It's alright, but just alright...I'd personally prefer something different.
Panel 2 and 3 here?
Or, for a real life example, something◊ like◊ this◊?
This implies, quite correctly, that my mind is dark and damp and full of tiny translucent fish.That's a pretty bad pic. Without the explanation, I'd have no idea what's going on, and even with it, I think it's weak. I vote BUPKIS.
The last two panels of this make for a better EGS illustration.
Clock is set.
I like 5. The real life ones in 3 don't make too much sense to me. I guess it's a superadvanced computer being used to play one of the simplest card games in existence? I'm not sure.
I'm not convinced it's an improvement.
Check out my fanfiction!Not sussed by 5 at all.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanThe current is a weak illustration.
I'm note sure 5 is a big improvement, especially if the full strip would be needed, which I think is frowned upon.
I think that's less misapplied and more not applied at all. Not sure if that's a good focus for the page.
Check out my fanfiction!Like I said above, the last two panels are all that we would need.
Clock's up; locking for inactivity/lack of consensus. No action is to be taken based on this thread.
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It's fairly low quality, but that's pretty easy to solve; it's the last two panels of this strip.
edited 18th Jul '14 6:15:36 PM by videogmer314