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Author: NubianSatyress

Nov 15th 2017 at 11:52:46 AM

I think the examples are fine, but the description needs a bit of tweaking to state that it's about the conception that a promiscuous person was made that way by rape/abuse. I'd also emphasis in your wording that the characters are being described as seen in fiction, which I know seems a bit pedantic, but if I know one thing about this site, it's that people tend to take statements made in descriptions as universal truth unless stated otherwise.

On a less critical note, the description may benefit from mentioning the concept of "mind break" and "ahegao" in Japanese and image board culture.  "Mind Break", as the name implies, refers to a woman who is being assaulted and has her mind and spirit "broken", whereupon she often becomes promiscuous. Related to this, "ahegao" roughly translates into "screwed silly", whereupon a female character has a delirious and silly expression and becomes lost to sexual urges. While originating from erotic works and pornography, the concepts are so well-known that if it shows up in a more wholesome work, the audience knows what it implies.