eroock
Since: Sep, 2012
#1: Nov 1st 2015 at 1:58:32 AM
Opening suggestion from Indy 4.
Hi
#2: Nov 1st 2015 at 7:56:12 AM
Opened...better than nothing but it's not clicking with me.
Morgenthaler
Since: Feb, 2016
#3: Nov 1st 2015 at 8:20:30 AM
I think this is one of those tropes that will need multiple images to get across. It shows him swerving but not that he's swerving to avoid a collision.
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"
#4: Nov 1st 2015 at 3:36:00 PM
Not seeing the truck. I vote no.
Image Source. Please update whenever an image is changed.
eroock
Since: Sep, 2012
No, the other one.
#6: Nov 1st 2015 at 5:47:57 PM
![[up]](https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/smiles/arrow_up.png "[up]"){kind=icon}
Not bad, but I don't think all of those are needed. Frames in order of importance: 2, 1, 4, 3.
#7: Nov 1st 2015 at 6:27:00 PM
First and second one work.
How sweet it is
#8: Nov 1st 2015 at 7:03:35 PM
My thoughts exactly. ![[tup]](https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/Thumbs_up_emoticon_3268.png "[thumb up]"){kind=small}
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#9: Nov 1st 2015 at 7:18:02 PM
I agree. First two panels is more than enough.
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Morgenthaler
Since: Feb, 2016
#10: Nov 1st 2015 at 10:56:45 PM
I'd prefer it if 5 was a bit sharper/less blurry, but the first two frames are fine.
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"
eroock
Since: Sep, 2012
#11: Nov 2nd 2015 at 1:53:36 AM
Does this work?
edited 2nd Nov '15 1:54:58 AM by eroock
No, the other one.
#12: Nov 2nd 2015 at 5:14:42 AM
Sure.
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Morgenthaler
Since: Feb, 2016
#13: Nov 2nd 2015 at 7:03:02 AM
How sweet it is
#14: Nov 2nd 2015 at 7:48:41 AM
Yep, definitely.
Psshhh...
#15: Nov 2nd 2015 at 3:05:25 PM
11 looks nice.
tryrar
Since: Sep, 2010
![[awesome]](https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/minis/award_star_gold_3.png "[awesome]"){kind=small}
#17: Nov 2nd 2015 at 6:54:58 PM
those work, yes.
Hi
#18: Nov 3rd 2015 at 7:54:29 AM
11 is good; it's up and tagged. Caption?
Hi
#19: Nov 6th 2015 at 7:18:11 AM
Hearing nothing, let's lock up.
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