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* A small but no less important moment is Ruby offering Control Freak a way for him to use his incredible technology for non-criminal means, while still letting him play the role of the villain that he so enjoys. He's honestly considering her advice as he's being taken away. It shows how readily the young girl has embraced the ''other'' side of heroics, helping reform criminals as opposed to simply fighting them. It harkens back to her words to Blake that first night at Beacon.
---> Well, that's why we're here. To make [things] better.
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* A small smaller but no less important moment is Ruby offering Ruby's advice to Control Freak Freak, explaining a way for him to use his incredible technology for non-criminal means, while still letting him play the role of the villain that he so enjoys. He's honestly considering her advice as he's being taken away. It shows how readily the young girl has embraced the ''other'' side of heroics, helping reform criminals as opposed to simply fighting them. It harkens back to her words to Blake that first night at Beacon.
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* During a training session with Weiss and Willow, Whitley manages to surpass even his sister with mastering his semblance by actually managing to successfully summon a ghostly version of Brainiac's drones.
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* During a training session with Weiss and Willow, Whitley manages to surpass even his sister with mastering his semblance by actually managing to successfully summon a ghostly version of Brainiac's drones. Unfortunately, [[TraumaButton the sight of one of the things responsible for his torture triggers his PTSD,]] but it is still an impressive step forward.
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* While it ended on a Sour note, the fact remains that the Remnentians did a good job contributing to defending gotham. Capturing 10 supervillains, breaking up 2 gangs and helping find the ManBehindTheMan to Scarecrow. As they mused on leaving, they did enough to bring some brightness back to the streets.
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* And at the end of the chapter, Team JNPR and Penny meet an unexpected group: Mystery Inc!
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[[folder: Chapter Fifty-Seven - Friends You Haven't Met Yet]]
* Halo's powers are steadily improving with training, allowing her to harness new colors and thereby new powers.
* In a few tests with Back Canary and Mr. Terrific, Jaune discovers his Semblance can bolster Canary's physical strength, Canary cry and healing, opening more possibilities for him to help.
* Artificial Dust finally becomes a thing of reality.
* And at the end of the chapter, Team JNPR and Penny meet an unexpected group: Mystery Inc!
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* Halo's powers are steadily improving with training, allowing her to harness new colors and thereby new powers.
* In a few tests with Back Canary and Mr. Terrific, Jaune discovers his Semblance can bolster Canary's physical strength, Canary cry and healing, opening more possibilities for him to help.
* Artificial Dust finally becomes a thing of reality.
* And at the end of the chapter, Team JNPR and Penny meet an unexpected group: Mystery Inc!
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** And then, proving that's she's not one to sit on her laurels, promptly begins planning to adapt to this and emerge on top through intelligence rather than power.
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** In addition, Ares states that he doubts either of them can do anything to hurt each other, meaning that had he tried to attack her, it would've gotten [[NoSell the same reaction]]. Yes, you read that right. Salem is strong enough to shrug off attacks from the ''god of war''.
** In addition, Ares states that he doubts either of them can do anything to hurt each other, meaning that had he tried to attack her, it would've gotten [[NoSell the same reaction]]. Yes, you read that right. Salem is strong enough to shrug off attacks from the ''god of war''.
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** Of course, [[TheChessmaster Luthor is aware of this]]. But Salem is aware that he's aware. But is [[IKnowYouKnowIKnow she aware that he's aware that she's aware that he's aware?]]
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While these are mostly fluffy comedy chapters, there are some awesome moments:
* Grimm Victory:
** To put things bluntly, '''''Salem wins.''''' She spends a year cataloguing the strengths and weaknesses of each hero, while having Grimm tunnel beneath countless cities. She sends the exact Grimm to defeat the heroes as necessary, and then, when ready, ''strikes''.
*** To give some examples, she has Apathy drain the Green Lanterns' will, Chills possess the Flash, and Manticores set the Martian Manhunter on fire.
** Salem also manages to turn Superboy over to her side and has him kill Lex Luthor.
** She managed to recruit Ares somehow, and her Grimm and his armies manage to defeat what remains of the Justice League. Then, for her coup de grace...
** '''''Salem kills Superman'''''. She fills her body with Kryptonite in order to weaken him whenever he punches her, then blasts him with magic until he keels over. ''Everyone'' [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere runs for it after that]], with the exception of Ruby who unleashes her Silver Eyes, but Salem survives this thanks to Ares' magic. It cannot be understated what an acheivement this is. Lex Luthor has spent decades scheming to kill Superman and always failed. Salem succeeded in a year. This puts her on the same tier of people like '''''Doomsday''''', who in the comics has defeated ''Darkseid''.
** But this is still just her opening act. She begins creating a massive army of human-Grimm hybrids with metagenes. The Hound was one such creature, and it had no metagene and was still one of the most dangerous opponents the heroes have ever faced. With an entire army, Salem poses a good chance at her primary goal: killing Brainiac.
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* Luthor and Salem's mind-games with one another, trying to gain the advantage. In the end, Luthor seemingly comes out on top because he has the only means to help Salem and her inner circle escape from their entrapment within the empty void of space.
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** Of course, [[TheChessmaster Luthor is aware of this]]. But Salem is aware that he's aware. But is [[IKnowYouKnowIKnow she aware that he's aware that she's aware that he's aware?]]
** Of course, [[TheChessmaster Luthor is aware of this]]. But Salem is aware that he's aware. But is [[IKnowYouKnowIKnow she aware that he's aware that she's aware that he's aware?]]
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* Even long before he became Cyborg, Victor was already a hero by saving a family that was being attacked by Parademons during the Darkseid War by hot-wiring a pick-up truck and [[CarFu ramming it]] into said parademons. Even Kalibak [[YouGotSpunk was impressed]] by his bravery.
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* Even long before he became Cyborg, Victor was already a hero by saving a family that was being attacked by Parademons during the Darkseid War by hot-wiring a pick-up truck and [[CarFu ramming it]] into said parademons. Even Kalibak [[YouGotSpunk was impressed]] impressed by his bravery.
