The Eighth TV Tropes Writing Contest:

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I'm done but I'm short of the word count. Fuck.
127 Psyga31511th May 2013 10:11:07 PM from Dungeons & Dragons No Sekai , Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Don't Forget Takatora
[up] Did you try expanding your contractions?
"An MMORPG without a logout button? That's a bold decision, man!"
[up] I think I'm going to try adding in more descriptions first. Expanding my contractions might make it feel clunky.
129 danna4511th May 2013 11:58:37 PM from Wagnaria , Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
Owner of "Dead End"
Looks like you guys are making steady progress [lol]
"And you must be Jonathan Joestar!" - Sue
130 porschelemans12th May 2013 09:41:13 AM from A Giant Hamster Ball , Relationship Status: You're a beautiful woman, probably
Avatar Sakaki Ignore cat
I hope I can finish this by the deadline...
I'm so sorry that my avatar doesn't appear fully in the shot, but the cat was threatening the photographer.
131 JimmyTMalice17th May 2013 12:34:42 PM from Ironforge , Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Finally managed to finish my first draft. I don't think it needs too many tweaks now, but I'm not really happy with how the ending played out...
"Steel wins battles. Gold wins wars."
Hm hypothetical question, but say I'm under the word count for my entry. I'd get some points deducted from mechanics, right?
Phinatic
Oh **** thought I sent mine in already but I didn't even finish my first draft. CRUNCH TIME!
134 porschelemans19th May 2013 04:50:26 PM from A Giant Hamster Ball , Relationship Status: You're a beautiful woman, probably
Avatar Sakaki Ignore cat
I'm so sorry that my avatar doesn't appear fully in the shot, but the cat was threatening the photographer.
135 ArsThaumaturgis19th May 2013 06:39:39 PM , Relationship Status: I've been dreaming of True Love's Kiss
What do you mean, "there are only four days left"? T-T

(Argh, I really hope that I manage to sit down and work with the first draft that I have... >_<)
Can I join in this contest.

All I have to do is keep the first sentence and the last sentence the same? I think I can do that. This would be my very first contest, ever.

Or is it too late?
Seeking for Light
You can still join. Just keep in mind that the deadline is on Friday.

You have to use the opening and closing sentences that are given in the first post of this thread (you can find them under the heading "Theme").
138 JimmyTMalice20th May 2013 12:19:24 PM from Ironforge , Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
Submission submitted.
"Steel wins battles. Gold wins wars."
139 Psyga31520th May 2013 12:20:30 PM from Dungeons & Dragons No Sekai , Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Don't Forget Takatora
So wait, is it the norm to say you submitted the work? Because if so, I sent it too.
"An MMORPG without a logout button? That's a bold decision, man!"
140 ohsointocats20th May 2013 12:38:31 PM from The Sand Wastes , Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The deadline is the 24th, though, correct?
Seeking for Light
Yes, it is.
142 ohsointocats20th May 2013 12:50:53 PM from The Sand Wastes , Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
All right. At this point I'm just editing for style, but that might take a couple days.
Woo, I'm done. Now to send it in.
Duuuuuuhhhhh
That was surprisingly expeditious.
145 ohsointocats21st May 2013 12:06:41 PM from The Sand Wastes , Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
Can I continue quibbling with the last sentence?

That it starts with an and really bothers me and may cause me to completely rewrite my ending. I mean seriously.

edited 21st May '13 12:16:24 PM by ohsointocats

146 ArsThaumaturgis21st May 2013 04:36:33 PM , Relationship Status: I've been dreaming of True Love's Kiss
Did we ever have a decision from all of the judges on the last sentence? Of the judges listed on the first page, I'm only aware of Nocturna having given a response (in approval, I believe).
147 chihuahua021st May 2013 05:10:36 PM from Standoff, USA , Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
Writer's Welcome Wagon
I also approve.

Wait what is getting approved? Taking the "and" out of the final sentence?
149 ArsThaumaturgis21st May 2013 06:43:55 PM , Relationship Status: I've been dreaming of True Love's Kiss
What I suggested, I believe, was '... the possibility allowing minor changes to the required sentences "and now" to "so now", for example and to the ending sentence in particular'.

The original post.
Duuuuuuhhhhh
Personally, I would prefer everyone to go with the same sentences because that was the point of the contest. However, considering how close it is to the deadline with some people apparently unable to work the original closing sentence into their story, I'll exercise some leniency.

At the same time, though, I think there should be some incentive to use the original sentences, as they're more difficult to incorporate. To tell you the truth, the last sentence is actually a large part of the reason why I decided to judge instead of enter. So I will probably do some very light point deduction if you change it, but keep in mind it will be so minor that it shouldn't affect your chances of winning; like maybe half a point if it's just something like removing the "and" or changing it to "so" or something minor like that. You'll get more points out of me in the long run if you can smoothly incorporate a modification of the closer than if you use the original one awkwardly.

Unless I'm completely outspoken here, but I personally think this is the most reasonable course of action.

edited 21st May '13 10:00:29 PM by FingerPuppet


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