Izumi Ibara, the Blessed Sniper

Oooh, I didn't think about that!

Part 14 is up. I hope I explained how necromancy works in my setting right...

Good as usual.

Keep 'em comming...

Good system by the way...

Ve cut off ze head, und ze body vill die...

So, that'd make them sort of like Ghouls, in the practical sense? I'm guessing they don't count as youkai, which'll be good for your protagonist, what with the kill-count being what it is.

Part 15 is up. This chapter is so dark, I've scared myself. I might go on a hiatus, because I might time to figure out where to go from here.

edited 22nd Aug '11 8:42:29 PM by EnglishMajor

Good as usual...

As long as you come back is a hiatus perfectly acceptable...

That's not what danse macabre actually means...

Anyway, another good chapter. It felt a bit rushed towards the end - Izumi's Unstoppable Rage could have used a bit more fleshing out, making it just as terrifying as it should have been.

Part 16 is up. Fun fact: I was inspired by the Batman Animated Series episode "Heart of Ice".

I know it's rushed, but I wanted to keep a schedule of sorts. 3 chapters or one act per week. fast enough to hopefully get this thing finished before school starts in late September. I can then go to editing in the middle of classes. So yeah; it's rushed, but it's rushed for a purpose.

Thanks for reading.

Good as usual...

Redicilously how easy some people are to seduce.

A cool story, by the way...

Ah, a yuki-onna. Pretty soon you'll have the complete set!

Part 17 is now up. Haruhi stops running and the two prepare for the culling. I hope this doesn't feel rushed. I tried my best to resolve all of the immediate issues within a chapter, but I'm rather unsure I did it well. Middle acts can be so tedious sometimes...

edited 27th Aug '11 11:21:36 PM by EnglishMajor

Good... as usual..., and Simo Häyhä finally get a honorary mention...

Well, she needed a "vaccation" after last time...

Akira, I have just one thing to say to you "Hakka Pälle!!!"

And to Izumi... "Valkoinen Kuolema'".

edited 28th Aug '11 4:26:14 AM by TheBorderPrince

Part 18 is up. You know, if all turns out, I'll have a book on my hands

Interesting, and good...