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How about this line of thinking with Jacob: Dick move BioWare, dick move. Okay, I did say I would lay off them. I don\'t think it would have been a deliberate move to have Jacob cheat, but I have to say I would expect better than for them to put that out in the first place.
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How about this line of thinking with Jacob: Dick move BioWare, dick move. Okay, I did say I would lay off them. I don\\\'t think it would have been a deliberate move to have Jacob cheat, but I have to say I would expect better than for them to put that out in the first place.
How about this for a rewrite?
Unfortunate Implications: Jacob, a love interest who is only available to the female Shepard, is also the only love interest who will cheat on you. While it was probably unintentional, he\\\'s also the only Black human love interest in both the male and female paths. BioWare have long shown to be rather intelligent throwing in lots of examples of GeniusBonus and FridgeBrilliance, if this wasn\\\'t a deliberate move to demonize race then it is rather unfortunate for Jacob to be portrayed this way.
How about this for a rewrite?
Unfortunate Implications: Jacob, a love interest who is only available to the female Shepard, is also the only love interest who will cheat on you. While it was probably unintentional, he\\\'s also the only Black human love interest in both the male and female paths. BioWare have long shown to be rather intelligent throwing in lots of examples of GeniusBonus and FridgeBrilliance, if this wasn\\\'t a deliberate move to demonize race then it is rather unfortunate for Jacob to be portrayed this way.
