard way.]]
** Raven then Lampshades how dangerous Blitz's mind can be. And he would know, since he's the raven who broke said mind, or rather the raven who got broken by it. The breaking was mutual. And the shards are still there, Blitz just isn't conscious of them.

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* AMindIsATerribleThingToRead: Blitz's childish demeanor and moodswing mood-swinging tendencies apparently do not make for a pleasant mental landscape. [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=778 Vaniji Ralo finds out the hard way.]]
** Raven then Lampshades how dangerous Blitz's mind can be. And he would know, since he's the raven who broke said mind, or rather the raven who got broken by it. The breaking was mutual. And the shards are still there, Blitz just isn't conscious of them.them, which means his mind is a terrible thing to read.



* BewareTheNiceOnes / BewareTheSillyOnes: Make no mistake, you hurt one of Blitz's friends, and he will make you regret it.

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* BewareTheNiceOnes / BewareTheSillyOnes: Make no mistake, you hurt one of Blitz's friends, and he you will make you regret it.it. If you live long enough.



* MessyHair

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* MessyHairMessyHair: Even as Anthony he's been kind of shaggy, but well kept, for a traveller anyway. As Blitz he's just shaggy.



* TalkativeLoon

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* TalkativeLoon
TalkativeLoon: He doesn't have much of a filter, courtesy of the brain damage.



He's a perpetually confused individual. His unique circumstances make him vulnerable to emotions and feelings outside of his programming as a spirit. He tends to exert his frustrations by being grumpy. He becomes very protective of Blitz and becomes something of a big brother to him. [[spoiler: After eventually separating from Blitz, he would begin to develop his own physical body.]]

* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Is willing to grind their expedition to the underworld to a complete halt just to make sure Credenza's okay.

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He's a A perpetually confused individual. His individual, since his unique circumstances make him vulnerable to emotions and feelings outside of his programming as a spirit. He Raven tends to exert his frustrations by being grumpy. He becomes very protective of Blitz and becomes something of in a big brother to him.brotherly way. [[spoiler: After eventually separating from Blitz, he would begin to develop his own physical body.]]

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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Is One of the first signs of his developing love for Credenza - he's willing to grind their expedition to the underworld to a complete halt just to make sure Credenza's she's okay.



* ComicallySerious

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* ComicallySerious TheComicallySerious: On occasion. Mostly because he has no idea how humans work, really.



* TheCynic: At first, everything just seemed to be miserable for him.

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* TheCynic: At first, everything just seemed to be miserable for him.Miserable and snarky pessimist. He gradually grows out of it.



* OfficialCouple: Becomes one with Credenza.



* SuperpoweredEvilSide: At first, he would take control of Blitz at inopportune times to cause trouble. Once he starts working together with Credenza, it becomes more amicable.
* WhatIsThisFeeling: Having never felt emotion for most of his existence, he isn't sure how to handle them.

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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: At first, he would take control of Blitz at inopportune times to cause trouble. Once he starts working together with Credenza, it becomes more amicable.
the superpowered side stops being evil.
* WhatIsThisFeeling: Having never felt emotion for most of his existence, he isn't sure how to handle them. Doubly so when he falls in love.



A half were-shark from Quillotia. Despite growing up relatively sheltered from the world (and his home's FantasticRacism towards Sharks), Tuff always had the stigma from his Parent's strange union looming over him. His parent's disappearances finally spurred him to run away from home. He intended to go alone, But Riley followed after him. The two lived a nomadic lifestyle for eight years before meeting Credenza and getting caught up in the search for the Heirs.

Serves as a foil to his loud and aggressive brother, and is much more careful in almost everything he does (which sometimes comes back to bite him). After he acquires the Listing of Names he becomes something of TheSmartGuy in the team, being the most tactically inclined and leading the way to the heirs using the Book. [[spoiler: Upgrades to GeniusBruiser after gaining the ability to transform into a full wereshark.]]


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A half were-shark from Quillotia. Despite growing up relatively sheltered from the world (and his home's home island's FantasticRacism towards Sharks), Tuff always had the stigma from his Parent's strange union parents' MalignedMixedMarriage looming over him. His parent's disappearances finally spurred him to run away from home. [[spoioler: He also stole Mikel's sub. But Mikel forgives him during the story.]] He intended to go alone, But but Riley followed after him. The two lived a nomadic lifestyle for eight years before meeting Credenza and getting caught up in the search for the Heirs.

Serves as a He's [[RedOniBlueOni the foil to his loud and aggressive brother, and is much extraverted brother]] generally a lot more careful in almost everything he does and thoughtful (which sometimes comes back to bite him). After he acquires the Listing of Names he becomes something of TheSmartGuy in the team, being the most tactically inclined and leading the way to the heirs using the Book. [[spoiler: Upgrades to GeniusBruiser after gaining the ability to transform into a full wereshark.]]

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* AfraidOfHisOwnStrenght: His moral fears are tied to the berserker aspects of being a wereshark, but he's also AfraidToHoldTheBaby (Mikel's son).
-->'''Tuff''': I tell you I'm a monster and you hand me your firstborn?



* CannotSpitItOut: Was pretty smitten with Credenza during the first couple chapters, but never brought attention to it. Once he starts falling for Cassie, the problem re-emerges.

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* CannotSpitItOut: Was pretty smitten with Credenza during the first couple chapters, but never brought attention to it.it and it fizzled out. Once he starts falling for Cassie, the problem re-emerges.



** LoveAtFirstPunch His first interaction with Cassie was a sharp kick in the jaw from her to his wereshark form.

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** LoveAtFirstPunch LoveAtFirstPunch: His first interaction with Cassie was a sharp kick in the jaw from her to his wereshark form.form. His second interaction was being sweet to her and reassuring her she's fine, the weresharks won't go in here.



* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: reacts badly to having killed some of the ravens the first time he turns into a wereshark, even if they were the bad guys.]]

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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: reacts badly to After having killed some of the ravens the first time he turns into a wereshark, even if they were the bad guys.guys who attacked his home island and threatened to kill his cousin's heavily pregnant wife, not counting the people they actually killed.]]



* RedOniBlueOni: Blue to Riley's red, being much calmer and the voice of reason leashing his brother down. He claims it's given him ulcers.

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* RedOniBlueOni: Blue to Riley's red, being much calmer and the voice of reason leashing his brother down. calm, reasonable, even brooding one. He claims it's Riley's antics have given him ulcers.




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Tuff's brother and also a half-wereshark from Quillotia. Impulsive, brash and extroverted, he hides some impressive issues.
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