How do you avoid a wall of text?

Recently I have noticed that some of my rp post could use more content to avoid the "telling instead of showing" issue and flesh out my characters inner feelings.

But I am a bit afraid that adding more lenght to my posts will become a TL:DR walls of text. In fact I usually try to write as little as possible not to lose any potenial reader.

What would you advice me?

Here is an example of one of my longest posts

edited 29th Mar '15 5:26:39 PM by RPGLegend

Just break it up into smaller paragraphs. Problem solved. :)

That post doesn't seem too bad; look at the one immediately above yours.

Avoiding the dreaded wall of text is more about using paragraph breaks than the actual number of words. There's a point, obviously, at which even liberal paragraph breaks aren;'t going to save you, but they definitely push that point up.

Thanks a lot you two .

Long? That's positively tame! Considering the averages I see that's actually kind of short. But than again I am a rambler.

As far as length goes, I've seen some absolutely terrible (non-RP) examples over on World Building.

But really, the problem isn't usually about length. It's about how dense the text is, how much "character"^note read: "personality" you inject into it, and making sure it doesn't drone on like some ancient religious tome or encyclopedia (and all those things are really just different ways of describing the same problem).