WAAAAAY better than it sounds. First off, romance is NOT the primary focus of the story- to the point where readers wanted it to be less realistic and more fluffy. The plot comes first, and is fantastic- the twists and turns are genuinely shocking. Original Alien Superspy has a real talent for making fun, layered, and non-mary sue-ish OC's. L.J. is a natural deadpan snarker, making the story vibrant with a comedic perspective but with hidden depth. In OAS' world, there is a species of immortals called 'Forces' (who represent the Seasons, Elements, Karma, ect). The well done OC's bring a tone of reality to the story with a twist (they act more like normal teenagers, and occasionally lampshade the more strange aspects of the Soul Eater Universe). Kid and Junior are perfect parallels to each other-Kid is diligent, (usually) composed, and obedient to his father, while L.J. is laid back, rebellious, and considerably more wild-spirited. Altogether, a very original and entertaining read which suggests new concepts and is again, much better than it sounds. It helps that all of L.J.'s abilities are downplayed into near-obscurity, while her faults are punished to near Fatal Flaw status. This story definitely sets a new standard for OC construction.
Flameblade13
WAAAAAY better than it sounds. First off, romance is NOT the primary focus of the story- to the point where readers wanted it to be less realistic and more fluffy. The plot comes first, and is fantastic- the twists and turns are genuinely shocking. Original Alien Superspy has a real talent for making fun, layered, and non-mary sue-ish OC's. L.J. is a natural deadpan snarker, making the story vibrant with a comedic perspective but with hidden depth. In OAS' world, there is a species of immortals called 'Forces' (who represent the Seasons, Elements, Karma, ect). The well done OC's bring a tone of reality to the story with a twist (they act more like normal teenagers, and occasionally lampshade the more strange aspects of the Soul Eater Universe). Kid and Junior are perfect parallels to each other-Kid is diligent, (usually) composed, and obedient to his father, while L.J. is laid back, rebellious, and considerably more wild-spirited. Altogether, a very original and entertaining read which suggests new concepts and is again, much better than it sounds. It helps that all of L.J.'s abilities are downplayed into near-obscurity, while her faults are punished to near Fatal Flaw status. This story definitely sets a new standard for OC construction.