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* Early in the book, discussing Hazel, Manny defines emotional adulthood as knowing you're going to die someday, and accepting it. Much later in the book, 'Mike' - by that definition - becomes an adult.
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* Early in the book, discussing Hazel, Manny the prof defines emotional adulthood as knowing you're going to die someday, and accepting it. Much later in the book, 'Mike' Mike - by that definition - becomes an adult.
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* 'Loonies' fighting elite (and [[VictoryOrDeath stranded]]) troops practically barehanded ''and winning''. Justified by a) the problems Luna's light gravity gives 'New Chums', b) the Loonies' tremendous numerical advantage, and c) the fact that TheLastDance is in play - accepting defeat only means a miserable death in a few years.
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* 'Loonies' fighting fight Earth's elite (and [[VictoryOrDeath stranded]]) "peace" troops practically barehanded ''and winning''. and '''win.''' Justified by a) the problems Luna's light gravity gives 'New Chums', b) the Loonies' tremendous numerical advantage, and c) the fact that TheLastDance is in play their fury at having their homes - accepting defeat only means a miserable death in a few years.and [[PapaWolf their]] [[MamaBear children]] - subjected to surprise attack.
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* 'Loonies' fighting elite troops practically barehanded ''and winning''. Justified by the problems Luna's light gravity gives 'New Chums'.
* Earth's Luna facing side suddenly exploding in flashes of light as the 'rocks' strike home.
* Earth's Luna facing side suddenly exploding in flashes of light as the 'rocks' strike home.
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* 'Loonies' fighting elite (and [[VictoryOrDeath stranded]]) troops practically barehanded ''and winning''. Justified by a) the problems Luna's light gravity gives 'New Chums'.
Chums', b) the Loonies' tremendous numerical advantage, and c) the fact that TheLastDance is in play - accepting defeat only means a miserable death in a few years.
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* After the destruction of the catapult the Federated Nations announce their victory. Cue Mannie announcing they have ''another'' catapult.
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--> ''Shorty needed no help, nor ever would again - nor could I waste his last effort. For I did see that, while killing those guards, he was standing on one leg. Other was gone at the hip.''
* After the destruction of the catapult the Federated Nations announce their victory. Cue Mannie announcing they have ''another''catapult.catapult.
* Early in the book, discussing Hazel, Manny defines emotional adulthood as knowing you're going to die someday, and accepting it. Much later in the book, 'Mike' - by that definition - becomes an adult.
* After the destruction of the catapult the Federated Nations announce their victory. Cue Mannie announcing they have ''another''
* Early in the book, discussing Hazel, Manny defines emotional adulthood as knowing you're going to die someday, and accepting it. Much later in the book, 'Mike' - by that definition - becomes an adult.
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* Shorty Mkrum's last stand. In fact, Shorty Mkrum.
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* Shorty Mkrum's last stand. In fact, Shorty Mkrum.Mkrum.
* After the destruction of the catapult the Federated Nations announce their victory. Cue Mannie announcing they have ''another'' catapult.
* After the destruction of the catapult the Federated Nations announce their victory. Cue Mannie announcing they have ''another'' catapult.
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* Shorty Mkrum's last stand. In fact, Shorty Mkrum.
* Shorty Mkrum's last stand. In fact, Shorty Mkrum.
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* 'Loonies' fighting elite troops practically barehanded ''and winning''. Justified by the problems Luna's light gravity gives 'New Chums'.
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* 'Loonies' fighting elite troops practically barehanded ''and winning''. Justified by the problems Luna's light gravity gives 'New Chums'.Chums'.
* Earth's Luna facing side suddenly exploding in flashes of light as the 'rocks' strike home.
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