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TeraChimera Since: Oct, 2010
#151: Sep 9th 2011 at 5:21:44 AM

[up] Try to get a story in from one theme, and then do your best to get another theme in. I did that with my story, and managed to get three themes without much trouble.

Say, have an alternate history where magic is widely used. Halfway or two-thirds through, use "The House on Maple Street" from the Harris Burdick collection to turn it into sci-fi. Three themes right there. (You can use that, by the way; it's not my story).

FreezairForALimitedTime Responsible adult from Planet Claire Since: Jan, 2001
Responsible adult
#152: Sep 9th 2011 at 11:38:38 AM

So I'm almost done with the first draft of my story. Would any of my fellow writers like to read through it for me and give a little feedback? Writers only, obviously. And not disclosing what my story is is necessary.

"Proto-Indo-European makes the damnedest words related. It's great. It's the Kevin Bacon of etymology." ~Madrugada
deathjavu This foreboding is fa... from The internet, obviously Since: Feb, 2010
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#153: Sep 9th 2011 at 1:31:48 PM

I'll show you mine if you show me yours.*

edited 9th Sep '11 1:32:55 PM by deathjavu

Look, you can't make me speak in a logical, coherent, intelligent bananna.
FallenLegend Lucha Libre goddess from Navel Of The Moon. Since: Oct, 2010
Lucha Libre goddess
#154: Sep 9th 2011 at 5:32:38 PM

[up][up]Sure I still ow you reading your past story (didn't forget, I will read it). I think you are a cool person so I would like to help

edited 9th Sep '11 5:35:10 PM by FallenLegend

Make your hearth shine through the darkest night; let it transform hate into kindness, evil into justice, and loneliness into love.
FreezairForALimitedTime Responsible adult from Planet Claire Since: Jan, 2001
Responsible adult
#155: Sep 9th 2011 at 9:58:23 PM

Yay, thanks! (And I will feedback you too, Death, promise.) Still not done yet, but I'll PM y'alls when it is.

"Proto-Indo-European makes the damnedest words related. It's great. It's the Kevin Bacon of etymology." ~Madrugada
Parable Since: Aug, 2009
#156: Sep 9th 2011 at 11:07:45 PM

Sorry guys, but I don't think I will be having the time to do any judging. But do your best and have fun!

USAF713 I changed accounts. from the United States Since: Sep, 2010
I changed accounts.
#157: Sep 9th 2011 at 11:39:43 PM

I can't figure out how to start my story, and the writer's block is killing me...

I am now known as Flyboy.
deathjavu This foreboding is fa... from The internet, obviously Since: Feb, 2010
This foreboding is fa...
#158: Sep 10th 2011 at 12:45:29 AM

You've got to have at least one sentence figured out, right?

It doesn't matter which sentence, just write it.

edited 10th Sep '11 12:45:38 AM by deathjavu

Look, you can't make me speak in a logical, coherent, intelligent bananna.
jewelleddragon Also known as Katz from Pasadena, CA Since: Apr, 2009
Also known as Katz
#159: Sep 10th 2011 at 12:14:15 PM

If Parable's out, we're down to 2-maybe-3 judges. Anyone else in?

BetsyandtheFiveAvengers Since: Feb, 2011
#160: Sep 10th 2011 at 12:20:19 PM

I can try to judge again, but I'm not sure if I was good at it the last time.

FallenLegend Lucha Libre goddess from Navel Of The Moon. Since: Oct, 2010
Lucha Libre goddess
#161: Sep 10th 2011 at 12:25:10 PM

One question do subtitles count towards the word count?

Make your hearth shine through the darkest night; let it transform hate into kindness, evil into justice, and loneliness into love.
jewelleddragon Also known as Katz from Pasadena, CA Since: Apr, 2009
Also known as Katz
#162: Sep 10th 2011 at 1:01:06 PM

[up]As far as I'm concerned, no.

FallenLegend Lucha Libre goddess from Navel Of The Moon. Since: Oct, 2010
Lucha Libre goddess
#163: Sep 10th 2011 at 10:23:53 PM

[up]Thats great, my work will be more comprehensible that way.

If my story doesnt suco this time. I think I will volunteer for judge next contestgrin

Make your hearth shine through the darkest night; let it transform hate into kindness, evil into justice, and loneliness into love.
deathjavu This foreboding is fa... from The internet, obviously Since: Feb, 2010
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#164: Sep 10th 2011 at 10:50:28 PM

<- Notices post about being short judges

<- Considers judging the contest

<- Remembers that he's an entrant

<- Decides it's time to go to bed

Look, you can't make me speak in a logical, coherent, intelligent bananna.
FreezairForALimitedTime Responsible adult from Planet Claire Since: Jan, 2001
Responsible adult
#165: Sep 11th 2011 at 12:14:51 AM

Oh man, I hope I can finish my entry in time. My computer has just gone kaput. Luckily I foresaw this and backed up everything shortly before the kaputing, but getting typing time on the family computer (no, not that family computer) will be tough.

"Proto-Indo-European makes the damnedest words related. It's great. It's the Kevin Bacon of etymology." ~Madrugada
feotakahari Fuzzy Orange Doomsayer from Looking out at the city Since: Sep, 2009
Fuzzy Orange Doomsayer
#166: Sep 11th 2011 at 4:24:18 AM

Rewriting what I've got in order to deal with some problems. I'm currently trying something that I've never seen done before, and there's a decent chance it will be a disaster, but I'll give it my best shot.

That's Feo . . . He's a disgusting, mysoginistic, paedophilic asshat who moonlights as a shitty writer—Something Awful
Kino Since: Aug, 2010 Relationship Status: Californicating
#167: Sep 11th 2011 at 9:49:50 PM

I'm still ready to judge.

FreezairForALimitedTime Responsible adult from Planet Claire Since: Jan, 2001
Responsible adult
#168: Sep 11th 2011 at 10:53:05 PM

And first draft done!

Now for feedback and tweaking.

"Proto-Indo-European makes the damnedest words related. It's great. It's the Kevin Bacon of etymology." ~Madrugada
Dealan Since: Feb, 2010
#169: Sep 13th 2011 at 9:56:51 AM

Just finished it. This makes it my first contest in which I did not submit the work at the very last day of the deadline. Yay.

(Though I might add a small part that I have in mind later. But probably not.)

FallenLegend Lucha Libre goddess from Navel Of The Moon. Since: Oct, 2010
Lucha Libre goddess
#170: Sep 14th 2011 at 5:03:20 PM

So much I want to tell and so little words we can use sad. I have 2 thousand so far!.

I have read frezair's story and it's very cool I am sure it will be very well received!

edited 14th Sep '11 6:12:58 PM by FallenLegend

Make your hearth shine through the darkest night; let it transform hate into kindness, evil into justice, and loneliness into love.
FreezairForALimitedTime Responsible adult from Planet Claire Since: Jan, 2001
Responsible adult
#171: Sep 14th 2011 at 11:34:24 PM

Just remember, lips sealed! Don't want to compromise judging and all.

"Proto-Indo-European makes the damnedest words related. It's great. It's the Kevin Bacon of etymology." ~Madrugada
USAF713 I changed accounts. from the United States Since: Sep, 2010
I changed accounts.
#172: Sep 15th 2011 at 2:37:53 PM

You've got to have at least one sentence figured out, right?

It doesn't matter which sentence, just write it.

I'm going for a certain style, and it's very difficult to emulate (what I think is) it...

I am now known as Flyboy.
MildGuy I squeeze gats. from the bed I made. Since: Jan, 2011
I squeeze gats.
#173: Sep 22nd 2011 at 10:42:07 PM

Blarg!

It's all down to if I can revise this, before the deadline, into something that isn't New Shame. Not sure if I'm going to make it. Where would be the best place here to ask for a beta read-through once (if) this sucka is ready?

FreezairForALimitedTime Responsible adult from Planet Claire Since: Jan, 2001
Responsible adult
#174: Sep 22nd 2011 at 11:35:00 PM

Just ask if a fellow contestant is willing to read. I did, and it's worked great for me so far.

"Proto-Indo-European makes the damnedest words related. It's great. It's the Kevin Bacon of etymology." ~Madrugada
Kino Since: Aug, 2010 Relationship Status: Californicating

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