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** It even gets a [[CallBack]] in ''Literature/BattleGround''
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** Kincaid also states outright that he wouldn't have taken the job if he knew Harry was calling in Ebenezar--in fact, he'd be in ''another state''. Think about how badass Kincaid is, and then consider that he's [[HorrifyingTheHoror scared of Ebenezar.]]
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** Kincaid also states outright that he wouldn't have taken the job if he knew Harry was calling in Ebenezar--in fact, he'd be in ''another state''. Think about how badass Kincaid is, and then consider that he's [[HorrifyingTheHoror [[HorrifyingTheHorror scared of Ebenezar.]]
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** Kincaid also states outright that he wouldn't have taken the job if he knew Harry was calling in Ebenezar. Think about how badass Kincaid is, and then consider that he's scared of Ebenezar.
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** Kincaid also states outright that he wouldn't have taken the job if he knew Harry was calling in Ebenezar. Ebenezar--in fact, he'd be in ''another state''. Think about how badass Kincaid is, and then consider that he's [[HorrifyingTheHoror scared of Ebenezar. Ebenezar.]]
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** Which is also a lovely call back to ''Summer Knight'':
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** Which is also a lovely call back to ''Summer Knight'':''Literature/SummerKnight'':
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** Meanwhile, Ebenezar is able to shut down, or at least severely limit, Mavra's magic, from outside the building, without a channel of any kind.
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*** [[spoiler: Mavra gets another Villainous Example. She manages to sneak up on Harry, deliver a chilling speech about how she's been watching him for some time now, and then has two of her Renfields try to scorch Harry alive with flamethrowers, while she laughs. Harry's shield can't protect him, and he ends up with his hand near useless for years after that. Creepy awesome at its best]]
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*** [[spoiler: Mavra gets another Villainous Example. She manages to sneak up on Harry, deliver a chilling speech about how she's been watching him for some time now, and then has two of her Renfields try to scorch Harry alive with flamethrowers, while she laughs. Harry's shield can't protect him, and he ends up with his hand near useless for years after that. Creepy awesome at its best]]best.]]
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--->"For my next trick," I panted into the startled silence, "anvils."
** This has the added benefit of being quite possibly [[CrowningMomentOfFunny the funniest thing to happen in the entire series]] thus far.
** This has the added benefit of being quite possibly [[CrowningMomentOfFunny the funniest thing to happen in the entire series]] thus far.
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* Ebenezar gets the draw on [[ProfessionalKiller Kincaid,]] and reveals that he's responsible for the Tunguska Event, Krakatoa, and the New Madrid Earthquake. While that's rather sad, it also proves that the man is ''seriously'' badass.
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* Awesome moment for JimButcher: ''Blood Rites'' has two of the best opening and closing lines in all of fiction. Opening: "The building was on fire, and it wasn't my fault." Closing: [[spoiler:"'Hey. Why did you get ''large breed'' puppy chow?'"]]
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* Awesome moment for JimButcher: Creator/JimButcher: ''Blood Rites'' has two of the best opening and closing lines in all of fiction. Opening: "The building was on fire, and it wasn't my fault." Closing: [[spoiler:"'Hey. Why did you get ''large breed'' puppy chow?'"]]
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* How Murphy handled Kincaid's SecretTestOfCharacter. Harry had enough sense to step back and let her whup Kincaid's ass while he was in safe watching distance.
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* How Murphy handled Kincaid's SecretTestOfCharacter. Harry had enough sense to step back and let her whup Kincaid's ass while he was in safe watching distance.distance.
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*** [[spoiler: Maybe it's just me, but i thought Mavra gets another Villainous Example. She Managed to sneak up on harry. Deliver a chilling speech about how she's been watching him for some time now. and then she has two of her Renfields try to scorch harry alive with flamethrowers,while she laughed,and harry's force shield couldn't do much to help him either,he ends up with his hand near useless for years after that. Creepy awesome in its best]]
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*** [[spoiler: Maybe it's just me, but i thought Mavra gets another Villainous Example. She Managed manages to sneak up on harry. Deliver Harry, deliver a chilling speech about how she's been watching him for some time now. now, and then she has two of her Renfields try to scorch harry Harry alive with flamethrowers,while flamethrowers, while she laughed,and harry's force laughs. Harry's shield couldn't do much to help him either,he can't protect him, and he ends up with his hand near useless for years after that. Creepy awesome in at its best]]
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***[[spoiler: Maybe it's just me, but i thought Mavra gets another Villainous Example. She Managed to sneak up on harry. Deliver a chilling speech about how she's been watching him for some time now. and then she has two of her Renfields try to scorch harry alive with flamethrowers,while she laughed,and harry's force shield couldn't do much to help him either,he ends up with his hand near useless for years after that. Creepy awesome in its best]]
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** This has the added benefit of being quite possibly [[CrowningMomentOfFunny the funniest thing to happen in the entire series]].
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** Doubles up: Harry, who had no reason to believe Murphy hadn't started to break and was really, truly, out of it, only needed two words to be bet-his-life certain.
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** Doubles up: Harry, who had no reason to believe Murphy hadn't started to break and was really, truly, out of it, only needed two words to be bet-his-life certain.certain that she was faking.
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* Murphy refusing to break under the White King's mind control. Granted, that doesn't seem like much in this series, but not even Lara managed to do that before Harry managed to drain his power reserves and lets her in on the fact that he can't replenish them.
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* Murphy refusing to break under the White King's mind control. Granted, that doesn't seem like much in this series, but not even Lara managed to do that before Harry managed to drain his power reserves and lets let her in on the fact that he can't replenish them.
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* Murphy refusing to break under the White King's mind control. Granted, that doesn't seem like much in this series, but not even Lara managed to do that before Harry managed to drain his power reserves and let her in on the fact that her father couldn't feed.
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* Murphy refusing to break under the White King's mind control. Granted, that doesn't seem like much in this series, but not even Lara managed to do that before Harry managed to drain his power reserves and let lets her in on the fact that her father couldn't feed.he can't replenish them.
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* Murphy refusing to break under the White King's mind control. Granted, that doesn't seem like much in this series, but not even Lara managed to do that before Harry told her that her dad was powerless.
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* Murphy refusing to break under the White King's mind control. Granted, that doesn't seem like much in this series, but not even Lara managed to do that before Harry told managed to drain his power reserves and let her in on the fact that her dad was powerless.father couldn't feed.
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** Even more impressive is the effect that Lara's power has on [[spoiler: Harry; just the smell of her hair is very nearly enough to make him drop to the ground and crawl back, and she implies that once she really gets going, it'll get ''worse''... and this is still only her ambient, unfocused power, against someone ''who still has True Love's protection''.]]
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** Even more impressive is the effect that Lara's power has on [[spoiler: Harry; Harry as he leaves; just the smell of her hair is very nearly enough to make him drop to the ground and crawl back, and she implies that once she really gets going, it'll get ''worse''... and this is still only her ambient, unfocused power, against someone ''who still has True Love's protection''.]]
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*** Also a crowning moment for [[spoiler: Margaret Dresden herself; even when she was dying, she knew ''exactly'' how to hurt Lord Raith and eventually destroy him - leaving him to starve until someone could finish the job.]]
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** The next book reveals that [[spoiler: it was simultaneously a villainous example for ''Mavra herself'', as she'd not only survived, but staged it all in order to collect blackmail material on Murphy.]]
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** The next book reveals that [[spoiler: it was simultaneously a villainous example for ''Mavra herself'', as she'd not only survived, but staged it all in order to collect blackmail material on Murphy.]]]]
* How Murphy handled Kincaid's SecretTestOfCharacter. Harry had enough sense to step back and let her whup Kincaid's ass while he was in safe watching distance.
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* Awesome moment for JimButcher: ''Blood Rites'' has two of the best opening and closing lines in all of fiction. Opening: "The building was on fire, and it wasn't my fault." Closing: [[spoiler:"'Thomas, why did you buy ''large breed'' puppy chow?'"]]
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* Awesome moment for JimButcher: ''Blood Rites'' has two of the best opening and closing lines in all of fiction. Opening: "The building was on fire, and it wasn't my fault." Closing: [[spoiler:"'Thomas, why [[spoiler:"'Hey. Why did you buy get ''large breed'' puppy chow?'"]]
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* Harry, Murphy, and Kincaid's assault on Mavra's base, with the likes of Kincaid's impressive moves with his spear-slash-shotgun, Harry holding on to his shield despite his hand being burned away, and Harry and Murphy using the vampires' own land mine against them. And all without any of the children they saved getting hurt.
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* Harry, Murphy, and Kincaid's assault on Mavra's base, with the likes of Kincaid's impressive moves with his spear-slash-shotgun, Harry holding on to his shield despite his hand being burned away, and Harry and Murphy using the vampires' own land mine against them. And all without any of the children they saved getting hurt.hurt.
** The next book reveals that [[spoiler: it was simultaneously a villainous example for ''Mavra herself'', as she'd not only survived, but staged it all in order to collect blackmail material on Murphy.]]
** The next book reveals that [[spoiler: it was simultaneously a villainous example for ''Mavra herself'', as she'd not only survived, but staged it all in order to collect blackmail material on Murphy.]]
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* Harry kills a Black Court vampire with a laser-guided frozen turkey dropped from an airplane passing overhead. Sure, it was someone else's curse that Harry redirected, but the end result had even the other characters going WTF.
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* Harry, Murphy, and Kincaid's assault on Mavra's base, with the likes of Kincaid's impressive moves with his spear-slash-shotgun, Harry holding on to his shield despite his hand being burned away, and Harry and Murphy using the vampires' own land mine against them, and killing Mavra.them. And all without any of the children they saved getting hurt.
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* Harry, Murphy, and Kincaid's assault on Mavra's base, with the likes of Kincaid's impressive moves with his spear-slash-shotgun, Harry holding on to his shield despite his hand being burned away, Harry and Murphy using the vampires' own land mine against them, and finally killing Mavra once and for all.Mavra. And all without any of the children they saved getting hurt.
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* While it's an OffscreenMomentOfAwesome, [[spoiler:[[BrokenBird Lara Raith's]] RapeAndRevenge against her evil father and turning him into her puppet to continue ruling the White Court as she commands certainly counts.]]
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* Harry, Murphy, and Kincaid's assault on Mavra's base, with the likes of Kincaid's impressive moves with his spear-slash-shotgun, Harry holding on to his shield despite his hand being burned away, Harry and Murphy using the vampires' own land mine against them, and finally killing Mavra once and for all. And all without any of the children they saved getting hurt.
* Harry, Murphy, and Kincaid's assault on Mavra's base, with the likes of Kincaid's impressive moves with his spear-slash-shotgun, Harry holding on to his shield despite his hand being burned away, Harry and Murphy using the vampires' own land mine against them, and finally killing Mavra once and for all. And all without any of the children they saved getting hurt.
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** Which is also a lovely call back to ''Summer Knight'':
---> '''Lloyd Slate''': Spooky. He doesn't ''look'' all that smart.
---> '''Lloyd Slate''': Spooky. He doesn't ''look'' all that smart.
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* The climax, where Harry [[spoiler:tricks Lord Raith into revealing his weakness--namely, his inability to feed due to Margaret Dresden's death curse--with Lara Raith as a witness, thereby allowing her to take over in a coup d'etat.]] Even ''Lara'', no slouch at political intrigue herself, is impressed. Harry might not resort to [[XanatosSpeedChess subtlety]] often, but when he does he is ''good'' at it.
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* The climax, where Harry [[spoiler:tricks Lord Raith into revealing his weakness--namely, his inability to feed due to Margaret Dresden's death curse--with Lara Raith as a witness, thereby allowing her to take over in a coup d'etat.]] Even ''Lara'', no slouch at political intrigue herself, is impressed. Harry might not resort to [[XanatosSpeedChess subtlety]] often, but when he does he is ''good'' at it.it.
---> [[spoiler:'''Lara Raith''':]]You've made me the cat's-paw for you, Dresden. While making me think I had the advantage of you. You've played me at my own game, and ably. I thought you capable of nothing but overt action. Clearly I underestimated you.\\
'''Harry''': Don't feel bad. I mean, I look so stupid.
* While it's an OffscreenMomentOfAwesome, [[spoiler:[[BrokenBird Lara Raith's]] RapeAndRevenge against her evil father and turning him into her puppet to continue ruling the White Court as she commands certainly counts.]]
---> [[spoiler:'''Lara Raith''':]]You've made me the cat's-paw for you, Dresden. While making me think I had the advantage of you. You've played me at my own game, and ably. I thought you capable of nothing but overt action. Clearly I underestimated you.\\
'''Harry''': Don't feel bad. I mean, I look so stupid.
* While it's an OffscreenMomentOfAwesome, [[spoiler:[[BrokenBird Lara Raith's]] RapeAndRevenge against her evil father and turning him into her puppet to continue ruling the White Court as she commands certainly counts.]]
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* Harry kills a Black Court vampire with a laser-guided frozen turkey dropped from an airplane passing overhead. Sure, it was someone else's curse that Harry redirected, but the end result had even the other characters going WTF.
--->"For my next trick," I panted into the startled silence, "anvils."
** This has the added benefit of being quite possibly [[CrowningMomentOfFunny the funniest thing to happen in the entire series]].
* Murphy refusing to break under the White King's mind control. Granted, that doesn't seem like much in this series, but not even Lara managed to do that before Harry told her that her dad was powerless.
** Doubles up: Harry, who had no reason to believe Murphy hadn't started to break and was really, truly, out of it, only needed two words to be bet-his-life certain.
---> [[spoiler: "Leave me alone, ''Mister Dresden''."]]
* Awesome moment for JimButcher: ''Blood Rites'' has two of the best opening and closing lines in all of fiction. Opening: "The building was on fire, and it wasn't my fault." Closing: [[spoiler:"'Thomas, why did you buy ''large breed'' puppy chow?'"]]
* Harry and Murphy, with a little magical help, motorcycle-joust a car [[spoiler:loaded with Lord Raith's goons]] and send the car hurtling away on fire.
* The climax, where Harry [[spoiler:tricks Lord Raith into revealing his weakness--namely, his inability to feed due to Margaret Dresden's death curse--with Lara Raith as a witness, thereby allowing her to take over in a coup d'etat.]] Even ''Lara'', no slouch at political intrigue herself, is impressed. Harry might not resort to [[XanatosSpeedChess subtlety]] often, but when he does he is ''good'' at it.
--->"For my next trick," I panted into the startled silence, "anvils."
** This has the added benefit of being quite possibly [[CrowningMomentOfFunny the funniest thing to happen in the entire series]].
* Murphy refusing to break under the White King's mind control. Granted, that doesn't seem like much in this series, but not even Lara managed to do that before Harry told her that her dad was powerless.
** Doubles up: Harry, who had no reason to believe Murphy hadn't started to break and was really, truly, out of it, only needed two words to be bet-his-life certain.
---> [[spoiler: "Leave me alone, ''Mister Dresden''."]]
* Awesome moment for JimButcher: ''Blood Rites'' has two of the best opening and closing lines in all of fiction. Opening: "The building was on fire, and it wasn't my fault." Closing: [[spoiler:"'Thomas, why did you buy ''large breed'' puppy chow?'"]]
* Harry and Murphy, with a little magical help, motorcycle-joust a car [[spoiler:loaded with Lord Raith's goons]] and send the car hurtling away on fire.
* The climax, where Harry [[spoiler:tricks Lord Raith into revealing his weakness--namely, his inability to feed due to Margaret Dresden's death curse--with Lara Raith as a witness, thereby allowing her to take over in a coup d'etat.]] Even ''Lara'', no slouch at political intrigue herself, is impressed. Harry might not resort to [[XanatosSpeedChess subtlety]] often, but when he does he is ''good'' at it.