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Kereea Since: Dec, 2010
06/06/2013 17:34:08 •••

Started okay, but went down

The first half was great. Deidara trying to keep his cover, the interactions between him, Itachi, Hana, and the kids, all great. Even the mysterious stuff with this version of Sakura's mom was good at first. then it went downhill, got over-complicated, too melodramatic, and too wordy. Frankly, I can't recommend it because of that.


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