Hi
Both of those, especially the first, I think are too big for the page with folders collapsed, and I think it's too much setup for not enough delivery. That said, I kinda like the first panel of the first by itself.
Yeah, first panel alone ought to be enough. Whatever the context may be, it's a shopkeeper whose first instinct when faced with some kind of lizard dressed like a person is to ask for ID. The rest of the panels are funny(ish), but they're wholly unnecessary to the trope as well as way too long for the vast majority of trope pages
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edited 1st Jun '15 9:29:15 PM by rodneyAnonymous
Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.
That works on its own.
Aye, that panel alone works.
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No, the other one.
I think the single panel works better on its own even disregarding the length of the original suggestions. Later panels are just him being exactly the same with nothing happening that would ruffle him.
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One-panel version works fine.
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Any disagreements on one panel, or should I just put it up?
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Go for it.
Done.
Put in a caption, but it might not be necessary.
Starring for caption discussion.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
Hi
Hearing nothing, let's lock up.
Two suggestions for this trope, both from this page
of Atomic Robo:
Alternative, cropping off the last panel: