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* PassionateSportsGirl: She is very passionate about Mermaid Spikers, even winning a championship before the events of the game.
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* PassionateSportsGirl: She is very ''very'' passionate about Mermaid Spikers, even winning a championship before the events of the game.
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* WaterTriggeredChange: Risks turning into a mermaid if so much as a ''single drop of liquid'' touches her skin. This makes drinking an everyday risk, and she can forget about even going outside in the rain; a drop touching her legs is all it takes. While she can revert at will, liquids will always set off the mermaid form instantly.
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* MyRulesAreBotYourRules: Upon achieving God power, during the second battle against her, she stops following the turn based combat system and starts attacking whenever she feels like it, requiring you to make haste to beat her.
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* MyRulesAreBotYourRules: MyRulesAreNotYourRules: Upon achieving God power, during the second battle against her, she stops following the turn based combat system and starts attacking whenever she feels like it, requiring you to make haste to beat her.
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A commander of Queen [=PriScyllas=] army who gets captured by the Magical Response Unit.
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* CuteMonsterGirl: She is an tako monster girl.
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* CuteMonsterGirl: She is an a tako monster girl.
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%% Because she's technically a diplomatic emissary from a foreign nation, she escaped jail time despite staging an invasion.
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* ACupAngst: She feels people regard her as this (she's actually decently busty), though she's sure that's only because she often next to the very busty Brie.
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* MagicalGirl: After she and Alluna summoned the Succubus Lilith, Brie ate Liliths magical sandwich which turned her into a magical girl and gave her the power to summon grilled cheese sandwiches which have healing properties.
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* MagicalGirl: After she and Alluna summoned the Succubus Lilith, Brie either ate Liliths magical Lilith's sandwich which turned or it ended up being a magical catalyst that then vanished after Lilith transformed Alluna. Either way, this would turn her into a magical girl and gave her as well, but with the power to summon grilled cheese sandwiches which have healing properties.
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* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: Both her eyes and hair are black.
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* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: Ashley's hair and eyes both have an auburn colour.
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* DisposableIntern: They treat their Interns terribly and have no qualms about using them as meat shields to save themselves from Queen PriScylla's monster girls.
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* DisposableIntern: They treat their Interns terribly and have no qualms about using them as meat shields to save themselves from Queen PriScylla's [=PriScylla's=] monster girls.
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The hosts of the show "Max Heart Minute"
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The hosts of the show "Max Heart Minute"Minute".
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* DisposableIntern: They treat their Interns terribly and have no qualms about using them as meat shields to save themselves from Queen PriScylla's monster girls.
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* HidingBehindYourBangs: Her right eye is always covered by her hair.
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* GayOption: Inverted. Out of the ten romance candidates, that Brie can choose from, he is the only one who is male.
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* SuccubiAndIncubi: During her second encounter with Lilith she was given a succubus form in addition to her magical girl powers.
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* SuccubiAndIncubi: During her second encounter with Lilith she was is given a succubus form in addition to her magical girl powers.
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* SleepingWithTheBoss: Discussed. Should Brie start a relationship with Lori, she first ponders the implications of having a relationship with someone who is basically her boss, but there are no further conflicts beyond that.
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A Robot who is Victorias gaming rival and a member of the "Axon City Country Club" as well as Axon in Ashes.
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A Robot who is Victorias Victoria's gaming rival and a member of the "Axon City Country Club" as well as Axon in Ashes.
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* AscendedExtra: She is the protagonist of "My Mad Scientist Roommate Turned Me Into Her Personal Robotic Battle Maiden?!?".
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* AscendedExtra: She is the protagonist of "My Mad Scientist Roommate Turned Me Into Her Personal Robotic Battle Maiden?!?".''VideoGame/MyMadScientistRoommateTurnedMeIntoHerPersonalRoboticBattleMaiden''.
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* GodivaHair: While she is partially clothed, her beasts are completely exposed, with only her hair covering her nipples.
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* {{Goth}}: Was goth in high school and wanted to try the look again after graduating, but considers it to much work to do so during the events of the game.
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* {{Goth}}: Was She was goth in high school and wanted to try the look again after graduating, but considers it to much work to do so during the events of the game.
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* WhoNamesTheirKidDude: Her father thought it was the French way of spelling Brianna.
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* WhoNamesTheirKidDude: Her father thought it Brie was the French way of spelling Brianna.
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* ShockCollar: Gets one so that she doesn't escape or kill a member of the [=MRU=].
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* ShockCollar: Gets Lori puts one so that she doesn't escape on her, to prevent her from escaping or kill killing a member of the [=MRU=].Magical Response Unit, during her time as a captive by the MRU.
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A rich girl that Brie went to high school with.
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* BigBad: She wants to invade the surface world with her army of monster girls and is the final boss of the game.
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* AscendedExtra: She and Alluna are minor charakters in the Visual Novel ''VisualNovel/MaxsBigBustACaptainNekoraiTale''.
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* AscendedExtra: She and Alluna are minor charakters characters in the Visual Novel ''VisualNovel/MaxsBigBustACaptainNekoraiTale''.
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* {{Fanservice}}: Her magical girl outfit completly exposes her midriff as well as barely coveing her breasts.
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* AscendedExtra: She and Brie are minor charakters in the Visual Novel ''VisualNovel/MaxsBigBustACaptainNekoraiTale''.
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* AscendedExtra: She and Brie are minor charakters characters in the Visual Novel ''VisualNovel/MaxsBigBustACaptainNekoraiTale''.
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* FacialDialogue: His whole dialoge consists of facital expresions that no one but Brie is able to understand.
* FluffyTheTerrible: Everyone exept Brie and Kitty, think that [=JayBubs=] is a horrifying monster that sooner or later will try to eat something other than cheese sandwiches.
* FluffyTheTerrible: Everyone exept Brie and Kitty, think that [=JayBubs=] is a horrifying monster that sooner or later will try to eat something other than cheese sandwiches.
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* FacialDialogue: His whole dialoge dialogue consists of facital expresions facial expressions that no one but Brie is able to understand.
* FluffyTheTerrible:Everyone exept Everyone, except Brie and Kitty, think that [=JayBubs=] is a horrifying monster that sooner or later will try to eat something other than cheese sandwiches.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: While she was one of the villains in ''Max's Big Bust'' she is one of the heros in ''Alluna and Brie'' and mainly fights with darkness based powers.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: While she was one of the villains in ''Max's Big Bust'' Bust'', she is one of the heros heroes in ''Alluna and Brie'' and mainly fights with darkness based powers.
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A police oficer who was transferred to the [=MRU=]
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Like Ember she is a police oficer who was transferred to the [=MRU=]
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* FriendlyPirate: He is a pirate Captain and acts very cordial towards Brie and the other members of the [=MRU=] and after he learns about the pirates from Brie's dimension he is appaled by the atrocitys they have committed.
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* FriendlyPirate: He is a pirate Captain and acts very cordial towards Brie and the other members of the [=MRU=] and after he learns about the pirates from Brie's dimension he is appaled appalled by the atrocitys atrocities they have committed.
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* LingerieScene: When it is raining and the two of them really don't want to get out of bed, Ashley will film herself and Chloe in their underware much to the chagrin of the latter. Can also fall under ComedicUnderwearExposure.
* {{Malaproper}}: During one of thier Tokugawa specials, Ashley says "Connie Chihuahua" instead of "Konichiwa".
* SavingChristmas: Off-screen. Ashley singel-handedly saved Christmas and met and married Santa during a ''Max Heart Minute'' Christmas-special that was never seen on-screen because Brie was stuck in a lamp.
* {{Malaproper}}: During one of thier Tokugawa specials, Ashley says "Connie Chihuahua" instead of "Konichiwa".
* SavingChristmas: Off-screen. Ashley singel-handedly saved Christmas and met and married Santa during a ''Max Heart Minute'' Christmas-special that was never seen on-screen because Brie was stuck in a lamp.
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* LingerieScene: When it is raining and the two of them really don't want to get out of bed, Ashley will film herself and Chloe in their underware underwear much to the chagrin of the latter. Can also fall under ComedicUnderwearExposure.
* {{Malaproper}}: During one ofthier their Tokugawa specials, Ashley says "Connie Chihuahua" instead of "Konichiwa".
* SavingChristmas: Off-screen. Ashleysingel-handedly single-handedly saved Christmas and met and married Santa during a ''Max Heart Minute'' Christmas-special that was never seen on-screen because Brie was stuck in a lamp.
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* TalkLikeAPirate: They talk like pirates during their episodes covering the "Booga Wooga Bush Reaserve".
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* TalkLikeAPirate: They talk like pirates during their episodes covering the "Booga Wooga Bush Reaserve".Reserve".
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Brie's high school crush who is an appretice electrician.
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Brie's high school crush who is an appretice apprentice electrician.
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* KarmaHoudini: She once broke a gril's arm during a Mermaid Spikers match, but it was ruled an accident. It wasn't.
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* KarmaHoudini: She once broke a gril's girl's arm during a Mermaid Spikers match, but it was ruled an accident. It wasn't.
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* SavingChristmas: Off-screen. Ashley singel-handedly saved Christmas and met Santa during a ''Max Heart Minute'' Christmas-special that was never seen on-screen because Brie was stuck in a lamp.
* StillBelievesInSanta: Ashley still believes in Santa Claus and is even more convinced that he exists after the discovery that magic is real.
* SavingChristmas: Off-screen. Ashley singel-handedly saved Christmas and met Santa during a ''Max Heart Minute'' Christmas-special that was never seen on-screen because Brie was stuck in a lamp.
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* StillBelievesInSanta: Ashley still believes in Santa Claus and is even more convinced that he exists after the discovery that magic is real. Turns out, she was right.
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Camilles best firend friend who is just as plesant as she is.
