Sensory Shock (Interest Check) (Sci-fi/Survival Horror/RPG hybrid)

Gimmie a bit more. Not too terribly much to work with.

Now THAT'S depth. He's not outwardly angry about his predicaments, he's inwardly somber and withdrawn. I can't think of much to change other than minute details. While I've noticed commonalities with these characters on here (introverts, bitter, depressed, etc), yours seems to stick out a bit because you gave an in depth backstory. However, this could prove to be the character's main vice: if he is SO set in his traits, you may not have much room to evolve him.

Dynamic characters in this instance would be wonderful. If Ben could maybe learn to cope with himself or some other kind of significant change (doesn't have to be positive), that'd be great.

If I missed anyone feel free to speak up.

edited 4th Jul '13 1:07:36 PM by Prometheus136

Ok. I'll try to make him as dynamic as I can. I think if I plan it right, I could come up with a few different directions to take him depending on what happens.

Early send. :P

edited 4th Jul '13 1:16:42 PM by GlobsterAGoGo

Bumping.

Should be getting back to the RP soon.

Bumping again.

I'll try and make a signup soonish.

...You guys have waited an awfully long time for this to even commence.

I think I'll just throw some of my ridiculous perfectionism out the window and start this thing soon.

I could just work out plot details and dialogue as I go.

No, take as much time as you need.

I think I'm just gonna discard a lot of the complex bullcrap for now and just focus on world-building and plot.

Sorry it's been so long guys.