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This is why the most consistently consistent narrative structure involves a man whose goal is to save a woman. It becomes a force multiplier for the narrative tension: will he achieve his goal? Will she be saved?
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This is why the most consistently consistent narrative structure involves a man whose goal is to save a woman. It becomes a force multiplier for the narrative tension: will he achieve his goal? Will she be saved? If he doesn\\\'t achieve his goal, she won\\\'t be saved!
