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** The Shells of the Titan, three mini-duplicates of the Wandering Titan's shell that orbit around Lindon, giving of the spiritual feel of a mountain range and strong enough to stop Vroshir energy weapons.
** The cloak of the Bleeding Phoenix, resembling a cloak of boiling blood, strong enough to absorb and steal Li Markuth's sword that could level entire fortresses outside of Cradle.
** Chainmail made of the scales of the Weeping Dragon, further protection in case something gets past the Shells of the Titan, able to conduct storm madra.
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* Every single weapon Lindon makes from the Dreadgods counts as Awesome:
** The Bow of the Silent King, incredibly spiritually dense, able to forge dream madra into arrows due to the binding at its heart, when fired the arrows will create illusory duplicates that Lindon himself has a hard time telling apart from the original and that have such a high level of existence that they can harm Monarchs. He has twelve real arrows made from the bones of the Silent King that have an even greater spiritual weight and three arrows that were forged from ''Penance prototypes''.
** Wavedancer is reforged with the binding of the Weeping Dragon, allowing it to forge eight copies of itself out of storm madra when in use, forming a nine sword formation. It is able to forge living lighting serpents out of nearby storm madra and control nearby storm aura to buffet and push back foes without needing to consume madra from the user. Its binding is able to recreate the Weeping Dragon's dragon's breath, a technique strong enough to reach the moon and carve a visible trench in it.
** He reforges Netherclaw and the old sword of the Sword Sage with the binding of the Bleeding Phoenix, what the binding does is not revealed but it can be surmised that it is extremely strong given how Yerin was impressed with it despite having already worked for the Abidan for two years.
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** The Bow of the Silent King, incredibly spiritually dense, able to forge dream madra into arrows due to the binding at its heart, when fired the arrows will create illusory duplicates that Lindon himself has a hard time telling apart from the original and that have such a high level of existence that they can harm Monarchs. He has twelve real arrows made from the bones of the Silent King that have an even greater spiritual weight and three arrows that were forged from ''Penance prototypes''.
** Wavedancer is reforged with the binding of the Weeping Dragon, allowing it to forge eight copies of itself out of storm madra when in use, forming a nine sword formation. It is able to forge living lighting serpents out of nearby storm madra and control nearby storm aura to buffet and push back foes without needing to consume madra from the user. Its binding is able to recreate the Weeping Dragon's dragon's breath, a technique strong enough to reach the moon and carve a visible trench in it.
** He reforges Netherclaw and the old sword of the Sword Sage with the binding of the Bleeding Phoenix, what the binding does is not revealed but it can be surmised that it is extremely strong given how Yerin was impressed with it despite having already worked for the Abidan for two years.
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* When Ziel finally meets the Sage of Calling Storms again, he shield-bashes him so hard his arm breaks and they carve a trench into the ground before proceeding to smash him to paste with his hammer. It doesn't stick due to his hyper-regeneration but it's still impressive.
* Yerin's manifestation of her icon. After watching all the harm Malice has inflicted upon Mercy, the rest of her family and the world, Yerin cannot see her as anything but a monster... and what was her Archlord revelation again?
* Yerin's manifestation of her icon. After watching all the harm Malice has inflicted upon Mercy, the rest of her family and the world, Yerin cannot see her as anything but a monster... and what was her Archlord revelation again?
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* When Ziel finally meets the Sage of Calling Storms again, he shield-bashes him so hard his arm breaks and they carve a trench into the ground ground, before proceeding to smash him to paste with his hammer. It doesn't stick due to his hyper-regeneration but it's still impressive.
* The Weeping Dragon is about to blast the rest of Lindon's team with dragon's breath... so Lindon draws from both his cores at the same time, performs two different soulfire powered full-body Enforcer techniques that threaten to tear his body apart and calls upon the Void and Dragon Icons at the same time to burn his body for fuel for the technique (including his physical body, spirit, blood essence and ''lifeline'') in order to allow him to move fast enough to push the Weeping Dragon's head up. He then '''wins in a direct contest of strength with the Dreadgod,''' forcing it to fire its technique at the moon where it carves a trench into the surface that can be '''seen with the naked eye.''' He passes out immediately afterwards but this is one of the most literal examples of BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu I have ever seen.
* Yerin's manifestation of hericon.Icon. After watching all the harm Malice has inflicted upon Mercy, the rest of her family and the world, Yerin cannot see her as anything but a monster... and what was her Archlord revelation again?
* The Weeping Dragon is about to blast the rest of Lindon's team with dragon's breath... so Lindon draws from both his cores at the same time, performs two different soulfire powered full-body Enforcer techniques that threaten to tear his body apart and calls upon the Void and Dragon Icons at the same time to burn his body for fuel for the technique (including his physical body, spirit, blood essence and ''lifeline'') in order to allow him to move fast enough to push the Weeping Dragon's head up. He then '''wins in a direct contest of strength with the Dreadgod,''' forcing it to fire its technique at the moon where it carves a trench into the surface that can be '''seen with the naked eye.''' He passes out immediately afterwards but this is one of the most literal examples of BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu I have ever seen.
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"'''Die,'''" Yerin ordered. She brought her sword down in a simple overhand chop.\\
And at Yerin's command, the Death Icon descended on Akura Malice.
And at Yerin's command, the Death Icon descended on Akura Malice.
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* While searching for a way to imbue Yerin's Herald attacks with authority, the echo of Sword Sage suggests that Heralds can copy the attacks of Sages and Monarchs in order to "feel out" how their authority flows through attacks. Lindon asks if it ''has'' to be a sword, instead suggesting that she copy the attacks of '''Ozriel himself'''. Eventually, she does so successfully, naming the technique the Reaper's Sword. To emphasise the point, at Herald Yerin managed to imitate enough of the skill of a '''Judge''' to stop Malice's attacks later.
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* While searching for a way to imbue Yerin's Herald attacks with authority, the echo of Sword Sage suggests that Heralds can copy the attacks of Sages and Monarchs in order to "feel out" how their authority flows through attacks. Lindon asks if it ''has'' to be a sword, instead suggesting that she copy the attacks of '''Ozriel himself'''. Eventually, she does so successfully, naming the technique the Reaper's Sword. To emphasise the point, at Herald Herald, Yerin managed to imitate enough of the skill of a '''Judge''' to stop Malice's attacks later.
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-->And she remembered her Archlord revelation. It wasn't to ''fight'' monsters. Yerin was meant to ''kill'' them.\\
In that silent world, Yerin looked to Malice and saw a monster.\\
She'd been using her anger at Malice, her disgust, for motivation. But that wasn't what Eithan felt when he swung his scythe. It wasn't what she had felt when she'd used Penance.\\
This wasn't revenge.\\
It was an execution.\\
In a world that still seemed frozen, Yerin pulled her sword back almost causally. An image in the sky mimicked her movements. Not a sword.\\
A vast, black scythe.\\
"'''Die'''," Yerin ordered.
-->And she remembered her Archlord revelation. It wasn't to ''fight'' monsters. Yerin was meant to ''kill'' them.\\
In that silent world, Yerin looked to Malice and saw a monster.\\
She'd been using her anger at Malice, her disgust, for motivation. But that wasn't what Eithan felt when he swung his scythe. It wasn't what she had felt when she'd used Penance.\\
This wasn't revenge.\\
It was an execution.\\
In a world that still seemed frozen, Yerin pulled her sword back almost causally. An image in the sky mimicked her movements. Not a sword.\\
A vast, black scythe.\\
"'''Die'''," Yerin ordered.
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* When Ziel finally meets the Sage of Calling Storms again, he shield-bashes him so hard his arm breaks and they carve a trench into the ground before proceeding to smash him to paste with his hammer. It doesn't stick due to his hyper-regeneration but it's still impressive.
* When Ziel finally meets the Sage of Calling Storms again, he shield-bashes him so hard his arm breaks and they carve a trench into the ground before proceeding to smash him to paste with his hammer. It doesn't stick due to his hyper-regeneration but it's still impressive.
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* Cassias has spent the book as Eithan's gopher/StraightMan. He's cornered by eight Highgolds led by one of the top 300 strongest in the entire kingdom. Once he has checked his wife and child are safe, he reveals that he's the number 2 and ends the fight very, very quickly.
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* Cassias has spent the book as Eithan's gopher/StraightMan. He's He spends the early part of the Jai clan attack panicking trying to find his wife and child. He confirms they're safe shortly after being cornered by eight Highgolds led by one of the top 300 strongest in the entire kingdom. Once he has checked his wife and child are safe, he reveals Said Highgold completely panics upon realizing that it's Cassias they're fighting, since he's the ranked number 2 and ends in the entire empire. The fight end very, very quickly.quickly.
** A minor point in the above, but the person Cassias is ranked 2nd to? His own wife. Talk about a BattleCouple.
** A minor point in the above, but the person Cassias is ranked 2nd to? His own wife. Talk about a BattleCouple.
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* Reigan Shen attacks Sacred Valley to distract Lindon and waste his time. Lindon fights him off. ''By himself''. Using a bow forged from the Silent King that creates thousands of illusory duplicates of every arrow--except that these "illusions" are so powerful that they can shatter Monarch techniques. And then he pulls out the arrows ''forged from the Penance prototypes'', which follow Reigan Shen halfway across the world and force him to use an Abidan Titan artifact to survive. Dross even notes that if they pursue, they have a decent (though not great) chance of killing him outright.
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* Reigan Shen attacks Sacred Valley to distract Lindon and waste his time. Lindon fights him off. ''By himself''. Using a bow forged from the Silent King that creates thousands of illusory duplicates of every arrow--except that these "illusions" are so powerful that they can shatter Monarch techniques.techniques and the bow has such a high level of existence that it touches the Way itself. And then he pulls out the arrows ''forged from the Penance prototypes'', which follow Reigan Shen halfway across the world and force him to use an Abidan Titan artifact to survive. Dross even notes that if they pursue, they have a decent (though not great) chance of killing him outright.
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* After suffering defeat against Lindon in the fight above Shen then attacks Lindon again in concert with Northstrider, Akura Malice, two Sages, and an entire contingent of Archlords. Lindon once again rebuffs them with a combination of his Silent King bow, the Labyrinth's defenses, and when he's finally pushed he activates his most powerful weapon: The [[OurGhostsAreDifferent Hunger Echo of Ozmanthus Arelius]]. Who then proceeds to take out rebuff all three attacking [[PersonOfMassDestruction Monarchs]] with '''one. attack.''' Not to say anything of how Lindon is able to drive away the two Sages and their Archlords with either his [[HardLight illusionary copies]] or in direct combat which last '''seconds'''.
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* Yerin, after joining the Reapers, is shown doing a solo mission to save an iteration. A kingdom on its last legs is trying for the last time to summon a hero from another world to defeat the Dark Lord whose conquest of the World is nearly complete. Yerin shows up, determines this kingdom doesn't seem to be evil, opens a portal to the Dark Lord's throne room, checks he's evil, then kills him with a single stroke, leaving only an ear behind. Yerin does this so quickly, that in the legends of this world, she's the Mighty Warrior Heron.
* Lindon's final battle is a rematch against the Li Grand Patriarch, who tries again to invade Cradle in the next Seven Years Festival after being freed from Haven. This time Lindon doesn't require the help of a Judge, and shocks Li Markath that a child he didn't even remember killing the first time was able to defeat him with ease in the span of seven years.
* Lindon's final battle is a rematch against the Li Grand Patriarch, who tries again to invade Cradle in the next Seven Years Festival after being freed from Haven. This time Lindon doesn't require the help of a Judge, and shocks Li Markath that a child he didn't even remember killing the first time was able to defeat him with ease in the span of seven years.
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%%* The very first thing that happens is Lindon '''builds a world'''. Yes, it's a tiny one, but this is the sort of thing that Monarchs have trouble with.
%%* Lindon uses items stolen from all the Monarchs to steal their authority, borrowing their Icons for a moment and replicating the wish Yerin made in Bloodline. End result? He heals Mercy from permanent spiritual damage.
%%* Part of the training hall is a replica of the bottom of the Labyrinth, the seven rooms where the original Judges (and later Ozriel) gained their power.
%%-->"What ''are'' these?" Orthos asked.\\
%%[The Paths of Heaven,] Dross responded, and for once he sounded completely serious.
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%%* Lindon uses items stolen from all the Monarchs to steal their authority, borrowing their Icons for a moment and replicating the wish Yerin made in Bloodline. End result? He heals Mercy from permanent spiritual damage.
%%* Part of the training hall is a replica of the bottom of the Labyrinth, the seven rooms where the original Judges (and later Ozriel) gained their power.
%%-->"What ''are'' these?" Orthos asked.\\
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%%* Lindon uses items stolen from all the Monarchs to steal their authority, borrowing their Icons for a moment and replicating the wish Yerin made in Bloodline. End result? He heals Mercy from permanent spiritual damage.
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* Cassias has spent the book as Eithan's gopher/StraightMan. He's cornered by eight ''Truegolds'' led by one of the top 300 strongest in the entire kingdom. Once he has checked his wife and child are safe, he reveals that he's the number 2 and ends the fight very, very quickly.
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* Cassias has spent the book as Eithan's gopher/StraightMan. He's cornered by eight ''Truegolds'' Highgolds led by one of the top 300 strongest in the entire kingdom. Once he has checked his wife and child are safe, he reveals that he's the number 2 and ends the fight very, very quickly.
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** Even better, the elder ''refuses'' to believe that he actually unsouled, and even makes him a WeCanRuleTogether offer under the impression that Lindon is actually a powerful expert.
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-->In the weeks leading up to the Seven-Year Festival, he'd trained every day to deal with possible threats. What if an opponent could resist the Empty Palm? What if they had a technique they could land on him first? What if his madra was exhausted before the later rounds?\\
But as the sun crept past noon and Lindon defeated his fifth opponent, he realized there was one scenario he'd never prepared for: easy victory.\\
[...]\\
The reality slowly set in, like water seeping into soil. He'd won a tournament, even a small one, using ''actual'' sacred arts. He was a sacred artist, and all of Sacred Valley knew it.
-->In the weeks leading up to the Seven-Year Festival, he'd trained every day to deal with possible threats. What if an opponent could resist the Empty Palm? What if they had a technique they could land on him first? What if his madra was exhausted before the later rounds?\\
But as the sun crept past noon and Lindon defeated his fifth opponent, he realized there was one scenario he'd never prepared for: easy victory.\\
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The reality slowly set in, like water seeping into soil. He'd won a tournament, even a small one, using ''actual'' sacred arts. He was a sacred artist, and all of Sacred Valley knew it.
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* The Silent King sends out call for the other Dreadgods... and watches in horror as Lindon [[BeyondTheImpossible catches the cry for help and eats it]].
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-->'''Mercy:''' [[DoubleMeaning I'm not She is Malice, I'm I am Mercy!]]
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* Lindon and Yerin fight Malice. Despite Malice holding the fight over Moongrave--thus holding her own city hostage--they manage to force her to flee. They force a ''Monarch'' to flee from her ''home turf''.
** During the fight, Malice sticks Mercy in a pocket dimension to keep her from just leaving with Lindon and Yerin. Mercy proceeds to use her Book of Eternal Night (which [[HoistByTheirOwnPetard Malice unlocked for her]]) to temporarily reach ''Herald level'', busting out of the pocket dimension in kaiju-sized amethyst armor and trade blows with her mother.
** After the fight, Mercy is in a coma from overuse of power. She is guarded by Charity, Pride, and every other high-ranking Akura Archlord left. Lindon and Yerin show up and take her. They take the heir of a Monarch straight out of her home city.
--->Charity hesitated. She glanced around as though looking for help. Then, helplessly, she moved.\\
Lindon bent down to pick Mercy up, but one person stood up to him. Pride covered her. "We'll take care of her," the Underlord insisted.\\
Lindon picked Mercy up anyway. "When I see you again," Lindon said, "I hope we're on the same side."\\
Then they left, because no one could stop them.
** During the fight, Malice sticks Mercy in a pocket dimension to keep her from just leaving with Lindon and Yerin. Mercy proceeds to use her Book of Eternal Night (which [[HoistByTheirOwnPetard Malice unlocked for her]]) to temporarily reach ''Herald level'', busting out of the pocket dimension in kaiju-sized amethyst armor and trade blows with her mother.
** After the fight, Mercy is in a coma from overuse of power. She is guarded by Charity, Pride, and every other high-ranking Akura Archlord left. Lindon and Yerin show up and take her. They take the heir of a Monarch straight out of her home city.
--->Charity hesitated. She glanced around as though looking for help. Then, helplessly, she moved.\\
Lindon bent down to pick Mercy up, but one person stood up to him. Pride covered her. "We'll take care of her," the Underlord insisted.\\
Lindon picked Mercy up anyway. "When I see you again," Lindon said, "I hope we're on the same side."\\
Then they left, because no one could stop them.
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* A smaller scene, but the bottom of the Labyrinth doesn't disappoint. Lindon finds the chambers of the original seven Abidan (plus a new one Eithan carved for himself at some point), filled with scripts so powerful that they cause an ''Archlord's'' eyes to ''bleed''.
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* The Wandering Titan doesn't wander anymore, now it sprints towards its target.
* [[spoiler:Lindon accidentally breaks his oath, and while Malice eventually helps him, both she and Charity consider Lindon's future advancement crippled. After Lindon wakes up, he immediately starts training.]]
* Yerin advancing and becoming a full Herald.
* The Wandering Titan doesn't wander anymore, now it sprints towards its target.
* [[spoiler:Lindon accidentally breaks his oath, and while Malice eventually helps him, both she and Charity consider Lindon's future advancement crippled. After Lindon wakes up, he immediately starts training.]]
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* The Wandering Titan doesn't wander anymore. Now it ''sprints'' towards its target, like a mountain running.
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*another. The Wandering Titan doesn't wander anymore, now it sprints towards its target.
and the Silent King use this to set a trap, since the defenses against one are so different from another.
*[[spoiler:Lindon Lindon accidentally breaks his oath, and while Malice eventually helps him, both she and Charity consider it likely that Lindon's future advancement crippled. After Lindon is crippled. Charity even warns Mercy that it's likely he'll destroy his apartment in pure instinctive fear when he wakes up. When he wakes up, he... shakes his head, double-checks to see if his oath is still in place (that is, ''the single most traumatic thing he could do right now'') and immediately starts training.]]
training again.
* Yerin advancing and becoming a fullHerald.Herald by figuring out her Archlord revelation.
-->The aura from the natural treasures around her died, the winds falling. Now nothing concealed the bodies of the Silent King thralls who had tried to attack her while she advanced. They had posed a threat to her while she was in the middle of advancement.\\
But not when she had finished. Then, they faced her new purpose.\\
"''To kill monsters.''"
* The newly empowered Dreadgods.
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* Yerin advancing and becoming a full
-->The aura from the natural treasures around her died, the winds falling. Now nothing concealed the bodies of the Silent King thralls who had tried to attack her while she advanced. They had posed a threat to her while she was in the middle of advancement.\\
But not when she had finished. Then, they faced her new purpose.\\
"''To kill monsters.''"
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* [[spoiler:Lindon kills the Silent King. One Dreadgod down, three to go.]]
** [[spoiler:Lindon ''usurps'' the Silent King's position as a Dreadgod, and becomes a proto-Dreadgod himself]]
** [[spoiler:Lindon ''usurps'' the Silent King's position as a Dreadgod, and becomes a proto-Dreadgod himself]]
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* [[spoiler:Lindon Lindon kills the Silent King. One Dreadgod down, three to go.]]
** [[spoiler:Lindongo.
-->But the Silent King hadn't given up yet. He snarled and swept his paw at the tiny human that dared to seize him by the throat.\\
An oversized, blue-white palm strike of pure madra landed on his huge chest. Lindon's Empty Palm.\\
Unpowered by madra, the Silent King's paw hit Lindon's side with the force of a housecat. The King looked into the empty eyes of the Void Sage and thought that having some more physical power might not be so bad.
* Lindon ''usurps'' the Silent King's position as a Dreadgod, and becomes a proto-Dreadgodhimself]]himself.
-->Malice sneered at him. "Do you know how much stronger the other three will become now that another has fallen? You cannot fathom--"\\
"Four," Lindon corrected. He raised his right hand in a fist. "The other four."\\
Power exploded from the Silent King's corpse. Hunger aura. It flashed to every corner of the world, empowering the other Dreadgods.\\
All four of them.
** [[spoiler:Lindon
-->But the Silent King hadn't given up yet. He snarled and swept his paw at the tiny human that dared to seize him by the throat.\\
An oversized, blue-white palm strike of pure madra landed on his huge chest. Lindon's Empty Palm.\\
Unpowered by madra, the Silent King's paw hit Lindon's side with the force of a housecat. The King looked into the empty eyes of the Void Sage and thought that having some more physical power might not be so bad.
* Lindon ''usurps'' the Silent King's position as a Dreadgod, and becomes a proto-Dreadgod
-->Malice sneered at him. "Do you know how much stronger the other three will become now that another has fallen? You cannot fathom--"\\
"Four," Lindon corrected. He raised his right hand in a fist. "The other four."\\
Power exploded from the Silent King's corpse. Hunger aura. It flashed to every corner of the world, empowering the other Dreadgods.\\
All four of them.
