Thanks very much for your comments, Lymle! I'm glad to finally have you here! Hopefully, the last two chapters will meet with your expectations. I'm working hard to make sure they're the best they can be.
Speaking of which! Chapter 34 is on page 9 and counting. I think I'm through the most difficult part now... with any luck, I should finish it this week. Fingers crossed.
Page 13 and counting. We're about to start cooking!
>cooking
Are they making pancakes? Maybe Desideria would stop being an evil, world-devouring Eldritch Abomination if they gave her some pancakes.
edited 20th Mar '14 4:02:16 PM by Enthryn
No, but I'm sure Kagami would feel better if she could have some of Homura's pancakes.
OH GOD I'M REFERENCING ONIONS AGAIN. STOP ME.
Exact quote provided:
"Clearly, the only thing better than lesbians eating pancakes is lesbians eating pancakes OFF EACH OTHER... Eureka! -runs off to commission an artist-"
You're welcome
OH GOD WHY AM I A CAR!? - ForzarePage 23. Still going... it's slow work, as I'm obsessively checking and rechecking almost everything to be sure it reads right, but it's getting there.
Page 29. Now approximately halfway through the final battle.
If you take too long, we might come out with a full-blown speculah chart before the last episode canto chapter comes out.
Hey, if you want to start a Speculah, be my guest. :D Just give me a link so I can read it and laugh at all your guesses take things into consideration.
Congratulations! You guessed the ending!
SPOILER ALERT:
The story ends with the Last causing the Third Impact. Everyone melts into Morning Rescue while inappropriate music plays, and Kagami and Homura wake up on a beach with the decapitated head of Giant Naked Konata staring at them. In the last scene, they feed each other pancakes, marshmallows, and onions, which is all DEEP and SYMBOLIC of SOMETHING OR OTHER, and the last words of the story are Kagami saying "Pass the syrup."
also, ponies.
OH GOD WHY AM I A CAR!? - ForzareI can't help but feel like I can shove a joke about someone losing control of their life in here somewhere.
On that note I'm off to figure out how to attach images and tropes to my posts~
"What is it about being the little sister of EVERY single human being on earth that's so hard to understand?"Home stretch, peoples. I'm on the last part of the final battle. Did some juggling with spacing and stuff and cut the page count down from 36 to 31, but I've still made major progress.
If I don't get it done in my final push tonight, I'm aiming for Wednesday. Like hell I'm updating on April Fools Day, and April 2nd is when Rebellion releases in the US, so...
edited 31st Mar '14 2:17:53 PM by FringeBenefits
Eh, heh heh. April 2nd. Well, I tried.
Anyway. Three more scenes to go.
Tomorrow.
[hype intesifies]
OH GOD WHY AM I A CAR!? - Forzare[Heavy breathing]
"What is it about being the little sister of EVERY single human being on earth that's so hard to understand?"[heart stops]
Dammit. Sorry, guys, but it's going to be just a little while longer. I'm on the last scene, and it needs to be proofread, but if I can possibly manage it, it's still going up tonight.
Thanks for your patience. I'm trying to be sure it's worth the wait.
Finished.
I'm having it proofread tonight, and uploading it first thing in the morning. For now, since it's near 2 AM, I'm getting some well-deserved sleep.
edited 15th Apr '14 10:47:06 PM by FringeBenefits
Here it is. Sorry about the monstrous length, but there was a lot of story still to tell.
Thanks for everything, guys. I hope it's worth the wait. Don't keep me waiting too long for reviews, now. XD
I just finished right before making this post. As of this moment my glasses are so stained with tears and fog and my roommates checked on me twice to make sure I'm ok. Fantastic. Brilliant. I hate you. But I love you. It couldn't have been better. It's perfect, just like this story.
Will give an actual review of my thoughts and opinions, but just thought I'd stop by and give my first impressions while it's still fresh. OP delivered, and he delivered well.
"What is it about being the little sister of EVERY single human being on earth that's so hard to understand?"
OK! I have stalked this thread for the past three months and kept meaning to post but between horrible time management and life it's been a struggle! I made an account just to post here too!
I plan to review and give feedback as best as I can, but it'll probably be a little biased. To be honest out of every fanfic or story I've ever read this is by far my favorite. I've kept up with it and watched it like a hawk, eating up every little thing I could. Great work.
I haven't read 33 yet just because I'm waiting for 34 to get it all in one go. Just like I'm waiting on Kill La Kill to finish before I start it! My hype train for both are hard to keep in the station!
Ok I'm done spazzing out, that aside, hello everyone and all that good stuff. Nice to finally make a post!
"What is it about being the little sister of EVERY single human being on earth that's so hard to understand?"