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Author: Theriocephalus

Nov 25th 2017 at 5:50:21 AM

All right, so: this definitely has potential, and I definitely can see this being tropeworthy, but there's some serious issues with the write-up:

* The description is rather minimal and bare-bones, and needs strengthening.
* In the ''Star Wars'' example, the "wide" in "surface wide" is {{Sinkhole}}d to DependingOnTheWriter for reasons unclear. Splitting up a single word or term between two links in that manner is confusing and bad formatting, as is making a PotHole to something unrelated to the text. If DependingOnTheWriter ''does'' come into play in a relevant manner, the example should mention ''how'', rather than making the reader guess.
* From what I can tell, the thing with fungus from the Sheri Tepper example and Father from ''Animorphs'' are not examples and should not be here. Neither is Pando, since it's not sapient.
* Going by the description, the Thorian from ''Mass Effect'' is a subversion (they thought it was a bunch of connected, collectively sapient plants but it wasn't). If so, the example should mention this.
* There's a crapton of [=ZCEs=] that need fixing.