eroock
Since: Sep, 2012
#1: Nov 1st 2016 at 5:24:47 PM
Current doesn't do much for me. What about this shot from Moonraker?
#2: Nov 1st 2016 at 8:04:58 PM
Not nearly obvious enough in the suggestion that fighting is going on for me.
#3: Nov 1st 2016 at 9:22:39 PM
How about Dipper and Gideon bitch-slapping while falling off a cliff?
edited 1st Nov '16 9:23:57 PM by anza_sb
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eroock
Since: Sep, 2012
#4: Nov 2nd 2016 at 12:37:11 AM
Looks good.
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#5: Nov 2nd 2016 at 9:57:03 AM
I could go with the suggestion in 3.
(Annoyed grunt)
#6: Nov 2nd 2016 at 11:11:28 AM
3 works.
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#7: Nov 2nd 2016 at 3:16:16 PM
3 works.
Morgenthaler
Since: Feb, 2016
#8: Nov 3rd 2016 at 11:04:12 AM
Not really a fan of 3. The fighting is minimal, and the art style is so simplistic (especially the lack of motion lines) that I'd almost mistake it for an underwater fight. Not in favor of the current either, but the presence of clouds makes it a lot clearer.
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"
#9: Nov 4th 2016 at 8:08:07 AM
I don't have a problem with the current.
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#10: Nov 19th 2016 at 10:27:03 AM
Clock is set.
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#11: Nov 23rd 2016 at 12:36:46 PM
Clock expired; closing.
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