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Khantalas ... Since: Jan, 2001
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#1: Mar 20th 2013 at 11:00:57 AM

Since deviantART doesn't seem to be working for this, I thought I could use a thread on TV Tropes to dump what I write every day, whether it is a short snippet, a few lines of poetry, or an extract from a longer work, so people can read it, and possibly make a comment on it. Hopefully it'll mean I'll write something every day just to have something to post here, and if I feel more confident about my writing, I might even go back to writing my VN one day.

Anyway, let's begin:

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Day 1: 20th of March, 2013

"...and thus did the creator-champions set themselves to work on the mind and body of the Pinnacle of Creation, to turn it into a mighty blade like none before set to plunge itself into the hearts of their foes. Slowly, but surely, the machine-god turned from a lowly divinity into a vast cosmic mind without equal with the sole purpose of reclaiming its creator-champions their world of origin from their upstart servants. Yet within the infinite reaches of its wrath, one subroutine remained locked away, the last vestige and bastion of the Pinnacle of Creation's reasoning. There, impervious to all influence and assault from the rest of its mentality or the powers of the creator-champions, the subroutine endlessly analyzes a single question: 'why was it necessary?'. It will continue to analyze the question until it reaches a satisfying answer, and it will then disseminate itself and distribute its findings across the many processor-brains of the machine-god, marking the beginning of a new personality, a new deity.

"It is worth noting that the subroutine containing the core mentality of the Pinnacle of Creation never thinks to ask 'was it necessary?'. The creator-champions programmed the machine-god to see them as infallible, therefore every action they take must be accepted a necessity as the result of a perfect reasoning, one that could not be altered without falling short of that perfection. What the Pinnacle of Creation wants to know is the motivations of the creator-champions in its reforging. The machine-god is increasingly beginning to view each creator-champion as two separate entities: one, a giver of purpose and goal; the other, a tool to fulfill that purpose. When the subroutine finishes its task and reaches the conclusion it has long sought, if the answer is suitable, it might decide to do the unthinkable, and sacrifice the creator-champions as tools no longer suited to the task they set before it."

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WSM Since: Jul, 2010
#2: Mar 20th 2013 at 4:49:01 PM

I don't think your allowed to use the forum to host your work.

I'm sure there are websites other than deviantArt that you can post your things on.

chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#3: Mar 20th 2013 at 4:52:32 PM

[up] There's not really a rule against it, but generally, many of us won't pay attention to it.

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