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Tollymaen Since: Nov, 2009
07/05/2014 22:42:33 •••

Hmm..

In ten words: It has potential, but the writing needs work. Really badly.

Two Kinds is potentially a good webcomic. Unfortunately, the writing is subpar. The writer needs to balance serious moments and comedy better. Some of the script can't have been thought out very carefully. I think that, were the writer to slow down and work out the kinks in the script, it could be a very good comic. Right now... the writing makes it very difficult to read.

Kerrah Since: Jan, 2001
01/05/2010 00:00:00

That's exactly how I felt when reading through. For the longest time, the "plot" was just a million villains scheming behind the heroes' backs and twirling their mustaches. However, it's really gotten better for the last third of the current run.

71.99.23.191 Since: Dec, 1969
04/07/2010 00:00:00

In what sense are you referring to? The Dialogue? The Plot? The Characterization?

TGGeko Since: Dec, 1969
09/15/2010 00:00:00

After the Art Shift, I think things have gotten better. Once a week seems to give Tom more time to think about writing.

81.129.161.48 Since: Dec, 1969
11/08/2010 00:00:00

Indeed. A recent (at this time of writing) strip showed how Tom Fischbach can rack up tension to create a very satisfying conclusion. The writing is far better now.

DoctorWhiteface Since: Feb, 2010
03/15/2012 00:00:00

I don't know, I think this one is better planned out than other more-spotlighted furry comics, like DMFA and Keychain of Creation. It doesn't rely on the roleplay in-jokes and mythology gags that plague DMFA, and it doesn't require the extensive knowledge of a tabletop RPG that readers of Ko C should bring to the table.

Polokun Since: Sep, 2013
07/05/2014 00:00:00

I honestly don't see what you're talking about when it comes to the writing. Not to mention your criticism is quite frankly, very vague and uninformative/You just claim over and over that the writing is bad but not actually giving any REASONS why it's bad.


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