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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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The NDL can quite legitimately be described as a universe full of badass, with awesome as par for the course (or possibly eaten for breakfast). However, there are still some moments where characters who are consistently awesome [[UpToEleven take it to a whole new level]]. These are the moments of legend.
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The NDL can quite legitimately be described as a universe full of badass, with awesome as par for the course (or possibly eaten for breakfast). However, there are still some moments where characters who are consistently awesome [[UpToEleven take it to a whole new level]].level. These are the moments of legend.
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* Malali is [[CurbStompBattle essentially being crushed]] in a [[http://www.neoseeker.com/forums/directmessage.php?m=29251083 battle]] against [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The Executioner]]. Does she give up? [[{{Determinator}} Hell no]]. She buys herself time and then uses her dragon-scale sword to summon the [[SummonBiggerFish last dragon]] [[OurDragonsAreDifferent of Lar]] instead. Even for Malali, who saves universes in her spare time, this was a [[HolyShitQuotient whole new level of awesome]].
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* Malali is [[CurbStompBattle essentially being crushed]] in a [[http://www.neoseeker.com/forums/directmessage.php?m=29251083 battle]] against [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin The Executioner]]. Does she give up? [[{{Determinator}} Hell no]]. She buys herself time and then uses her dragon-scale sword to summon the [[SummonBiggerFish last dragon]] [[OurDragonsAreDifferent of Lar]] instead. Even for Malali, who saves universes in her spare time, this was a [[HolyShitQuotient whole new level of awesome]].awesome.
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->Clief stared at his opponent, quickly measuring her up. Any kind of tactics he had learned over all of his battles would come forth in this one. He was facing a goddess; a being on another level from himself. It was all out or die; that was the type of fight he was now taking part in. He unclipped his sheathe from his hip and stabbed it into the ground. He then proceeded to take his coat off, as requested, and hooked it over the hilt of his steel sword. Emote hovered in the sky, watching her prey as he did as she commanded. A large smile erupted on her face as she watched Clief prepare to go all out.
->''You know what to do Duegan, let's go''
->''You know what to do Duegan, let's go''
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-->Clief stared at his opponent, quickly measuring her up. Any kind of tactics he had learned over all of his battles would come forth in this one. He was facing a goddess; a being on another level from himself. It was all out or die; that was the type of fight he was now taking part in. He unclipped his sheathe from his hip and stabbed it into the ground. He then proceeded to take his coat off, as requested, and hooked it over the hilt of his steel sword. Emote hovered in the sky, watching her prey as he did as she commanded. A large smile erupted on her face as she watched Clief prepare to go all out.
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Giving Clief a well-earned CMOA
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** As part of the above, after recovering, The Executioner transforms into a ''demonic tank'' sporting a {{BFG}} as its primary weapon. The [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown devastation it unleashes]] on The Macross is what finally manages to kill it.
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** As part of the above, after recovering, The Executioner transforms into a ''demonic tank'' sporting a {{BFG}} as its primary weapon. The [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown devastation it unleashes]] on The Macross is what finally manages to kill it.it.
* Clief, a young warrior, lacking in confidence by nature, and on a bad losing streak, is trying to find details about his past, and now finds himself [[http://www.neoseeker.com/forums/index.php?fn=view_thread&t=1583922 fighting a literal Goddess on a dying planet]]. He knows he's out of his league and has already contemplated how fit a place to die this might be, and, after fighting one another for a little while, Emote (in her Anger form) taunts him by saying he has a pretty coat and should take it off so it doesn't get damaged, then goads him to unleash his strongest ability, which she is fully aware of. Clief's response to all this?
->Clief stared at his opponent, quickly measuring her up. Any kind of tactics he had learned over all of his battles would come forth in this one. He was facing a goddess; a being on another level from himself. It was all out or die; that was the type of fight he was now taking part in. He unclipped his sheathe from his hip and stabbed it into the ground. He then proceeded to take his coat off, as requested, and hooked it over the hilt of his steel sword. Emote hovered in the sky, watching her prey as he did as she commanded. A large smile erupted on her face as she watched Clief prepare to go all out.
->''You know what to do Duegan, let's go''
* Clief, a young warrior, lacking in confidence by nature, and on a bad losing streak, is trying to find details about his past, and now finds himself [[http://www.neoseeker.com/forums/index.php?fn=view_thread&t=1583922 fighting a literal Goddess on a dying planet]]. He knows he's out of his league and has already contemplated how fit a place to die this might be, and, after fighting one another for a little while, Emote (in her Anger form) taunts him by saying he has a pretty coat and should take it off so it doesn't get damaged, then goads him to unleash his strongest ability, which she is fully aware of. Clief's response to all this?
->Clief stared at his opponent, quickly measuring her up. Any kind of tactics he had learned over all of his battles would come forth in this one. He was facing a goddess; a being on another level from himself. It was all out or die; that was the type of fight he was now taking part in. He unclipped his sheathe from his hip and stabbed it into the ground. He then proceeded to take his coat off, as requested, and hooked it over the hilt of his steel sword. Emote hovered in the sky, watching her prey as he did as she commanded. A large smile erupted on her face as she watched Clief prepare to go all out.
->''You know what to do Duegan, let's go''
