Serocco
Since: Mar, 2010
Oct 15th 2011 at 7:57:56 PM
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The character sheets are still in-progress, but I wanted to see what others thought about it before I continued. I've written Shroud Unveiled on fanfiction.net under the same username. What other characters are you interested in?
It's going to take place over a time line. It's the basis of a novel.
In RWBY, every girl is Best Girl.
ShinZangetsu
Since: Dec, 1969
Oct 14th 2011 at 12:52:28 PM
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I was wondering if this was where I could make comments on aspects of soundscape.
So Serocco. I've just been going through the character sheets and I see you have a knack for characters and that seems to be you strong suite. Apart from the summary and characters sheets. What else have you written? A lot of the info you've given seems to be centered around the characters though I'd need to see them applied within the actual story. I can see you're bursting with ideas for the characters and want people to experience them but it's better to give them that through a story. I find myself interested in characters like Nyrolow and when I read the profile it's like I'm reading a wiki about an existing character in a story except I cannot then go and find that story. It piques interest but it needs more to build it on. Let's see how the story turns out.
Scale...huge. So many characters, sectors and faction. Are you going to be able to really fit all of them into Soundscape with sufficient relevance or is this going to take place over a time-line in which case many characters can have relevance at different points in time? It'll be interesting to see what you do there.
Just out of curiosity. Is this the basis for an entire novel or a game or any other type of project?
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