The "seems be" marks it as speculation, plus it looks like elaboration in a subbullet. Neither are appropriate edits - elaboration needs to be incorporated in the main text.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
ok, so how does one incorporate it the main text?
Language isn't my strongest subject....so, I do apologize if I am asking something that is incredibly obvious to other people.
Rewrite the already existing entry so that it contains the missing information, without an additional bullet point.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Regarding What Measure Is a Mook?:
- What Measure Is a Mook?: It's established early on that the Parademons are mindless foot-soldiers, so the heroes cut them down in droves. Even after it's revealed that they were innocents converted to become Parademons, no one bats an eye about slaughtering them in droves.
The second sentence keeps getting deleted without an edit reason. It's accurate and pertinent to the trope, and provides context (while the first sentence on its own pretty much just describes mook more than What Measure Is a Mook?).
If someone has an issue with it, please bring it up here so we can discuss it.
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Oh, and just FYI you're not supposed to pothole trope names so I reverted the When All You Have Is a Hammer… entry as well.
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I added "** The Parademons seem to be the product of a complete biological conversion, down past the cellular level. Any and all traces of the former species and individuality seem to be wiped out, for all intents and purposes. So, while they may be still alive, they are no longer capable of going back to what they were and saving them is not an option. " to the page, but it was removed with someone saying it was Natter? Sorry, but I fail to see how this is a conversation.
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