Yep, looks okay. Fomelgion would be OP if it weren't for the fact that it's slow to do anything, so I think you're in the clear.

Yea, its main problem is just how.... slow it is, and the fact that its a bright blue beam of fuck you.

Its not ingnorable, and its gonna bite you if you use it agianst something that can fight back.

BUFFER POST

Alright, guys important update about the future of charecter sheets.

Any potentialy problematic elements of them are no longer negotiable, if either of the people responsible for approvals Rai/Myself say no, the answer is no and we will no longer be hearing out explanations or negotiations on those powers, it is just gone.

As such, after this plot I need to rework Nova, and more importantly for some one else here Berry needs to rework Fen, as she has been confirmed to cause the EXACT issue I was worried about with her inception, her technopathy making the 3 dedicated mechanics we have redundant because she is able to do more then they can, and stll have magitech power armor and a giant ass canon to boot.

Fuggin tripple post, but Neo!Eve is up, as is Nova's edit.

No issues with new Nova or Eve. Happy hunting

The Plot

In the world of Bionicle, many different universes share the same multi-versal plane with each other. One of these realms, known to others as The Kingdom, was one of the worst possible outcomes for this universe. For in this realm, the Great Spirit, Mata Nui, died before he could be resurrected, and thus the islands of his realm began to fall into ruin. Forced to unite for survival, the remaining residents of the Matoran Universe in one of these Kingdoms discovered an ancient and powerful mask of Power, once thought only existent in legends: A second Mask of Creation. Worn only by one individual known as Artahka, this mask could creating something from absolutely nothing, and was seen as a salvation for the residents of the Matoran universe.

However, when one hero tried to restore The Kingdom with the Mask's power, it overwhelmed him, and shattered in fragments which scattered outside the borders of the Kingdom's reach, where the evil Makuta and his few dark forces remain a threat. Unwilling to risk their few remaining numbers and occupied with defending their borders already, the Turaga (elders and ruling council) of the Kingdom have asked for assistance from others in exchange for a handsome reward.

Your task, brave warriors, should you choose to accept this mission, is to travel to the old islands of the world, and recover three of these fragments. Should you achieve this goal, you will be handsomely rewarded for your actions. However, the Turaga's agents have made a chilling discovery; the Makuta, master of shadows and Mata Nui's evil brother, is also in search for the mask fragments. Rumors say he even possesses one already.

The lands beyond the borders of the Kingdom are wild and uncharted since the days of Mata Nui's death. However, there may yet lie great opportunity for challenge and reward out in the unknown wilderness.

Do you accept this offer? (Y/N)?

edited 23rd Nov '16 7:18:29 AM by LightningLancer

Pitching a new character in the character sheets thread. Go check her out.

Your good.

Sweet :D

She'll pop up after this plot concludes.

Buffer for Spartyo

I have made yet another monster.

Waiting on approval.

Looked fine to me, so letting the overGM have a look first before commentaries made

I'm gonna put this here as another plot suggestion so I don't forget and you guys never get to either:

Chaos marines, space marines who have forsaken their bonds to the emperor and the imperium and left to fight for the forces of chaos. Some are veterans of the long war and have fought for 10,000 years, others are more recent and have deserted their former families on their own to join chaos. Still there is a third group, those who are captured and brain washed. So the question is, how will the group react when one of their own is brainwashed into being a servant of chaos? Will they kill him or attempt to save him? pain and comedy are likely to ensue regardless of the option taken. may feature benny hill music.

Looks good part.

Also yea we should probaly vote soon, any one but bacon want to put plots foward?

Welcome to St. Albiero

This city is a melting pot of all kinds, kin, shapes, non-shapes, and 4th dimensional directions. Here customized mechs walk the streets alongside minivans. Super powered goofballs fly around while people who prefer more traditional methods stick to the sidewalks. Yes, the City of St. Albiero has achieved a kind of symbiosis between the extraordinary and the mundane. Demon Hunters are just as important to the economy as the local super market which sells everything for your occult needs. So what are you doing here? Why that's simple, you've been given the task of finding and delivering a specific piece of jewelry with the incentive of a very fat paycheck. But you're not restricted to that, maybe you want take a tour, eat the local cuisine, have your fortune told. Or maybe you want to check out the rumors of an underground robot fightclub. Or perhaps you'll want to check out the new video game that everyone is talking about but no one seems to have played yet. Its all up to you!

Note:While I will guide you at times there will be no railroading. What you guys do is entirely up to you as the player and I'll go along with that. Just know that the world will react to anything you do.

edited 19th Dec '16 3:55:34 PM by Azure

Minor sticking point, Berry

These guys aren't officially Kerberos (beyond it being the name of their skype group), they're just a bunch of doofs

Oh okay.

Yeah, tha's all. Looks nice otherwise

Keeping the technarcy plot alive

Short version is our group end up in a city run by scientists competing against each other. One such company is lumos who wish to hire our group for a wee bit of the old corporate sabotage

Still pushing for my plot. Short version we travel across islands collecting mask shards to stop bad guy's plan and save the world of the people. Also everything is biomechanical. And we get a hefty reward if we succeed.

Yeah do have something in the works but am not sure if it's a fully submittable idea yet, so it would be nice if you guys give me like until tomorrow evening or something to figure out if and how I should do this.

I return! Though if you remember me after half a year of absence I'll be surprised.

Looks like things have changed a lot, and I haven't quite taken a look at it all but... I'd like to jump back into things.

I feel like I've improved a lot in my absence, and am eager to start fresh with all of you.

In that case, drop a character sheet in the character sheets thread and we'll look it over, same as always.

Thread is here for the character sheet template. Do note that there are two sections missing from the OP; "Class", which must be filled out for character acceptance (it is essentially the role your characters plays as part of the game, to avoid overspecialized characters who can handle any situation and make other characters unnecessary), and if your character has magic, their quickcast spells they can use without having to think about it.

EDIT: Accidentally linked Backstroke of the West instead of the character sheets. Whoops!

edited 20th Dec '16 8:23:05 PM by SpartyMcFly

I noticed , but seriously thanks for the warm welcome, I'll get right to it.

Ohhh trying to remember the formatting on TV Tropes is fun...

And as usual, I decide to give myself a challenging character to begin things with..

edited 20th Dec '16 11:11:28 PM by MozillaFireBoss