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There\'s also the problem in that he got the woman he cheated with (and isn\'t married to pregnant), and that his primary motivation is to be a better father than his was to him.
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Juxtapose him against Kaiden in my edit above, though. There\\\'s also the problem in that he got the woman he cheated with (and isn\\\'t married to) pregnant, and that his primary motivation is to be a better father than his was to him.
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Yeah, I get that all of these things are very \
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Yeah, I get that all of these things are very \\\"meh\\\" on their own, but taken together? Holy crap.
