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* Shepard raised her hand. "I have one important question."
Are the Reapers coming?
"Precisely."
We don't know. But what I do know, is that if they are coming? There's only one relay left that they can enter this galaxy through. The super-relay EDI and I found, so long ago. . . . . if it's another galaxy completely controlled by the Reapers I think we owe THEM an invasion or two, don't you?
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* The Battle of the Vineyards. Nine Spectres in three Hammerheads, against ''90'' batarians in four gunships and several attack vehicles. End result. Four wide-eyed and very cooperative batarian prisioners, two hundred liberated asari and human slaves and one very harried Spectre doctor running around attending the civilians.
* The last paragraphs of the fic.
-->Shepard raised her hand. "I have one important question."
"Precisely.
-->"Precisely."
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* Shepard raised her hand. "I have one important question." Are the Reapers coming? "Precisely." We don't know. But what I do know, is that if they are coming? There's only one relay left that they can enter this galaxy through. The super-relay EDI and I found, so long ago. . . . . if it's another galaxy completely controlled by the Reapers I think we owe THEM an invasion or two, don't you?
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* This is topped by the offscreen one during the reaper war; The rachni HELD A FREAKING REAPER IN PLACE while the other fleet's trashed it.
* Shepard raised her hand. "I have one important question." "
Are the Reaperscoming? coming?
"Precisely." "
We don't know. But what I do know, is that if they are coming? There's only one relay left that they can enter this galaxy through. The super-relay EDI and I found, so long ago. . . . . if it's another galaxy completely controlled by the Reapers I think we owe THEM an invasion or two, don't you?
* Shepard raised her hand. "I have one important question.
Are the Reapers
"Precisely.
We don't know. But what I do know, is that if they are coming? There's only one relay left that they can enter this galaxy through. The super-relay EDI and I found, so long ago. . . . . if it's another galaxy completely controlled by the Reapers I think we owe THEM an invasion or two, don't you?
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* Just the fact that this is a 3.4 million word story that was written in 21 months by a single person. HOLY SHIT.
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* Shepard raised her hand. "I have one important question."
Are the Reapers coming?
"Precisely."
We don't know. But what I do know, is that if they are coming? There's only one relay left that they can enter this galaxy through. The super-relay EDI and I found, so long ago. . . . . if it's another galaxy completely controlled by the Reapers I think we owe THEM an invasion or two, don't you?
Are the Reapers coming?
"Precisely."
We don't know. But what I do know, is that if they are coming? There's only one relay left that they can enter this galaxy through. The super-relay EDI and I found, so long ago. . . . . if it's another galaxy completely controlled by the Reapers I think we owe THEM an invasion or two, don't you?
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* Shepard raised her hand. "I have one important question."
" Are the Reapers coming?
coming? "Precisely."
" We don't know. But what I do know, is that if they are coming? There's only one relay left that they can enter this galaxy through. The super-relay EDI and I found, so long ago. . . . . if it's another galaxy completely controlled by the Reapers I think we owe THEM an invasion or two, don't you?
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* The Relay 217 Incident is a sequence of awesome, involving a ship flying ''backwards'' through a mass relay and the Rachni essentially saying "UR DOIN' IT WRONG" to the [[spoiler: Batarians and their biotic ship weapons.]]
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* The Relay 217 Incident is a sequence of awesome, involving a ship flying ''backwards'' through a mass relay and the Rachni essentially saying "UR DOIN' IT WRONG" to the [[spoiler: Batarians and their biotic ship weapons.]]]]
* Shepard raised her hand. "I have one important question."
Are the Reapers coming?
"Precisely."
We don't know. But what I do know, is that if they are coming? There's only one relay left that they can enter this galaxy through. The super-relay EDI and I found, so long ago. . . . . if it's another galaxy completely controlled by the Reapers I think we owe THEM an invasion or two, don't you?
* Shepard raised her hand. "I have one important question."
Are the Reapers coming?
"Precisely."
We don't know. But what I do know, is that if they are coming? There's only one relay left that they can enter this galaxy through. The super-relay EDI and I found, so long ago. . . . . if it's another galaxy completely controlled by the Reapers I think we owe THEM an invasion or two, don't you?
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* The Relay 271 Incident is a sequence of awesome, involving a ship flying ''backwards'' through a mass relay and the Rachni essentially saying "UR DOIN' IT WRONG" to the [[spoiler: Batarians and their biotic ship weapons.]]
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* The Relay 271 217 Incident is a sequence of awesome, involving a ship flying ''backwards'' through a mass relay and the Rachni essentially saying "UR DOIN' IT WRONG" to the [[spoiler: Batarians and their biotic ship weapons.]]
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* The Relay 271 Incident is a sequence of awesome. The ''Estallus'' takes an absurd amount of punishment [[spoiler: from Batarian warships]], soaking up damage that would have annihilated the frigate if not for multi-layered valance shielding. Engines crippled, the ''Estallus'' does the unthinkable: [[spoiler: it turns around, presenting its undamaged frontal shields to the enemy, and uses the recoil of its main gun to propel itself into a mass relay. For clarification, no ship had ever attempted to enter a relay going ''backwards'' before.]] The jump is successful, against all odds, and places the ''Estallus'' in a perfect position [[spoiler: to use its remaining engine power and RAM a Batarian ship just as it comes out of the relay,]] annihilating both ships and disorienting the others long enough for a task force of Rachni ships to show up and [[spoiler: demonstrate to the Batarians the power of true ship-borne biotic weaponry,]] destroying their shields with a single blast and proceeding to tear massive chunks of armor and metal from their hulls with oversized pull fields.
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* The Relay 271 Incident is a sequence of awesome. The ''Estallus'' takes an absurd amount of punishment [[spoiler: from Batarian warships]], soaking up damage that would have annihilated the frigate if not for multi-layered valance shielding. Engines crippled, the ''Estallus'' does the unthinkable: [[spoiler: it turns around, presenting its undamaged frontal shields to the enemy, and uses the recoil of its main gun to propel itself into awesome, involving a mass relay. For clarification, no ship had ever attempted to enter a relay going flying ''backwards'' before.]] The jump is successful, against all odds, through a mass relay and places the ''Estallus'' in a perfect position Rachni essentially saying "UR DOIN' IT WRONG" to the [[spoiler: to use its remaining engine power and RAM a Batarian ship just as it comes out of the relay,]] annihilating both ships and disorienting the others long enough for a task force of Rachni ships to show up and [[spoiler: demonstrate to the Batarians the power of true ship-borne and their biotic weaponry,]] destroying their shields with a single blast and proceeding to tear massive chunks of armor and metal from their hulls with oversized pull fields.ship weapons.]]
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* The Relay 271 Incident is a sequence of awesome. The ''Estallus'' takes an absurd amount of punishment [[spoiler: from Batarian warships]], soaking up damage that would have annihilated the frigate if not for multi-layered valance shielding. Engines crippled, the ''Estallus'' does the unthinkable: [[spoiler: it turns around, presenting its undamaged frontal shields to the enemy, and uses the recoil of its main gun to propel itself into a mass relay. For clarification, no ship had ever attempted to enter a relay going ''backwards'' before.]] The jump is successful, against all odds, and places the ''Estallus'' in a perfect position [[spoiler: to use its remaining engine power and RAM a Batarian ship just as it comes out of the relay,]] annihilating both ships and disorienting the others long enough for a task force of Rachni ships to show up and [[spoiler: demonstrate to the Batarians the power of true ship-borne biotic weaponry,]] destroying their shields with a single blast and proceeding to tear massive chunks of armor and metal from their hulls with oversized pull fields.
