Looks great.
You could probably lose the third panel entirely without too much fuss, if that last image wasn't clear enough.
Moon◊Huh, I think you're right on this one. I kind of miss the old panel 3 with Gotenks gooped up, but it really doesn't lose much removing it and the larger size is nice.
Here's both side by side for easier comparison.
edited 20th Dec '12 11:04:46 AM by Earnest
I like the second (three-frame) one. A lot more concise and not really less clear.
edited 20th Dec '12 3:00:26 PM by rodneyAnonymous
Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.Yeah, three-panel's good.
Moon◊I can go with that too.
Check out my fanfiction!Works well enough.
for 29.2.
edited 20th Dec '12 8:55:38 PM by Blurring
If a chicken crosses the road and nobody else is around to see it, does the road move beneath the chicken instead?Good enough. 19.2 is up, potholed, and tagged. Caption or no?
"Absorbed a small boy, gained: massive power, combat skills ... and a poofy vest!"
Or maybe "Nah, I didn't absorb the kid because he was a Flying Brick, it was for the poofy vest!"
edited 21st Dec '12 7:12:30 AM by Earnest
I say the first one.
I'm not crazy about either. Let's just go without; if someone thinks of one, they can add it later. Locking up.