You can start by not making him a Darksider.
I am just gonna work on a whole new idea.
Name: Rom Vill
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance: Rom is green eyed with messy brown hair, He wears a helmet less set of Clone Trooper Mark 2 armor and belt containing his Lightsabre and Blaster, is also has a hidden pouch on the back where he keeps his spare lightsabre, He wears a necklace of Bones around his neck, a gift from his mother, He
Class: Jedi Knight
Abilities: Rom is skilled at Lightsabre combat, particularly Vapaad and Juyo. He also is skilled at using fore lightning and force choke, however, with his high emotional range, their power has been known to fluctuate. Despite being a Jedi Knight, Rom is an extremely poor diplomat. He is however, skilled at stratagy, often specializing in crushing offenses or ambushes.
Equipment: Rom Wields a single bladed crimson lightsabre that he took from a Sith acolyte, he also possesses a green single bladed lightsabre, however he usually uses one at a time. His forearm gaurds are composed of cortosis and his armor is standard Phase II clone trooper armor.
Personality: Rom is Sarcastic, Blunt and Impatient. He is a fan of what he calls "aggressive Interrogation," AKA, threats to get info. While this puts him at odds with the Prime example of Jedi, Rom is also Anaylactical, And a master strategist, something that he loves to hide from his opponents. He has a soft spot for children and a firm believer in justice.
History/Background: Born on A Star Cruiser, Rom grew up in the Military, He first used the force at age thirteen, during which he used Force Lightening on another soldier during a messroom fight, Taken into training, Rom found he was proficient is both types of form V, along with an above average skill at force lightening, something that worried his master Rom's first engagement was during a Sith attack, During which, Rom fought the Sith Acolyte named Leis with a Vibrablade, killing Leis, Rom took his Lightsabre, as a trophy. Now a Knight, Rom often can be found hanging out in the bars of Taattoine, bounty hunting,or the like. Despite his darkness, Rom is a firm stander against the Sith.
edited 20th Mar '13 9:38:06 PM by TroyandHawk
Good to be backAt present, we are closed.
Ah. My apologies.
Good to be back
Guess my own RP Idea is gonna have to work on informed past...
Oh well, I can make this work.