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* CoolLoser: If you ignore his unfortunately named Archetype, Lincoln's a nice, gentle, if a little awkward boy who wouldn't hurt a fly. Of course, most people can't look past the Archetype, so...
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* TheHero: The main protagonist of the story, with all the angst that ensues.
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* HundredPercentAdorationRating: She's the most popular magical girl in the city.
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* LovedByAll: She's the most popular magical girl in the city.
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* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Lori is somewhat of a parody of gold and silver age superheroes, as she has multiple super-specific superpowers for any number of occasions much like {{Superman}} during the earlier comics.
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* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Lori is somewhat of a parody of gold and silver age superheroes, as she has multiple super-specific superpowers for any number of occasions much like {{Superman}} Franchise/{{Superman}} during the earlier comics.
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* AnimeChineseGirl: She checks many of the traits; she has odango hair, wears a {{Qipao}} during hero work, is a Martial Artist
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* AnimeChineseGirl: She checks many of the traits; she has odango hair, wears a {{Qipao}} UsefulNotes/{{Qipao}} during hero work, is a Martial Artist
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* {{Qipao}}: Lynn wears one of these in the ActionPrologue, befitting her Archetype, Martial Artist.
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* AdultFear: Not only do they have to deal with the fact their older daughters are frontline combatants against the Soulless, with the younger siblings sure to follow, but their son is discovered to have a unique Archetype that's not only a complete enigma but makes him a social pariah.
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* MissFanservice: The older sisters, as a result of AdaptationalCurves, are all notably gorgeous, with some people being unable to not notice their bodies.
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* MissFanservice: MsFanservice: The older sisters, as a result of AdaptationalCurves, are all notably gorgeous, with some people being unable to not notice their bodies.
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* ForgotAboutHerPowers: {{Justified}} since she has [[ComboPlatterPowers so many]] with many of them [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway incredibly situational]], so it's pretty common of her to forget about her more obscure and unused abilities, such as {{Telekinesis}}.
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* ForgotAboutHerPowers: {{Justified}} {{Justified|Trope}} since she has [[ComboPlatterPowers so many]] with many of them [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway incredibly situational]], so it's pretty common of her to forget about her more obscure and unused abilities, such as {{Telekinesis}}.[[MindOverMatter Telekinesis]].
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* BadassPreacher: While she's not as "flashy" as Lynn, Lori, or Leni, Luan's abilities as an Exorcist are of a sufficient tier that she's been on the front lines of and responsible for fighting many extremely powerful paranormal entities seeking to take over the world.
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* BlessedWithSuck: She ''hates'' her Archetype. She wants to be a comedian, but her Archetype and the job that goes with it means she's forced to spend her time with people too worried about being haunted to laugh at her jokes.
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* BlessedWithSuck: She ''hates'' her Archetype. She wants to be a comedian, but her Archetype and the job that goes with it means she's forced to spend her time with people too worried about being haunted to laugh at her jokes. She's also one of the ''most powerful'' Exorcists active, so she's has the additional feeling of pressure that [[ComesGreatResponsibility if she took on less responsibilities, something bad could happen if she's not there]].
* BlindedByRage: [[spoiler:When she's got the seals ready to forcibly put Diablo back in his can and free Sid from her DemonicPossession, Diablo despite being tied down goads her by taunting and threatening that this is only a temporary setback and that he'll come for her brother again when he's loose. Luan gets so pissed that she gets too close while trying to attack him to shut him up, and she puts herself in range to get slashed by a {{BFS}} Diablo summons thanks to Sid's Assassin Archetype and cut himself loose due to the seal weakening. If Charlie hadn't pulled her back she would have been fatally impaled.]]
* BlindedByRage: [[spoiler:When she's got the seals ready to forcibly put Diablo back in his can and free Sid from her DemonicPossession, Diablo despite being tied down goads her by taunting and threatening that this is only a temporary setback and that he'll come for her brother again when he's loose. Luan gets so pissed that she gets too close while trying to attack him to shut him up, and she puts herself in range to get slashed by a {{BFS}} Diablo summons thanks to Sid's Assassin Archetype and cut himself loose due to the seal weakening. If Charlie hadn't pulled her back she would have been fatally impaled.]]
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* HolyWater: She carries a vial of this with her, probably just in case she gets attacked by ghosts, a very real danger in her profession. Luckily, the ghost she deals with is friendly, so she doesn't need to use it.
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* HolyWater: She carries a vial of this with her, probably just in case she gets attacked by ghosts, a very real danger in her profession. Luckily, the ghost she deals with in her introduction is friendly, so she doesn't need to use it.
