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Author: Basara-kun

Mar 5th 2017 at 9:51:06 PM

I got some opinions about this draft:
* This is FlashStep [[TheSameButMoreSpecific with swords]], but it's still tropable.
* As Prime32 says, this is more like a kind of SpecialAttack since it's not a move that should be used often by the character, unless it's a FragileSpeedster that uses this as its main resource to attack.
* The name is too specific, a better name should be made instead "Inazuma Giri". Maybe ShadowBlade, AfterimageSwords or as the literal translation of actual title, LightningSlash.
* This isn't exclusive of {{ninja}}s, so the description should be changed about that. An example is a {{samurai}} (DistaffCounterpart of ninjas) that can make this move as well: IaijutsuPractitioner [[VideoGame/SamuraiShodown Ukyo Tachibana]].
* The OP seems missing in this draft, even when he made page/trope edits recently. May this should be UpForGrabs??

Saying this, I'm going neutral this time, not hat nor bomb this time from me. Maybe later, but I prefer to wait and see what's happen next.