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Later: I just cut all the stuff about the hypothetical plot. Better?
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Everything in between those is about a lovingly detailed hypothetical plot. Nicely written, but irrelevant.
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Everything in between those is about a lovingly detailed hypothetical plot. Nicely written, but irrelevant.
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Later: I just cut all the stuff about the hypothetical plot. Better?
