Follow TV Tropes

Following

All-Purpose Nasuverse Fanfiction Thread

Go To

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#16276: Sep 24th 2016 at 9:42:43 AM

You're not even trying to refute my arguments. Just repeating your previous assertations over and over again, with little variation.

edited 24th Sep '16 9:44:17 AM by MarqFJA

Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.
IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#16277: Sep 24th 2016 at 9:50:05 AM

Of course I am. Because the fact that you don't acknowledge it doesn't mean I'm not right.

When it comes down to it, Marq, you can throw as many wild theories with no grounding on anything as you like. It doesn't change the fact that UBW does not work that way outside your head.

edited 24th Sep '16 9:53:10 AM by IAmNotCreativeEnough

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
Zelenal The Cat Knows Where It's At from Purrgatory Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Maxing my social links
The Cat Knows Where It's At
#16278: Sep 24th 2016 at 9:52:25 AM

Archer may have a weapon that's similar to Excalibur. Alternatively, while he cannot trace it, he might be able to project it (since there's a very distinct difference between the two).

Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!
IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#16279: Sep 24th 2016 at 9:55:47 AM

Uh, no.

Tracing it is making the weapon in UBW. Projecting it is bringing it to the outside world. Can't do the former, can't do the latter. He can 'project' a sword that is identical in look to Excalibur, but it will never be Excalibur.

And as for having a sword 'like' Excalibur... oh, he certainly does. He has Caliburn, and Caliburn should, in theory, match Excalibur. Of course, Caliburn will break immediately after one use, because it can't handle its own power, but it should match Excalibur. The real one, that is.

Of course, this is meaningless because even if he does use Caliburn to match the Excaliblast, he will still lose because his fake can never match up to the original when the original isn't being wielded by an arrogant moron.

edited 24th Sep '16 9:56:18 AM by IAmNotCreativeEnough

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
TheNobody Since: Jan, 2011
#16280: Sep 25th 2016 at 12:01:15 AM

All that is inconsequential. Better tell me, who's this Mumei character that's been mentioned back at page 648. Seems kinda funky, at a first glance. Is there a wiki link?

Also, I support the idea of Prinny Shirou. By the time he gets so annoying/intolerable that his own master won't resurrect him, he might just as well gain his first follower, who would pay out of their own pocket.

Rather than smart, I'd prefer to be wise. It would let me be silly more often.
Nouct insert commentary here from an east coast Since: Sep, 2014 Relationship Status: Tell me lies, tell me sweet little lies
Zelenal The Cat Knows Where It's At from Purrgatory Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Maxing my social links
The Cat Knows Where It's At
#16282: Sep 25th 2016 at 12:14:37 AM

I have to say that I really don't care for Koneko's character development in "A Demon Lord's Hero." As much as I enjoy it, a part of me enjoys "Fake x Fate" more simply because it actually feels like its crossing over FSN with DxD. Too much has been changed in this AU for my liking and the author's disdain for DxD is a tad annoying.

Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!
TheNobody Since: Jan, 2011
#16283: Sep 25th 2016 at 12:15:19 AM

Aha, thanks for the link!

Wait, that's him?

Rather than smart, I'd prefer to be wise. It would let me be silly more often.
Zelenal The Cat Knows Where It's At from Purrgatory Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Maxing my social links
The Cat Knows Where It's At
#16284: Sep 25th 2016 at 12:16:52 AM

Yeah. Mumei (Nameless) is just Playable Archer from the Fate/EXTRA series who happens to basically be EMIYA without actually being EMIYA.

Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!
IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#16285: Sep 25th 2016 at 5:38:54 AM

@Zelenal

It really doesn't help that the author seems to think that his is the 'true' character for Koneko.

Like I said, it has its host of problems.

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
Zelenal The Cat Knows Where It's At from Purrgatory Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Maxing my social links
The Cat Knows Where It's At
#16286: Sep 25th 2016 at 5:53:21 PM

So I just got fully introduced to "A Demon Lord's Hero"'s main OC villain thingy person and I was filled with a sense of dread. Then I read the A/N and it got even worse. Seriously, just... I haven't the words.

At least the bit between Serafall and Shirou on the rooftop was really touching.

Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!
IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#16287: Sep 25th 2016 at 6:21:59 PM

What was that, again? It's been a while.

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
Zelenal The Cat Knows Where It's At from Purrgatory Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Maxing my social links
The Cat Knows Where It's At
#16288: Sep 25th 2016 at 6:30:43 PM

The scene between Shirou and Serafall? I'll spoiler tag it on the off chance someone wants to read it for themselves.

Shirou is getting depressed over the fact that all of his victories have come at the cost of something else and that saving Ilya meant losing his chance of reuniting with Saber. Serafall approaches him and talks to him about how no one is born with a purpose and how they have to find that themselves. She then talks about her first love, whom she treasured dearly and lost, and what it did to her and of her desperate search across the entire Earth for someone who she can treasure and call her own only to fail utterly. Then she found Shirou and she realized that she could never find her reason for living again because they existed in another world. What follows is Serafall (who insists that Shirou refer to her as Sera) standing on the railing of the rooftop and declaring the people bellow that she loves Emiya Shirou. There's more after that and it's all very sweet.

Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!
IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#16289: Sep 25th 2016 at 6:37:37 PM

No, see, that one I remember also I believe that the assertion that Shirou can never reunite with Saber now is wrong, mostly because Avalon don't give no shits about nuffin', I mean the OC villain thingy, which I don't.

edited 25th Sep '16 6:38:32 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
Zelenal The Cat Knows Where It's At from Purrgatory Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Maxing my social links
The Cat Knows Where It's At
#16290: Sep 25th 2016 at 6:40:03 PM

Issei's twin(?) sister that the narration outright lies about. The Red Dragon Emperor of this story. In the A/N, the author basically opens with how awesome she is and how much better the show would have been with her as the protag and how they're having trouble coming up with ways for the heroes to win against her. If the OC had a dick, the author would have been sucking it.

Well, Shirou's in a completely different universe and I don't THINK Avalon exists outside of the flow of time like, say, the Throne of Heroes and he sold his soul to Serafall so... yeah. I can buy it.

edited 25th Sep '16 6:41:31 PM by Zelenal

Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!
VoidsEmpathy Emissary of the Void from Realm of In-Between Since: Jan, 2011 Relationship Status: A heart full of love
Emissary of the Void
#16291: Sep 25th 2016 at 6:54:53 PM

Her name is taken after the character from...Sekirei of all things. While the author tries to make her more human-ish, she isn't too different from the character.

Now that I remember: Issei is outright terrified of her because she wholeheartedly believes that she and the dragon are one and the same is largely responsibly for the irreparable damage done to the twin's father. I can't remember if she had a thing for shirou or it was a moment of In Love with Your Carnage...

edited 25th Sep '16 6:57:49 PM by VoidsEmpathy

[DATA LOST]
Zelenal The Cat Knows Where It's At from Purrgatory Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Maxing my social links
The Cat Knows Where It's At
#16292: Sep 25th 2016 at 7:00:26 PM

So the character isn't even a proper OC? That's... that's even worse. I almost dread continuing the story now.

Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!
VoidsEmpathy Emissary of the Void from Realm of In-Between Since: Jan, 2011 Relationship Status: A heart full of love
Emissary of the Void
#16293: Sep 25th 2016 at 7:06:09 PM

Mm. While I won't convince you either way, I'm just wondering how the author plans on continuing the story.

[DATA LOST]
IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#16294: Sep 25th 2016 at 7:56:22 PM

@Zelenal

Oh, that.

They fight. The only reason Shirou doesn't beat her nigh-instantly is because he doesn't want to kill her or allow her to kill herself. Even Shirou comments that he could beat her with contemptuous ease just by pulling Balmung out. Or at least, that's what I think happened. I wasn't really paying that much attention when reading the latest chapters, I was bored at work.

edited 25th Sep '16 7:58:11 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
Zelenal The Cat Knows Where It's At from Purrgatory Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Maxing my social links
The Cat Knows Where It's At
#16295: Sep 25th 2016 at 8:01:51 PM

That's reassuring. The A/N of the next chapter also basically stated as much.

Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!
Zelenal The Cat Knows Where It's At from Purrgatory Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Maxing my social links
The Cat Knows Where It's At
#16296: Sep 26th 2016 at 9:54:50 PM

Okay, so, there's something I don't get.

Shirou hates Sirzechs because he saw his true form. Not only that, but he saw his true form inside UBW where he can understand the nature of everyone inside immediately due to his dual origin. In the chapter I just read, Sirzechs makes this neat sounding speech to himself about what will happen when Serafall reveals her true form to Shirou and if Shirou will come to hate her as well.

This would be all fine and dandy and would be a very interesting question if it wasn't for the fact that Shirou has already seen Serafall's true form. He saw it way back in the first chapter. They were even inside UBW!

So either the author wasted our time on Sirzechs' bit and this Shirou's just an asshole or the author completely forgot that Shirou's already seen Serafall's true form. While you could make the argument that Shirou was too distraught over Ilya's death at the time to really notice, given how their power and true forms have been described in the story, I don't buy it.

Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!
IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#16297: Sep 27th 2016 at 2:59:00 AM

Sirzechs doesn't know that though.

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
Zelenal The Cat Knows Where It's At from Purrgatory Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: Maxing my social links
The Cat Knows Where It's At
#16298: Sep 27th 2016 at 8:13:43 AM

I know that. That's why I specifically said "The author is wasting our time" since I don't see much point in reading Sirzechs musing over those things when the readers already know the answer and there's no dramatic irony involved.

That also goes back to this Shirou being a bit of an asshole. What makes Sirzechs' true form so terrifying that Shirou now completely hates him with every fiber of his being while he's perfectly fine with Serafall despite her true form also being described as absolutely terrifying? While I get that it's not the physical appearance of Sirzechs' true form that terrified Shirou but rather what he saw in his soul, I feel like the narration should have pointed out the difference between the two by now.

Setting that aside, Shirou's annihilation of Rylan was really badass, as was Sairaorg's "match" against his father's team (if not as). I was also trying to figure out what Serafall's Sin was and knowing it has left me a little frightened.

Let the joy of love give you an answer! Check out my book!
IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#16299: Sep 27th 2016 at 2:16:28 PM

To be fair, Serafall, while mad powerful, is kind of not very impressive next to the monstrously powerful Sirzechs.

But I also think that the author having forgotten that Shirou has supposedly already seen Serafall when she's not hiding her true self, presence-wise.

Well, that, or Shirou never gazed into her soul.

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
Cronosonic (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
#16300: Sep 28th 2016 at 11:42:43 PM

Well, I had an idea - considering the Camelot chapter of Grand Order is basically the Nasuverse version of the plot of Sonic and the Black Knight, well...

The Blue Blur finally managed to knock down King Arthur and his steed, cutting through his armor with a furious blow from Caliburn, sending Deathcalibur flying. The talking blade immediately alerted him, "quickly, the weapons!"

Sonic nodded, and with blinding speed, he placed the four Noble Phantasms he had previously acquired from the other Knights in a square formation around the fallen king - Galatine, Arondight, Failnaught and Clarent. As Merlina had told him, the swords began to rise, forming a magical sigil intended to neutralise the power of Avalon. It seemed to be working.

Then, suddenly, a burst of magical energy broke the sigil, sending the weapons flying. Sonic grit his teeth, catching them in midair, "what now?! You're persistent, aren't you?"

"Much the same could be said for you, Knight of the Wind," spoke an unexpectedly feminine voice from the smoke, confusing Sonic considerably. His jaw dropped when King Arthur emerged from the smoke, the helmet gone, and now carrying a grand lance that was swirling with holy light. The biggest and most notable surprise, however, previously hidden, was that Arthur was clearly a woman, with a feminine face and build and rather prominent... Assets. "I previously did not consider you worth Rhongomyniad's might, but I was greatly mistaken. I suppose I thought my Knights had grown soft, but clearly your natural skill was beyond even them. I commend you. In another time and place, perhaps you would have had a seat at my table." She got back onto her mighty steed, prepared to face down Sonic once more. "You may be the Knight of the Wind, but now, you face the might of the Wind King."

Sonic blinked, and grinned, not one to pass up a challenge such as this. "Well, in that case, how can I say no?"

The two knights once again charged each other.

It was said that it was such a titantic battle that the island of Avalon had been completely levelled by the time the victor emerged...

edited 28th Sep '16 11:43:27 PM by Cronosonic


Total posts: 17,217
Top