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montmorencey So...yeah. from the quaint town of Grimm, Bismarck and Gauss Since: Aug, 2011
So...yeah.
#51: Apr 22nd 2013 at 12:15:39 PM

Oooooooookay.

I believe I have a workable idea.

1.2 k down for the scene from which I developed it, though this will change drastically as the story takes shape.

Complicated - because simple is simply too simple.
TheThnikkaman Phinatic Since: Apr, 2011
Phinatic
#52: Apr 23rd 2013 at 4:27:54 AM

OK, I have an idea and I'm starting to write now.

JimmyTMalice from Ironforge Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#53: Apr 24th 2013 at 2:32:44 PM

I would like to participate. Whether I'll actually get round to it I don't know, but I may as well put my name down. The sentences give me some intriguing ideas.

"Steel wins battles. Gold wins wars."
ohsointocats from The Sand Wastes Since: Oct, 2011 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#54: Apr 25th 2013 at 1:52:49 AM

That's a lot of participants. I wonder how many will actually finish?

JHM Apparition in the Woods from Niemandswasser Since: Aug, 2010 Relationship Status: Hounds of love are hunting
Apparition in the Woods
chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#56: Apr 25th 2013 at 4:08:01 AM

[up][up] Few, if we draw from past experiences. Usually only 10-13 finish.

montmorencey So...yeah. from the quaint town of Grimm, Bismarck and Gauss Since: Aug, 2011
So...yeah.
#57: Apr 25th 2013 at 9:16:54 PM

2k down. This idea might actually work out.

Complicated - because simple is simply too simple.
ohsointocats from The Sand Wastes Since: Oct, 2011 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#58: Apr 26th 2013 at 1:57:29 AM

Third time's a charm, eh?

ArsThaumaturgis Since: Nov, 2011 Relationship Status: I've been dreaming of True Love's Kiss
#59: Apr 27th 2013 at 6:36:21 AM

Well, I think that I've managed to find a story; I stand at 858 words at the moment, I believe, the two required sentences included. Not a hugely impressive start, but a start nonetheless. ^_^

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Hermiethefrog Since: Jan, 2001
#60: Apr 27th 2013 at 11:05:31 AM

I think I got the story going. The sentences feel kind of awkwardly placed though...

BrotherMycroft Dapper Gentleman Since: Jul, 2012
Dapper Gentleman
#61: Apr 27th 2013 at 2:29:07 PM

Well, well, it would seem I've actually started something. It will unquestionably need a good deal of editing, and like many things I write it's a bit derivative of Ray Bradbury, but still—it's a start! cool

"And every life is a special story of its own." —The Stargazer, Mass Effect 3
ohsointocats from The Sand Wastes Since: Oct, 2011 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#62: Apr 27th 2013 at 4:15:45 PM

I think there is a lot I do not understand about writing short stories...

ArsThaumaturgis Since: Nov, 2011 Relationship Status: I've been dreaming of True Love's Kiss
#63: Apr 27th 2013 at 6:53:35 PM

I'm up to 2549 words now, I believe, with a reasonable distance yet to go. ^_^

I'm fairly happy with the amount of writing that I managed to do today, but I'm not at all sure of the quality of it. Ah well, we'll see how it turns out, and the editing phase should hopefully at the least improve things.

On that note, are we allowed to get feedback on our pieces from beta readers before we submit? (In my case that likely involves sending it via an IM file transfer.)

[up] What are you having trouble with, if I may ask?

edited 27th Apr '13 6:54:52 PM by ArsThaumaturgis

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Nocturna Since: May, 2011
#64: Apr 27th 2013 at 7:51:19 PM

As long as the beta readers aren't any of the judges, I see no problem with that.

Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#65: Apr 27th 2013 at 9:49:23 PM

Okay, when you mean original work only, would references to other works interfere with that rule?

Nocturna Since: May, 2011
#66: Apr 27th 2013 at 10:00:05 PM

Depends what you mean by references. Fanfiction isn't allowed.

Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#67: Apr 27th 2013 at 10:11:41 PM

[up] Like... Okay, I don't want to spoil my fanfic, so I'll use an example completely unrelated to it. Basically just mentions to stuff, like...

"So he was going on and on talking about how he watched [INSERT SHOW HERE] at 8:00 PM..." Basically something like that.

edited 27th Apr '13 10:11:46 PM by Psyga315

Nocturna Since: May, 2011
#68: Apr 27th 2013 at 10:27:41 PM

Yes, that would be fine.

Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#69: Apr 27th 2013 at 10:33:51 PM

Alright. Thanks.

edited 27th Apr '13 10:33:58 PM by Psyga315

ohsointocats from The Sand Wastes Since: Oct, 2011 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#70: Apr 28th 2013 at 12:29:13 AM

@Ars: I was thinking about this for a while last night, and I was really tired, but here is what I came up with: you either need to 1) make things simple enough that they do not need to be explained or 2) leave important explanations out and let the audience fill in the blanks for themselves, and neither of those two options are something that I'm entirely comfortable with.

JimmyTMalice from Ironforge Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: THIS CONCEPT OF 'WUV' CONFUSES AND INFURIATES US!
#71: Apr 28th 2013 at 4:12:44 AM

I've come up with a pretty great idea for my story. Might actually start writing it soon.

"Steel wins battles. Gold wins wars."
ohsointocats from The Sand Wastes Since: Oct, 2011 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#72: Apr 28th 2013 at 6:30:01 AM

And I have finished my first draft.

Hermiethefrog Since: Jan, 2001
#73: Apr 29th 2013 at 2:50:01 PM

Have most of the first draft written. Got the beginning and ending, just need a bit in the middle.

Then to get one of my friends from somewhere else on the internet to proof read it.

Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#74: Apr 29th 2013 at 3:00:50 PM

I'm 2/3 of the way done with mine. Though to me, there's no thing as "draft".

ohsointocats from The Sand Wastes Since: Oct, 2011 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature

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