Critic: What's he going to be like, all crispy and black or something?
Camacan moderator
12:07:30 AM Apr 30th 2011 edited by Camacan
I didn't make that edit, but to my eye there are no details there so it was the right move to pull it. We don't drop in external link and give no details: see How To Write An Example.
Camacan moderator
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12:08:38 AM Apr 30th 2011
Two problems here: the work title is potholed. Please put it at or near the start, in italics. Secondly, no details, just a reference. Examples need specific details — see How To Write An Example.