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* Lindon kills an Underlord at Truegold.
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* Lindon kills fights a one on one with an Underlord at Truegold.as a Truegold using super powerful cannons.
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* Lindon kills the Wandering Titan with one hit the second the Pheonix was distracted.
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* Lindon kills fights a brief 1v1 against the Wandering Titan with one hit the second the Pheonix was distracted.Titan.
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* Lindon, after being attacked and left for dead, gets up and manages to kill the Sandviper heir face-to-face in a fair fight (despite Jai Long's later complaints).
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* Lindon, after being attacked stabbed through the shoulder and left for dead, gets up and manages to kill kills the Sandviper heir face-to-face in a fair fight (despite Jai Long's later complaints).by stabbing ''him''.
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* In the final battle, Lindon kills and consumes four of the Uncrowned in quick succession, demonstrating beyond a shadow of a doubt that he ''would'' have been Uncrowned if he hadn't faced Yerin in his first match. To underline the point, he collects the Uncrowned construct from one of the corpses, implying he's going to find a way to attach it to his soul.
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* When Mercy, Eithan and Lindon arrive at Sky's Edge, Pride says that it was foolish to come and that they should have brought backup, since it is surrounded. Mercy is confused since they are the backup.
--> '''Pride:''' You should have brought reinforcements.
--> '''Mercy, confused:''' We did.
* Following the above, Lindon proposes a duel against the people who had surrounded his team, and during it proceeds to close the gap between him and his opponent less than a second after the battle had begun, ignores all of his enemy's attacks as if they weren't there and [[Main/{{Vampiric Draining}} consumes the person's madra]], terrifying the onlookers. No one wanted to duel anymore after that.
* In the final battle, Lindon kills and consumesfour three of the Uncrowned in quick succession, demonstrating beyond a shadow of a doubt that he ''would'' have been Uncrowned if he hadn't faced Yerin in his first match. To underline the point, he collects the Uncrowned construct from one of the corpses, implying he's going to find a way to attach it to his soul.
--> '''Pride:''' You should have brought reinforcements.
--> '''Mercy, confused:''' We did.
* Following the above, Lindon proposes a duel against the people who had surrounded his team, and during it proceeds to close the gap between him and his opponent less than a second after the battle had begun, ignores all of his enemy's attacks as if they weren't there and [[Main/{{Vampiric Draining}} consumes the person's madra]], terrifying the onlookers. No one wanted to duel anymore after that.
* In the final battle, Lindon kills and consumes
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* Yan Shoumei's bloodshadow Crusher which has almost Herald level strength takes one look at Lindon and ''runs away''.
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* When the Dragon died, Lindon rose up on threads of power, being empowered by it, after its death. It utterly terrified Malice.
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* When the Weeping Dragon died, Lindon rose up on threads of power, energy, being empowered by it, the Dragon, after its death. It utterly terrified Malice.
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* When Lindon merely lets his veil slip a tiny inch, the crowd he was talking to sense it like a blade of an executioner hanging right above them.
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* When Lindon merely lets his veil slip a tiny inch, the crowd he was talking to sense it his power like a blade of an executioner hanging right above them.
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* Malice appears after the Weeping Dragon is killed, having sensed that everyone is unconscious. She puts Mercy in a void space to take home, then looses an arrow at Yerin, figuring that she might as well eliminate one of her enemies (she knows she can't hold Yerin for long). Except Lindon wakes up, and all of Malice's senses '''scream''' at her that if the first thing Lindon sees is Yerin dying, ''Malice has no possible future''. She desperately manages to cancel her own technique, and turns around to see Lindon just... standing there. He pulls Mercy out of the void space, makes sure all his friends are all right, and goes off to consume the Weeping Dragon... all while ''completely unconscious''. Malice just stands by with the air of someone holding their breath while a predator looks for them.
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* Ziel stabs the Weeping Dragon with a Penance Arrow which results in its death.
* Malice appearsafter as the Weeping Dragon is killed, on the verge of death, having sensed that everyone is unconscious. She puts Mercy in a void space to take home, then looses an arrow at Yerin, figuring that she might as well eliminate one of her enemies (she knows she can't hold Yerin for long). Except Lindon wakes up, and all of Malice's senses '''scream''' at her that if the first thing Lindon sees is Yerin dying, ''Malice has no possible future''. She desperately manages to cancel her own technique, and turns around to see Lindon just... standing there. He pulls Mercy out of the void space, makes sure all his friends are all right, and goes off to consume the Weeping Dragon... all while ''completely unconscious''. Malice just stands by with the air of someone holding their breath while a predator looks for them.them.
* When the Dragon died, Lindon rose up on threads of power, being empowered by it, after its death. It utterly terrified Malice.
* Lindon starts effecting the aura and makes the sky go black after the Weeping Dragon dies.
* When Lindon looks up at Malice, she ''runs away''.
* Malice appears
* When the Dragon died, Lindon rose up on threads of power, being empowered by it, after its death. It utterly terrified Malice.
* Lindon starts effecting the aura and makes the sky go black after the Weeping Dragon dies.
* When Lindon looks up at Malice, she ''runs away''.
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* Lindon kills the Wandering Titan with one hit the second the Pheonix was distracted.
* Lindon and Yerin kill the Pheonix together by commanding it to die.
* The sky turns completely black after Lindon's victory, thanks to his presence affecting the aura.
* Lindon and Yerin kill the Pheonix together by commanding it to die.
* The sky turns completely black after Lindon's victory, thanks to his presence affecting the aura.
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* When Lindon merely lets his veil slip a tiny inch, the crowd he was talking to sense it like a blade of an executioner hanging right above them.
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** We don't see the shield he made for Ziel but it is a shield made with a Dreadgod binding so certainly awesome.
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* Lindon kills an Iron. It wasn't an outright fight, sure, but he still wins and kills his opponent.
* Lindon, after being attacked and left for dead, gets up and manages to kill the Sandviper heir face-to-face in a fair fight (despite Jai Long's later complaints).
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* Yerin advancing to Highgold mid-fight with Jai Long, and suddenly she is outmatching him.
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* Yerin advancing to Highgold mid-fight with Jai Long, and suddenly she is outmatching him. Jai Long was a Truegold,so still a stage above her.
* Lindon kills an Underlord at Truegold.
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* Lindon stabs a Jade, and after getting thrown high into the sky, manages to twist mid-air to throw seals down at a Sage remnant. He is then able to call a Thousand Mile Cloud to him and land on it, then fly away. He does all this with no training of any kind ever.
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-->The Silent King called for more Dreadgods. It ran into the first one an inch from his throat. And there the call stopped.\\
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-->The Silent King called for more Dreadgods. It ran into the first one an inch from his throat. And there the call stopped.\\
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* Lindon's final battle is a rematch against the Li Grand Patriarch, who tries again to invade Cradle in the next Seven Years Festival after being freed from Haven. This time Lindon doesn't require the help of a Judge, and shocks Li Markath that a child he didn't even remember killing the first time was able to defeat him with ease in the span of seven years. Culminating in Lindon revealing the weapons and armor Lindon forged from the Dreadgod parts (most of which don't even have bindings.
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* Lindon's final battle is a rematch against the Li Grand Patriarch, who tries again to invade Cradle in the next Seven Years Festival after being freed from Haven. This time Lindon doesn't require the help of a Judge, and shocks Li Markath that a child he didn't even remember killing the first time was able to defeat him with ease in the span of seven years. Culminating in Lindon revealing the weapons and armor Lindon he forged from the Dreadgod parts (most of which don't even have bindings.bindings).
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* After Lindon ascends, he finds himself in a Vroshir homeworld. After escaping the "welcome party" (they were fully prepared for Monarchs, he just ''blew past them anyway''), he faces a Silver Lord. Just as it looks like she might be able to handle him, he gets help from an unexpected source.
-->The Abidan appeared with no warning, his fist sending out ripples of darkness from its impact against the dagger. There was the stylized symbol of a wolf's head on the breast of his armor, and he wore no helmet--most of the Abidan had their heads bare.\\
His hair drifted up, twisting like living shadow, and excitement gleamed in his red eyes.\\
''[...]''\\
"You finally made it!" Akura Fury said happily.
* Lindon's first mission as a Reaper: He is sent to Verge, the world where Suriel was forced to accelerate its fated end, where he faces the Devourer of Dimensions, a Class-2 Fiend. A prince of the world (one of the ones slightly responsible for everything going wrong) meets him, and tries to help. Lindon tells him to just stand aside.
-->"How can you face that?" the prince asked. "That's not an enemy, that's... the end."\\
Lindon lifted into the air and turned to face the [[EldritchAbomination Fiend]]. Dark fire kindled in his hand.\\
"No," Lindon said. "I am the end."
-->The Abidan appeared with no warning, his fist sending out ripples of darkness from its impact against the dagger. There was the stylized symbol of a wolf's head on the breast of his armor, and he wore no helmet--most of the Abidan had their heads bare.\\
His hair drifted up, twisting like living shadow, and excitement gleamed in his red eyes.\\
''[...]''\\
"You finally made it!" Akura Fury said happily.
* Lindon's first mission as a Reaper: He is sent to Verge, the world where Suriel was forced to accelerate its fated end, where he faces the Devourer of Dimensions, a Class-2 Fiend. A prince of the world (one of the ones slightly responsible for everything going wrong) meets him, and tries to help. Lindon tells him to just stand aside.
-->"How can you face that?" the prince asked. "That's not an enemy, that's... the end."\\
Lindon lifted into the air and turned to face the [[EldritchAbomination Fiend]]. Dark fire kindled in his hand.\\
"No," Lindon said. "I am the end."
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* Malice appears after the Weeping Dragon is killed, having sensed that everyone is unconscious. She puts Mercy in a void space to take home, then looses an arrow at Yerin, figuring that she might as well eliminate one of her enemies (she knows she can't hold Yerin for long). Except Lindon wakes up, and all of Malice's senses '''scream''' at her that if the first thing Lindon sees is Yerin dying, ''Malice has no possible future''. She desperately manages to cancel her own technique, and turns around to see Lindon just... standing there. He pulls Mercy out of the void space, makes sure all his friends are all right, and goes off to consume the Weeping Dragon... all while ''completely unconscious''. Malice just stands by with the air of someone holding their breath while a predator looks for them.
* Lindon manages to fight the Bleeding Phoenix ''and'' the Wandering Titan, ''at the same time''. Quite the upgrade from getting crushed by the Titan's breathing back in ''Bloodline''. He's so powerful that at this point, Reigan Shen interfering is little more than a distraction.
* Lindon manages to fight the Bleeding Phoenix ''and'' the Wandering Titan, ''at the same time''. Quite the upgrade from getting crushed by the Titan's breathing back in ''Bloodline''. He's so powerful that at this point, Reigan Shen interfering is little more than a distraction.
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* Lindon's final battle is a rematch against the Li Grand Patriarch, who tries again to invade Cradle in the next Seven Years Festival after being freed from Haven. This time Lindon doesn't require the help of a Judge, and shocks Li Markath that a child he didn't even remember killing the first time was able to defeat him with ease in the span of seven years. Culminating in Lindon revealing the weapons and armor Lindon forged from the Dreadgod parts (most of which don't even have bindings.
-->All of Iteration 110 shook when these treasures were revealed, and Li Markuth finally realized how outclassed he really was.\\
"Was Suriel the one that granted you these powers?" Li Markuth asked. He still worked for a way out.\\
"Suriel ''and'' Ozriel," Lindon said.\\
Inwardly, Markuth cursed the Mad King. If he'd known two Judges had arranged for the protection of Cradle, he would have just fled.
-->All of Iteration 110 shook when these treasures were revealed, and Li Markuth finally realized how outclassed he really was.\\
"Was Suriel the one that granted you these powers?" Li Markuth asked. He still worked for a way out.\\
"Suriel ''and'' Ozriel," Lindon said.\\
Inwardly, Markuth cursed the Mad King. If he'd known two Judges had arranged for the protection of Cradle, he would have just fled.
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** Also note that it's implied this ''isn't'' some minor homegrown apocalypse. The mention of how easily he's been winning, how it seems as if destiny itself is on his side, implies that the Dark Lord is one of the Mad King's seeds, an ascendant being sent back to his own world to cause chaos, with powers far beyond what this world is capable of comprehending. Yerin still killed him in one hit.
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* After suffering defeat against Lindon in the fight above Shen then attacks Lindon again in concert with Northstrider, Akura Malice, two Sages, and an entire contingent of Archlords. Lindon once again rebuffs them with a combination of his Silent King bow, the Labyrinth's defenses, and when he's finally pushed he activates his most powerful weapon: The [[OurGhostsAreDifferent Hunger Echo of Ozmanthus Arelius]]. Who then proceeds to rebuff all three attacking [[PersonOfMassDestruction Monarchs]] with '''one. attack.''' Not to say anything of how Lindon is able to drive away the two Sages and their Archlords with either his [[HardLight illusionary copies]] or in direct combat which last '''seconds'''.
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* After suffering defeat against Lindon in the fight above Shen then attacks Lindon again in concert with Northstrider, Akura Malice, two Sages, and an entire contingent of Archlords. Lindon once again rebuffs them with a combination of his Silent King bow, the Labyrinth's defenses, and when he's finally pushed he activates his most powerful weapon: The [[OurGhostsAreDifferent Hunger Echo of Ozmanthus Arelius]]. Who then proceeds to rebuff all three attacking [[PersonOfMassDestruction Monarchs]] with '''one. '''one attack.''' Not to say anything of how Lindon is able to drive away the two Sages and their Archlords with either his [[HardLight illusionary copies]] or in direct combat which last '''seconds'''.
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* The Weeping Dragon is about to blast the rest of Lindon's team with dragon's breath... so Lindon draws from both his cores at the same time, performs two different soulfire powered full-body Enforcer techniques that threaten to tear his body apart and calls upon the Void and Dragon Icons at the same time to burn his body for fuel for the technique (including his physical body, spirit, blood essence and ''lifeline'') in order to allow him to move fast enough to push the Weeping Dragon's head up. He then '''wins in a direct contest of strength with the Dreadgod,''' forcing it to fire its technique at the moon where it carves a trench into the surface that can be '''seen with the naked eye.''' He passes out immediately afterwards but this is one of the most literal examples of BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu I have ever seen.
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* The Weeping Dragon is about to blast the rest of Lindon's team with dragon's breath... so Lindon draws from both his cores at the same time, performs two different soulfire powered full-body Enforcer techniques that threaten to tear his body apart and calls upon the Void and Dragon Icons at the same time to burn his body for fuel for the technique (including his physical body, spirit, blood essence and ''lifeline'') in order to allow him to move fast enough to push the Weeping Dragon's head up. He then '''wins in a direct contest of strength with the Dreadgod,''' forcing it to fire its technique at the moon where it carves a trench into the surface that can be '''seen with the naked eye.''' He passes out immediately afterwards but this is one of the most literal examples of BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu I have ever seen.afterwards.
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White letters on a black surface declared: [[SpellMyNameWithAThe The Destroyer has come.]]]
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White letters on a black surface declared: [[SpellMyNameWithAThe [[[SpellMyNameWithAThe The Destroyer has come.]]]
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White letters on a black surface declared: [The Destroyer has come.]
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White letters on a black surface declared: [The [[SpellMyNameWithAThe The Destroyer has come.]]]]
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** The Shells of the Titan, three mini-duplicates of the Wandering Titan's shell that orbit around Lindon, giving of the spiritual feel of a mountain range and strong enough to stop Vroshir energy weapons.
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** The Shells of the Titan, three mini-duplicates of the Wandering Titan's shell that orbit around Lindon, giving of off the spiritual feel of a mountain range and strong enough to stop Vroshir energy weapons.
