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Author: crazysamaritan
Aug 16th 2013
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5:44:21 PM
The image is better because it's drawing attention to the effect. The first paragraph still doesn't work as the first paragraph of the trope, but the earlier version is better than the current as a caption under the image. You've done a good job taking out Example as a Thesis, minor suggestion for your subtropes is to replace your paragraph with this: This effect is common enough, we have subtropes dealing with specific variations: * McLeaned - When the actor leaves and the character is killed off * PutOnABusToHell - When the actor leaves and the character is written out in a mean-spirited way, but not killed off. * TheCharacterDiedWithHim - When the character is killed off because the actor died. Examples belong on the appropriate subtrope. New name is really good; WrittenOutBecauseTheActorLeft
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