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!!Instructor A([[SpellMyNameWithAnS l]])fon Voga
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!!Instructor A([[SpellMyNameWithAnS A([[InconsistentSpelling l]])fon Voga
* InconsistentSpelling: Gallacci cannot decide if his name should be written as "A'''l'''fon" or "Afon". Even worse the main protagonist from the sequel ''Birthright'' is named ''Alfon''.
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Possibly the most egregious example from the whole story: Gallacci cannot decide if his name should be written as "A'''l'''fon" or "Afon". Even worse the main protagonist from the sequel ''Birthright'' is named ''Alfon''.
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misuse of renamed trope
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** Likewise, Toki has an uncanny resemblance with Miss Kitty, a mouse girl, from ''WesternAnimation/TheGreatMouseDetective'', as both are have similar looks, including having the same forelock and similar body frame, being the sole differences Toki's fur is grey, compared with Kitty's white, and Toki's ears are bigger than Kitty's ones, not to mention the former having [[GagBoobs biggers breasts, at least in proportion, than the latter]]. It doesn't help that Toki debuted in the comic at 1987, a year later after ''WesternAnimation/TheGreatMouseDetective'' debuted in U.S. theaters.
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** Likewise, Toki has an uncanny resemblance with Miss Kitty, a mouse girl, from ''WesternAnimation/TheGreatMouseDetective'', as both are have similar looks, including having the same forelock and similar body frame, being the sole differences Toki's fur is grey, compared with Kitty's white, and Toki's ears are bigger than Kitty's ones, not to mention the former having [[GagBoobs biggers breasts, at least in proportion, than the latter]].latter. It doesn't help that Toki debuted in the comic at 1987, a year later after ''WesternAnimation/TheGreatMouseDetective'' debuted in U.S. theaters.
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'''Ranks held:''' ?->Squadron Commander (Staff Officer)\\
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'''Ranks held:''' ?->Squadron Cadet->Squadron Commander (Staff Officer)\\
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* {{Expy}}: If Erma shares some points in common with [[Manga/{{Appleseed}} Deunan]], Toki shares similar ones with her friend Hitomi, [[RetCon complete with the lesbian undertones]]. Technically speaking, she is also an expy from another mouse character which appeared in an [[LesYay erotic pin-up]] starring Erma drawn in the early 80s before her official debut.
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* {{Expy}}: {{Expy}}:
** If Erma shares some points in common with [[Manga/{{Appleseed}} Deunan]], Toki shares similar ones with her friend Hitomi, [[RetCon complete with the lesbian undertones]]. Technically speaking, she is also an expy from another mouse character which appeared in an [[LesYay erotic pin-up]] starring Erma drawn in the early 80s before her officialdebut.debut.
** Likewise, Toki has an uncanny resemblance with Miss Kitty, a mouse girl, from ''WesternAnimation/TheGreatMouseDetective'', as both are have similar looks, including having the same forelock and similar body frame, being the sole differences Toki's fur is grey, compared with Kitty's white, and Toki's ears are bigger than Kitty's ones, not to mention the former having [[GagBoobs biggers breasts, at least in proportion, than the latter]]. It doesn't help that Toki debuted in the comic at 1987, a year later after ''WesternAnimation/TheGreatMouseDetective'' debuted in U.S. theaters.
** If Erma shares some points in common with [[Manga/{{Appleseed}} Deunan]], Toki shares similar ones with her friend Hitomi, [[RetCon complete with the lesbian undertones]]. Technically speaking, she is also an expy from another mouse character which appeared in an [[LesYay erotic pin-up]] starring Erma drawn in the early 80s before her official
** Likewise, Toki has an uncanny resemblance with Miss Kitty, a mouse girl, from ''WesternAnimation/TheGreatMouseDetective'', as both are have similar looks, including having the same forelock and similar body frame, being the sole differences Toki's fur is grey, compared with Kitty's white, and Toki's ears are bigger than Kitty's ones, not to mention the former having [[GagBoobs biggers breasts, at least in proportion, than the latter]]. It doesn't help that Toki debuted in the comic at 1987, a year later after ''WesternAnimation/TheGreatMouseDetective'' debuted in U.S. theaters.
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dewicking Senpai Kohai
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* SenpaiKohai: According with Gallacci in a recent revision of all the profiles of all the characters due of the 2016 soft RetCon, Alfon was Erma's senior in the school when both were young, as he was about one or two years older than her.
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* SenpaiKohai: Technically, Oshiro is Erma's senior officer, as she address him as such.
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* ChristmasCake: She's still single at 29 years old, something that pisses her off.
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* OldMaid: She's still single at 29 years old, something that pisses her off.
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Gag Boobs has been renamed to Boob Based Gag. Changing to the proper trope where appropriate and cutting misuse.
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* GagBoobs: She has a very big rack, compared with Erma. Unfortunely for her, having big boobs is not very convenient while using a pilot suit, as she finds out later.
* GenkiGirl: Very, '''very''' genki.
* GenkiGirl: Very, '''very''' genki.
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* AsLongAsItSoundsForeign: By WordOfGod, her name is deliberately spelled in a way that could sound alien for the readers and as such, it doesn't have a [[NoPronunciationGuide pronunciation guide]].
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* AsLongAsItSoundsForeign: By WordOfGod, her name is deliberately spelled in a way that could sound alien for the readers and as such, it doesn't have a [[NoPronunciationGuide pronunciation guide]].guide.
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Coitus Ensues has been renamed due to misuse.
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* CoitusEnsues: Played a bit. [[spoiler: He did had sex with Erma at their first date with her, but he has no problems with being part of her life for good, despite only dating her for a night in Ish-tako]].
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* PyrrhicVillainy: [[spoiler:He managed to ruin Erma's life and becoming Dornthant's governor, but he barely managed to do something with his new job, because everyone in the planet [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating hate his guts for what he did]]]].
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* PyrrhicVillainy: PyrrhicVictory: [[spoiler:He managed to ruin Erma's life and becoming Dornthant's governor, but he barely managed to do something with his new job, because everyone in the planet [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating hate his guts for what he did]]]].
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Bastard Boyfriend is no longer a trope
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* NiceGuy: The only thing we know about him is he's really kind with everyone else, compared with [[BastardBoyfriend Tavas]]. This is even lampshaded by WordOfGod in a FAQ.
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* NiceGuy: The only thing we know about him is he's really kind with everyone else, compared with [[BastardBoyfriend Tavas]].Tavas. This is even lampshaded by WordOfGod in a FAQ.
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* BastardBoyfriend: Of the Unconflicted style, and very proud of it. Let's say Tavas cannot forgive Erma for dumping him.
