#2: May 3rd 2018 at 1:04:32 PM
Opened.
eroock
Since: Sep, 2012
#3: May 3rd 2018 at 3:03:41 PM
Didn't see much wrong.
PeabodySam
Since: Aug, 2012
#4: May 3rd 2018 at 3:06:59 PM
Definitely an improvement, but I can't help being mildly bothered by the partially cut-off "SLAM!" sound effect.
TheUnsquished
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#5: May 4th 2018 at 9:02:19 AM
I'm sure that can be removed.
(Annoyed grunt)
#6: May 11th 2018 at 9:22:20 PM
Clock is set. I can live with 3.
Synchronicity
(4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
#8: May 11th 2018 at 10:59:57 PM
Yeah, 3 is fine.
TheUnsquished
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#9: May 12th 2018 at 8:07:07 AM
I'm okay with 3.
(Annoyed grunt)
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Goku Black
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#10: May 12th 2018 at 12:44:07 PM
lets go with 3
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#11: May 12th 2018 at 1:18:31 PM
It works. Would perhaps also work without the last panel.
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rjd1922
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#12: May 12th 2018 at 2:43:07 PM
3 is good, and agree that it could work without the last panel.
Keet cleanup
eroock
Since: Sep, 2012
#14: May 13th 2018 at 11:49:12 AM
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Karxrida
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#15: May 13th 2018 at 12:11:21 PM
13 is good.
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TheUnsquished
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from Southern Limey Land
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Relationship Status: Married to the job
#16: May 13th 2018 at 12:29:12 PM
Agreed.
(Annoyed grunt)
Synchronicity
(4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
#18: May 14th 2018 at 9:10:26 PM
13's pretty good.
Total posts: 19
The cropping job for current is terrible and the image quality seems shoddy (at least on mobile). It's a good illustration, but we need to clean it up.
edited 3rd May '18 12:34:49 PM by Karxrida
If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?