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I was not deleting entire entries. I was leaving the tropes and deleting what I viewed as unnecessary information and summarizing it in one or two sentences instead of a paragraph. For instance, I fail to see that Thor thinks \
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I was not deleting entire entries. I was leaving the tropes and deleting what I viewed as unnecessary information and summarizing it in one or two sentences instead of a paragraph. For instance, I fail to see that Thor thinks \\\"She tastes\\\" like strawberries has to do with the related trope. That and at the time some of the wording was needlessly repetitive by repeating the same fact several times in different ways.
So I destroyed nothing. I tried to edit them down to their bare facts. I admit I may have gone a bit too far, but I destroyed nothing.
So I destroyed nothing. I tried to edit them down to their bare facts. I admit I may have gone a bit too far, but I destroyed nothing.
