Fanfic Thread for San Jose Avengers

I am currently writing this fanfic for a friend, I am storyboarding and interpreting his ideas, adding some of my own.

Its the first time I have ever written something like this. Pointers and reviews would be nice.

Here is the link to the fanfic.

Still editing, due to the late night upload. Finding many potential errors.

Preemptively making a Tropes Page here: San Jose Avengers

edited 25th Jun '14 11:41:47 PM by NickTheSwing

And to any people more knowledgeable than me, if you see a canon error, just let me know and I'll fix it right up.