Comments: Once again, my general dislike of Original Characters is proved wrong for this fic. This is probably because she doesnt take up a lot of story time, and because she's a Woobie. Good characterisation, plot, writing, interesting twists, detailed explainations, all round great fic. Some fic cliches, likes him being beaten, and the Kyuubi being female(does note that this pretty much personally assigned, it can be any gender), but nothing which really ruins the story. Some Sasuke, Sakura and Kakashi bashing, bu nothing major, and we find out why Jiraiya didn't look after Naruto: he thought Naruto was dead.
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