Let me introduce myself

Hello, long time lurker here, trying to get into the community.

My name is Diego Terán, I'm a writer from Argentina. Recently, I started writing in english, which is a pain in my everywhere.

A little feedback would be nice, you can check up my first (english) work at reddit: http://redd.it/216m37

I will see you on the forums.

Terán out.

PS: If this is not the right place for this post, just tell me, I'm a little lost in the forum.

edited 24th Mar '14 12:10:26 PM by teran

Hello, Diego/teran! I am the Blue Fish!

By the way, the place for posts like this is probably Meet the Tropers, under Yack Fest.

Or, in Writer's Block's case, Writer's Block Daily. At any rate, welcome; hope you enjoy yourself here.

Actually, the correct thread is here. There's a waiting list, but the people in charge of it will let you skip ahead if the next person up hasnt responded in a timely manner.

It's pretty good, I noticed only a few places where your phrasing seemed clumsy:

"She was new in the school of somebody I knew. A brother or a sister of a friend o'mine."

"She was there to study, I was there to listen some new finish heavy metal band."

"I never learn most of the details, but it was a minor violent case of school scandal."

Not major problems, just a little awkward I think. I do realize that you are going for a really terse writing style that isnt necessarily intended to be grammatically correct.

Thank you all for your messages. I like it here, so we will see each other, a lot, I hope. I'll look forward to put things in the right forums/threads :)

And, De Marquis, thanks for the feedback! It's really hard for me, but I'll learn to do it better (again, I hope).

See you around, guys.

I look forward to it. Welcome to the fold!

edited 29th Mar '14 11:05:28 AM by RBluefish