Pszczola
Since: Jan, 2001
04/11/2012 05:37:37
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FanficRecs Comment by Anonymous
It's a nicely paced and well-developed story that alternates between Tomasz's "normal" point of view and that of his true parents. The only gripe here, really, is the typos (especially the earlier parts). Otherwise, it's a good read.
FanficRecs Comment by Anonymous
The gripes themselves were actually acknowledged by the writer and beta-person. That said, the story also gives the impression of two stories interwoven into one another. Especially once they begin to converge and Tomasz reaches ever closer to the elusive truth of his bloodline.