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TweedlyDee BWAAAH! from Kansas Since: Apr, 2010
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#1: Aug 24th 2011 at 4:06:23 PM

Over sized, wordy, and esoteric. Why, just why?

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USAF713 I changed accounts. from the United States Since: Sep, 2010
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#2: Aug 24th 2011 at 4:14:14 PM

I'm going to call foul just because it's so damn big...

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Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
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#3: Aug 24th 2011 at 4:29:27 PM

The top two rows are all that apply to the trope. The bottom two rows are pointless.

Crop it thus:

edited 24th Aug '11 4:31:45 PM by Madrugada

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TweedlyDee BWAAAH! from Kansas Since: Apr, 2010
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TheFreeman from Hialeah,FL. Since: Mar, 2011
#7: Aug 24th 2011 at 5:36:08 PM

[up][up] I definitely like that one.

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#8: Aug 24th 2011 at 7:16:56 PM

[up][up][up] That works well enough for me.

USAF713 I changed accounts. from the United States Since: Sep, 2010
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#9: Aug 24th 2011 at 7:51:18 PM

Well, in the meantime, while we wait for more suggestions, I'm going to go with...

Motion to pull

As per OP reasoning: too wordy, too big of a picture, and not enough of it is relevant.

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Osmium from Germany Since: Dec, 2010
#10: Aug 25th 2011 at 3:10:12 AM

Maybe just this part of the comic?

edited 25th Aug '11 3:10:24 AM by Osmium

Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
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#11: Aug 25th 2011 at 3:27:53 AM

I like it. The machine dealie on the left really gets the trope across. We could probably crop the rest of it out if we wanted.

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FastEddie Since: Apr, 2004
#12: Aug 25th 2011 at 3:29:20 AM

I like the 'adorable' one above.

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#13: Aug 25th 2011 at 6:27:21 AM

[up][up][up] That's better, but it's still kinda meh for me.

Camacan from Australiatown Since: Jan, 2001
#14: Aug 25th 2011 at 6:42:32 AM

I think that Schlock Mercenary page is not a good image source. Isolated panels are wordy and need stuff coming before and after to make proper sense.

USAF713 I changed accounts. from the United States Since: Sep, 2010
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#15: Sep 3rd 2011 at 2:37:18 PM

Bump. This is my original suggestion, the "adorable" one...

edited 3rd Sep '11 2:37:53 PM by USAF713

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Katsuhagi Salty from New England Since: Jan, 2001
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#16: Sep 3rd 2011 at 8:30:37 PM

I love the adorable one, it gets the idea across and is easy on the eyes.

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Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
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#17: Sep 3rd 2011 at 8:51:17 PM

The problem is that "test-tube babies" is only part of the trope, and the smallest part, to boot. The important part is "deliberately altered before birth through genetic manipulation."

How about this one?

this one

edited 3rd Sep '11 8:58:50 PM by Madrugada

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USAF713 I changed accounts. from the United States Since: Sep, 2010
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#18: Sep 3rd 2011 at 8:59:37 PM

~shrugs~

I liked the Visual Pun aspect of it...

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Camacan from Australiatown Since: Jan, 2001
#19: Sep 3rd 2011 at 11:16:31 PM

Accurately encapsulating the trope is the main point — surely more important than a visual pun, even if it is nice. I'm with Maddie on this one.

I find the test-tube image works against the trope in that the happy chap crawling out of the tube says "normal / ordinary" to me. Gattaca Babies are are modified.

edited 3rd Sep '11 11:16:47 PM by Camacan

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#20: Sep 5th 2011 at 9:14:44 AM

[up][up][up] That's an interesting pic, I like it.

USAF713 I changed accounts. from the United States Since: Sep, 2010
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#21: Sep 5th 2011 at 9:23:39 AM

Well, I'm not finding anything that's better than what Mad has—curse you, slow internet!—so, I'll support that one...

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Camacan from Australiatown Since: Jan, 2001
#22: Sep 6th 2011 at 1:29:45 AM

I like Madrugada's fractionated baby picture more each time I see it. A baby divided into parts is definitely in the right area.

Medinoc Chaotic Greedy from France Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
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#23: Sep 16th 2011 at 12:47:19 PM

this picture was suggested after an unrelated discussion in the 40k thread.

But I think Madrugada's pic looks better.

edited 16th Sep '11 12:47:55 PM by Medinoc

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shimaspawn from Here and Now Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: In your bunk
#24: Sep 16th 2011 at 12:51:12 PM

[up] That might be good for Uterine Replicator.

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Deboss I see the Awesomeness. from Awesomeville Texas Since: Aug, 2009
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#25: Sep 16th 2011 at 1:02:21 PM

God yes, whoever put up the Sclock pic clearly didn't know what they were doing.

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