the premise is interesting and the plot is engaging. however unlike other reviewers, the excessive Rouge Angles of Satin present is keeping this troper from being able to fully enjoy the story. proper names and titles are inconsistent and sometimes repeated words in the same paragraphs will have different spellings altogether.
edit: the later parts of the story are where the story really shines, and a more active fanbase seems to have resolve a majority of the problems. i'd say if you can get past the first half of the first part it's mostly smooth sailing from there
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good concept, iffy on the execution by throwaawy
the premise is interesting and the plot is engaging. however unlike other reviewers, the excessive Rouge Angles of Satin present is keeping this troper from being able to fully enjoy the story. proper names and titles are inconsistent and sometimes repeated words in the same paragraphs will have different spellings altogether.
edit: the later parts of the story are where the story really shines, and a more active fanbase seems to have resolve a majority of the problems. i'd say if you can get past the first half of the first part it's mostly smooth sailing from there