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I agree that that line should be removed. It reads as if they\'re trying to contradict what the book says for really no reason, since, as pointed out in the edit notes, the book specifically calls it \
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I agree that that line should be removed. It reads as if they\\\'re trying to contradict what the book says for really no reason, since, as pointed out, the book specifically calls it \\\"synthetic\\\", so it\\\'s a bit strange to say \\\"there\\\'s no synthetic flame\\\". We might not necessarily know what they mean, but as stated in someone\\\'s edit note, remember that this is a futuristic setting, and koweja had a good point that it could be just a product name or something.
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I agree that that line should be removed. It reads as if you\'re trying to contradict what the book says for really no reason, since, as pointed out in the edit notes, the book specifically calls it \
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I agree that that line should be removed. It reads as if they\\\'re trying to contradict what the book says for really no reason, since, as pointed out in the edit notes, the book specifically calls it \\\"synthetic\\\", so it\\\'s a bit strange to say \\\"there\\\'s no synthetic flame\\\". We might not necessarily know what they mean, but as stated in someone\\\'s edit note, remember that this is a futuristic setting, and koweja had a good point that it could be just a product name or something.
